Majora's Mask is a mysterious artifact. When it was found in Ponyville, horrible results happened. Majora is back, and attempting to destroy Equestria. Can the Mane 6 stop him before the ill fate?
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i swear to god, Majora is goddamn slenderman
WHERE EVER I GO HE'S THERE
Majora attempted to crash the moon into Termina not Hyrule
looks delicious
1686632 Okay, I'll fix that later. Thanks.
Will Link have his masks by any chance?
1692165 Yes, he will.
Sorry there hasn't been a new chapter, I have the cursed writer's block.
Okay, that's much better. I wrote another chapter.
Majora's plan: smash the moon into Equestria because why not?
You'd think the immortal princess that controls the moon would have an opinion on this.
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Now if I were clever, I'd have an image that mixes the face of the moon from MM with the mare in the moon, But I'm not clever and know better than to try making such a thing.
1712050 While he was in the castle, he knocked Luna out. I may not have clarified that.
Honestly, that made me crack up the first time I read it. XD
Okay, who disliked this?
I love you, but the chapters are short and kind of boring.
Also it should be the Elements of chaos :D
@KlutzJellyfish: Hey, I'm new at this. :P
@spartanyoshi90: You'll see a bit about that in this next chapter.
Hold on. PLOT HOLE
You said Luna was knocked out to explain why the moon could freely be brought down. And Twilight was knocked out. HOWEVER, with Luna being all powerful, she certainly would've gotten back up before Twilight did. Plus, is she gonna be knocked out for the entire fic? All the other things I can accept as fine, but this is kinda... IDK. I'm not being OCD, just something I noticed that sticks out like a sore thumb. Plus, you can't just "Knock out" Luna and celestia. They're..while Majora is powerful, and maybe he would've won against one of them, against TWO of them? Nonono.
Other than that, not too bad. Keep in mind this is all constructive.
1795145 A few points:
And besides, he's not going to explain everything to the ponies.
I never said Majora knocked them out at the same time. Also, he took full control of them while they were knocked out so they stay knocked out. He's not going to use them against the ponies, he wants to have a bit of fun first
Strangely, my longest chapter has exactly 500 words.
There it is, fellows! The story is officially finished! I hope y'all enjoyed it!
soo... why didn't Luna just stop the moon from falling?
M-majora in ... P-ponyville?
OH SHIT!
1808055 She just woke up a few minutes before they rescued the ponies. She doesn't instantly regain all of her energy.
Also, even she couldn't counter the chaos energy from the moon.
AWESOME!
However, it would've been even better if you described the defeat of the other bosses. Didn't I just tell you to use more detail? XD
Anyway, maybe once you become a better writer, you could come back and redo this. I see a lot of potential for something like this.
I'll read "tranced" later.
i thought they were the elements of death....
YOU SHOULDNT HAVE DONE THAT.
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I used to be an adventrurer like you... Until I took an arrow in the eye.
Old habits die hard...
Alicorn guards don't exist... At least that is my understanding.
2800540 My point exactly.
Still, this is a cool idea.
Wow... fail. Majora never revealed its... oh, sorry. I'll save you the lecture about how Majora was careful in reveling it's sentience and it's plan to destroy Termina. Sorry, this is sounding like flaming, I'll stop.
4027545 Ha! Skyrim joke! It's so predictable it's funny.
Majora's Incarnation is a riot! Moon-walking to pace? That's Hilarious! You should have had him do the kick-dance and ballerina while he was at it.
Wow, still the bow and arrow? He could've freaking ended it right there! Nail the sucker with sword beams, Link! Sorry, just... I have my own ideas. I really think this story is fun, though.
1807872 This was fun. A short, interesting read that I actually liked. It was fun in a kind of Pinkie Pie nonsensical way. Look forward to finding another on of your stories.