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This reminds me of a certain scene in a certain RP...( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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*Nods*
Ah, so this is the story that you were talking about. Will read tomorrow, as I'm currently in a conundrum with my story. I'll fav anyways though
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Good luck with your story, and thank you!
Just read it. And... damn, that was hot. Really though, I was oblivious to the fact that heat affected other mares. I learned something. Though, next chapter you can have more exposition and explain the circumstances of the two ponies relationships. I'm curious what Blue mean't when she said she won't leave her again. Other than that, it's good.
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I might explain their relationship a little more in the future. Also, what part of the story going you thinking that 'heat affected other mares'?
Thank you for your review!
Oh, that was totaly hot. I barely see filly fooling that is so arousing.
I can't wait for more.
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Why thank you! This fic came from an RP btw. Drove me half-crazy trying to convert it into a story. I still think there are some mistakes in there still.
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I noticed some, but it weren´t many. I actually started to turn an RP into a story as well, but I haven´t continued for months.
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You know how a good rp goes right? You'll want to keep the original feel of the rp without messing with it too much, but you'll also want to improve it. On top of that, you want to make your rp partner happy with the result, and it's much more difficult when they say that they don't care what happens and then come back and change something because they didn't like what you did.
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I know how it feels. In my story I just changed it into third person and added tiny bits to make it look like a proper story, but not too much that it still based mainly on the RP.
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Yup. Having it follow too closely to the rp will give the structure a strange revolving effect, like two people are taking turns writing the story. Which is basically what an rp is, but the problem here is that the story doesn't come off as a consistent piece of fiction.
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Yeah, it really depends on little details if the story looked like a better RP or a proper story.
Simply lovely. ^^ just how I remembered writing it with you.
True there are some errors, and I can see how it's partially my fault, since I forgot to check in as editor... But overall. It was just a smexy as it was before. Great conversion.
sooo the heck is this about?....
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*Snuggle*
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It's a story. About two ponies. And some stuff happens.
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*snuggle* ^^
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:3
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Aww.. Bunnies
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You're the right one.
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.. I'm the right what?
Oh right.. tired brain. hehe..
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Yea, it is pretty late.
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'Tis,
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So, how are you? How was your Christmas and/or parties?
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I am good, thank's for asking, yourself?
And nothing spectacular... really no different from any other day, got a few games off of Steam but that's really it...
Edit: I actually am going to sleep now. Have a good night. ^^
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Good night.
I went to family parties and a friends party, and watched about 4 movies during the past few days. Not too many gifts, but I didn't mind. Also, my cousin liked the Spike I gave her.
3684348 I like your story, when is next chapter?