Equestria is a world free of hardship and worries and almost completely untouched by war. Khorne, Chaos god of Bloodshed and Slaughter, disapproves with the peace of this world and decides to do some "divine intervention". With the (unwanted) aid of Tzeentch, Chaos god of Change and Sorcery, Khorne will bring the horrors of war to Equestria. Can a newcomer save this world and the many souls that inhabit it, or will it become yet another casualty to the Dark Gods?
Authors Note: Betcha you guys didn't see this one coming, didja? (cackles evilly)
Although I originaly wrote this fanfic for fanfiction.net half a year ago, I decided to revise it and then "attempt" to post it here. I should also note that this is my FIRST fanfic, so please, please, please, PLEASE tell me how I can possibly improve on this. Updates will take time, unfortunately, but I do plan to finish this, for better or worse. I don't try to think myself as good a writer as kkat (who wrote Fallout: Equestria) but I do hope to improve myself to be at least half as good as him. First chapter is way short but second one is much longer. Also, a message to Roadpony the Loud: I in no way, shape, or form, wished to steal your idea. Great minds just think alike, I guess. Personally, I think you tell the story better than I do.
wait how'd war hammer get in my ponies? CREEEEEEEED!!
(I don't know if I got the meme right :3)
This isn't bad i quite like this story some of me is wondering who the hell is Trevor but it wouldn't surprise me if he happens to be the God Emperor or some very important person in the Imperium it would be pretty awesome to see him adorn some gold space marine armor with the halo and everything and pwn some daemons with a demon hammer
This is the first 40k crossover I have read which doesn't suck! I really look forward to reading more of this story.
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That probably won't happen, but I promise you that something just as epic will.
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I was really surprised to find out that the being that shares Trevor's body was Kaela Mensha Khain as I thought that Trevor was just a Radical Inquisitor with a relationship with a being similar to what Eisenhorn and Cherubael had in the Eisenhorn books, but I don't think that is the case as Cherubael and Khain are vastly different in power as Khain is a god, albeit a broken one. I'm also curious as to how Khain is able to inhabit Trevor since I always thought that an Eldar had to be an Avatar to be able to summon him and the fact that the Eldar would disappear (most likely killed) and the Avatar would be a huge being of fire and Trevor is neither an Eldar or dead so the only idea I have no sound ideas on how their relationship works. I'm hoping to see more as this really intrigues me.
damn I cant wait to see the battle i have a awesome time imagining Trevor in Space Marine Armor blasting the Hell Hounds away with a Plasma Gun or
Bolter and slamming their bodies in with the swift death that comes with a Daemon Hammer
Heh, almost as soon as I put my post up this chapter appeared and answered a lot of my questions, the only one remaining about Trevor is how he can withstand the shard. Though the description of Pinkie Pie's abilities makes me think of the way Orks powers work (Belief) and that is interesting indeed.
The only real problem with this story is very minor in that the wrong spelling is used though this is probably just auto-correct and is to be expected in long chapters.
"Trevor looked down at his modest belongings which consisted of blue work jeans, black industry boots and a white t-shirt, all of which looked worn from travel."
I'm not sure blue work jeans, black industry books, and white t-shirts exist anymore.
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He's an inter-universal traveler and the Imperium wasn't the place he just traveled from. I guess I should have clarified that
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A valid question my friend
, one that will be answered in due time.
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!
MILK FOR THE KHORNE FLAKES!
....awesome fic :D !
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Keep up the good work my good sir
Agreed. Keep up your good work. I must ask, is Trevor an OC or is he Warhammer cannon? I'm only vaguely familiar with Warhammer 40K (played both Dawn of War games and mindlessly searched through the W40K wiki for a fews hours back in the day)
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He's an OC
Cannot wait to read more from you!
I figured Trevor was an OC even though I practically know jack shit about Warhammer40k. He just seemed out of place when they mentioned he has jeans, white shirt and black boots, I thought he looked like a psyker without all the enhancements and what not.
ahem BLOOD FO DA BLOOD GOD!
You know, you don't need to describe the appearances of the mane six. We know what they look like. Same for trixie.
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On this site I don't, but I also put this story on Fanfiction.net where it's possible that people have never seen FIM. I decided to describe them, just in case.
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Milk for the Khorne flakes. . .
lololololololololol thats amazing.109737
Hmmmm... An eldar god with a human, chaos gods taking over Diamond dogs, and Pinkie Pie. MOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRR
Yes
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fucking christ on a cookie