I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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YES!
Been looking forward to this for the better part of two weeks.
Oh hell yes this story is up!
Now to buy a shit ton of brain bleach by the time this story is over
And tissues!
I want to give this a try, but then I look at the tags and the fact that this is the final story in a series.
Sell your fish to me, writer, and I'll read through your first fanfic, and all the preceding ones, up to this.
I had a feeling Fancypants would go after Silver.
1488364 It was only a matter of time
What will Fancy do? So many possibilities and will he be even more upset that Rarity did this to stop his revenge on the trollop that kicked him? I have a feeling his victory needs to be whole and complete.
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I think Fancy will be glad he could get Silver as one of his personal foals for free, rather than paying Rarity for her.
Just as I'd like it to be.
*Applauds* Oh man what a story. What a wonderful story. Thanks and I can't wait for more. Monday's will be 20% cooler now that this story is up.
I'm surprised that it took several months for Fancy to find Spoon, considering that she didn't move far away from where she was dropped and that his minions knew that place(and I'm pretty sure that they were his minions and not usual cabbie, as latter would hesitate to leave filly in such dangerous place)
Also, that tags!
> [Romance]
Oh boy. This gonna be good.
I think you meant during the day.
Well, I'm glad to see this is back underway.
AWWW YYYEWEEAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!! MORE AWESOME!
Yay finaly the story of debaucery and the dark underbelly of Equestria is here.
And far better then my never released mature fic:
"Rape Stove: The Stove that Rapes Ponies"
To bad Pip isn't in this any more. Oh well maybe Fond Wish will be the one to give the male perspective.
But what does Fancy want her for now? to take her in as his surrogate foal, or to punish her for humiliating him at the gathering?
Plenty of set up for later plot points, a heart felt seperation, clop that lands on the border between the erotic and the obscene?
All signs point to HamGravy being back on the case.
More now
i hate to jump to conclusions and such, but with this author i just can't help myself. couldn't help but notice fluttershy's odd behavior in how she seems to only keep her animals in mind. could there be a future project on this? sure another sad story would break my heart but damn it this is just too entertaining to pass up!
OH MY GOD YESSSS FINALLYYYYY
Holy...crap. So I log into FimFiction to find I've gotten nearly a hundred notifications in the two days since this was published! Normally in that timeframe I'd get like fifteen or so. I am blown away by your enthusiasm, everyone. I hope I can live up to it.
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You're right. I fixed the typo, thanks for catching it!
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I prefer poultry to fish, personally. But Scootaloo isn't in this story.
I'm not very good at promoting myself, (it's embarrassing! ) so all I will say is, if this is your cup of tea, I invite you to give Rarity's Garden a try. It's not very long, and should give you a feel for what you are in for. It's basically a prelude to the main series. The story reading order for the series is on my user page.
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Part of the "agreement" Rarity mentions having with the drivers in Twisted Chapter 14 is that she bought their silence, ensuring that Fancy wouldn't hear anything about her activities. Less out of concern for Silver and more because Rarity doesn't want to give Fancy the satisfaction. In retrospect, I should have made this more clear; I left far too much to be inferred. Thanks for pointing it out.
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You never know! After this series I think I am done with long-form MLP stories for a while (I want to devote time to writing original fiction) but I will probably revisit this universe every now and then. So it's entirely possible that I might pay Fluttershy a visit.
That's all in the future, though! This story's just getting started!
1502469 Not a problem. Always willing to lend a helping hoof, just as any aspiring author would.
1502469 I took the time. I read them all. And I have to say: I am very, very impressed.
Very impressed.
I myself cared little for the clop and the gore and the etcs. But what you were able to demonstrate was emotion. Raw emotion through text. Something I have seldom seen...
Sorry if this next question sounds offensive, but I have to ask it:
Did this series start with a trollfic and, like, evolved into something bigger?
If not, would you care to tell me how this came to be? I really am amazed.
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Well, thank you! Glad to see I won you over. It's good to see that these stories can appeal to people who aren't interested in the clop aspect, especially now that the sex has become secondary to the plot and character development.
Essentially, yes! I wrote a whole explanation for you, but it ended up being long as hell, so I turned it into a blog post instead. Go here to read it.
I need more
Celestia and Luna should go to this neighborhood to see how the Circle isn't needed to prevent an overabundance on Harmony.
> ---Chapter One: Scarflank ---
Please use the [center] tag
>condemned buildings, filthy streets and broken windows
There should be a comma between "streets" and "and"
>“Oh!....oh...” said Wish
An ellipsis has three dots, not four. Also, there should be one space after each ellipsis (unless you are closing a quote).
>The satchel of cookies dropped to the ground as Spike embraced his friend
I noticed that you did not say what Spike did with the cookies after dropping them
>She got to her hooves
Double space
Hell yes, I'm hooked already.
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I have a feeling you didn't read the storys leading up to this...
do it now
“Nothing! That's the beauty part! She just stays in her alleyway,
Canterlot were dull somehow dull and lifeless here.
Noticed what I assume is a mistake.