I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
Page generated in 0.025 seconds
Total duration
597 users online
1,185,410 hits today, 2,139,894 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
That was brilliant
Commence read.
Pinkie...
Awesome chapter!
I noticed one typo 'pwn' instead of own.
Still love where this is going!
All my feels for Pinkie Pie... Darnit! Quit making me like other ponies more than my favorite pony! ( btw)
After each chapter I keep saying to myself, "Please oh please oh PLEASE have a happy ending!" Especially after that letter! I nearly broke down right then and there. I hope Pinkie gets her friend back.
"It was becoming as hard to look at her pwn reflection as it was to look at the dolls."
Just wanted to specify where the typo was...
ANYWAY great chapter, just, did anyone else not see the unexpected clop part coming? And I thought this would have been an entirely story driven chapter (at least most of it was.)
1993289 Oh you clever bastard...
Rule 63 is canon, Pinkie confirmed for best friend, great chapter!
Damn,.... why can't i "like" it again
It looks like Silver Spoon is falling back into her old habits.
I know she likes pain but still, I feel really bad for her.
I really can't tell if this will have a happy ending or not.
I came for the porn and got wrapped up in the story.
Just an obligatory statement there.
But seriously, this is great.
1999268
2000032
2002619
Thanks for the typo notes, everyone. "Pwn" (one of my least favorite non-words) is gone. And Futa fans will be sad to know that I fixed the "he" typo as well, so Silver no longer has a penis.
Tha damn ending.
2007222
Question: Why do you have all that white space at the end of this chapter? Just a formatting thing that happened?
2008043
I have no idea, but I guess it's some formatting thing on FimFiction's side. I don't know why it's been doing that lately. I've just been pasting the chapters from Word like I always have.
Anyway, I went and fixed it in all the previous chapters it turned up in. This way that darn [NEXT] box won't sneak up on people.
I understand at this point in the story that Sweetie Belle and Rarity's Parents are dead, and Sweetie Belle and Rarity live together alone.
But does Sweetie Belle remember anything about her parents? It's clear that Rarity hated their parents (Rarity's Garden) but does Sweetie Belle remember Rarity as the only family she has ever known?
If so this might make the fact Sweetie is trying to protect Rarity from the murder of Silver Spoon Allegation more believable.
2011126
This will be expanded on slightly in the story, but no, Sweetie hasn't ever had any parental figure beside Rarity. She's well aware that what her sister does to her is not normal family behavior, but she's never known anything else.
Okay
Coveluted method at a happy ending.
During the first discord attack, rarity was revived by a memory spell. What if said spell brought back repressed memories and turned rarity molesty.
If Rarity was made int the victim here, a horrible result of upbringing. Then applejack and twilight might feel better with her.
That or just make this sad as all hell... Or do something better...
Cant wait for more.
Subtle touch there, how he calls himself a stallion.
You mean Trottingham?
Should be "whom I love".
Should be "sat up and looked at" or "sat up, looking at".
2020104
Thanks for the notes! I went back and made some corrections based on your suggestions. A few (though certainly not most) uses of improper grammar are intentional, though, like some of the ones found in dialog (eg, Pinkie using "whom" correctly just doesn't sound like authentic voice.)
Alternate universe. Rarity's family life was very different in this world.
Pinkie's letter sounded so sweet, I shed a tear.
wow.... you never thought a fanfic could actually make me feel all these emotions....
oh pinkie pie....
Holy shit, Pinkie's letter hit me like a freight train to the feels.
What a letter
I think Pinkie Pie also is very disappointed in Rarity. She just can't bring herself to see Rarity now but it's good she at least has hope for her still.
That was a very stupid move on Silver's part. She could have done a lot as an insider.
Also I would think those friends of Rarity would also chat about their daily lives in a more serious way.
I think the reason why Rarity would be perfect as the new face of the circle is that she has nothing to lose. The other mares all have careers that they would need to sacrifice but Rarity has already lost everything. The love of her sister is all she has left.