I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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These kids actually got a pet Unicorn.
Though I feel bad for Sweetie.
damn the dreams sound more like a nightmare, incest filled, cruel family and a bitch for making sweetie Belle watch her sister die.
A week is too long to wait.
"Vermillion was next. The young colt laughed as he entered Sweetie’s asshole, fucking her while his two sisters cheered him on. Unlike Shamrock, who had spoken to Sweetie in melodic, condescending tones (it seemed she took after her mother) Shamrock had been more loud, and viciously sarcastic."
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"Vermillion was next. The young colt laughed as he entered Sweetie’s asshole, fucking her while his two sisters cheered him on. Unlike Shamrock, who had spoken to Sweetie in melodic, condescending tones (it seemed she took after her mother) Vermillion had been more loud, and viciously sarcastic.
lol you should know better ham :P
A depressing song for a depressing chapter...
Excellent work again, ham!
Wow... I need a moment .... okay .. ... ..
That was pretty crazy, I knew that the Dream Family was depraved but DAMN I feel really bad now that I was looking forwards to the chapter where the Dream Children met Sweetie Belle. Most authors just say, the villians are "evil, depraved, and disgusting". But don't explain how and I keep saying, "Show, don't just tell". But that.. ... Whoa.
Still excellent writing I really want to see how this story ends. I really hope Sweetie Belle doesn't have to return to being the Puppy of the Dream Family. No one deserves that! But I'm afraid to know how you got your inspiration for this chapter, how you came up with such low down characters, and what inspired such graphic depictions of depravity.
I just .. .. damn. ..why.. how?
Silly dream family. Don't they know that Sweetie Belle is best pony?
This was the best so far! Keep it up!
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Ack, you're right, I totally missed that. It's fixed now, thanks!
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Seriously, I don't think I was specifically inspired by anything in particular. I just have a weird imagination, and an unusually high threshold for all manner of sexual strangeness (in fiction, just so we're clear.) I kind of let the characters take the wheel on this one, too. I'll go more into detail about it in the author's notes, which will be out in a day or two.
I do remember you were pretty eager for us to get to the Dreams. Don't feel bad; I like your enthusiasm, and besides, you didn't know how it would end up. Hell, even I didn't know how far it would go when I began writing it.
Dun dun dun.... Also that was so hot I came. Loving it!
I look forward to more!
I expected the violence, the incest, the gang rape, and the bondage, that was all to be expected.
But the part where Sweetie had to eat the bowl of oats full of the servants semen and the urine of the Dream Family that was pushing the limit!
But still great writing, I can't believe that Little Ponies would be so cruel!.
This was awesomely cruel as always. But, would really like to see the utter WORST that you can afford to think. I bet that no one will resist, not even Regidar
2151213 lol ham you know ill be making sure your work is nothing short of perfect
Very nice chapter (and by nice I mean disgusting)! Each update is well worth the wait and gives me something to look forward to in the workweek. Also, I sence a monstrous collision of overarching plotlines in the next one or two chapters; I feel like a recent vegan's colon!
Possibly the best chapter of this arc. I really want Indigo to get the stuffing knocked out of her more so than before! Poor Sweetie. As always I hope for my darling twisted Rarity to somehow come out a winner.
first of all,i must correct the only flaw i was able to notice just because. during the part in which periwinkle has sweetie bell this statement was said: “Come on, Verm, know how she is,".
as for the other thing i wanted to say, quite a couple of chapters back i said i didn't really read this story for any spec of clop, or more specifically sex scenes, anymore. though strangely, i was kinda missing it. this chapter was quite refreshing in that aspect.
NO! STOP!! But I can't... STOP MAKING ME THINK PERIWINKLE IS JUST SO DARN ADORABLE!!!!
that youngest child is by far the most dangerous. Kindness is one of the most effective ways to break someone's resolve and can be far more devastating than cruelty.
one thing I wasn't expecting though was her later cruelty. I kind of expected she would treat Sweetie Bell like a puppy the way any little girl would. After all she's a puppy, not a slave. I would expect that 10 year old to be very excited to have a puppy for her to pamper. That she would do things like hug SB, brush her fur, play fetch all that kind of stuff. She might even put her in silly clothes like some little girls do with their dogs. I would have really liked to see some of that stuff. Maybe it's just because I love pet-play so much but I would really love to see it expanded.
As well I am surprised that a filly so young would know all those torture techniques. I wonder if her mother is instructing her in it.
That family though is just insane. The previous ones were sick but this is just plain insane. Those children need help.
If they care about the magical talent of their foals, shouldn’t they be very selective about finding the most magical stallions?