I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Oh shit.
Commence read.
Now how will Twilight interpret the theory of balance?
in the begining of this one. i recognize this. is this the Shub-Niggurath mythos?
Luna's got a plan...
I NEED TO KNOW. WHAT IS IN. THAT LETTER. And Luna bout to kick some flank oh shiiiit.
When this story ends it is going to be the most awesome and terrible thing at the same time. Good job!
Waiting for Mondays is HELL
I want it to be next Monday NOW
ARRGHHHHH
CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER WEEK!!!!!!
damn, i was i could like this again. but on a more serious note, within the first third of the story i found a part of a sentence that seems "off". this is it: "Even though he sensed that what waited him there". sorry i couldn't be more specific about the location and being a grammar nazi but i can't help myself. it must be addressed.
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Oh believe me, I'm quite the Grammar Nazi myself. But clearly not a very good one, since I tend to miss so many of my own mistakes. Thanks for pointing this one out! I edited it to sound a bit less awkward.
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CANDY.
(It's not really candy.)
As the "next" teaser indicated, you'll find out on Monday!
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No intentionally, but I've read enough Lovecraft that it may have crept in there without me intending it to!
I have been following this story since chapter one was first posted. I have to say I am very impressed.
I don't know how Sweetie Belle will be able to escape the Dream family!?
Spooky
Great chapter
. Oh and how will pip cope with intemacy in the future? Will he avoid it, embrace it, go loony?
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Lasting psychological scars, eh? Let me put it this way: Someday soon, Fluttershy is going to mention to Pip how she would like to be a tree, and Pip will run away screaming.
A nightmare night to remember!
Luna: Pip! We have to ward them off! We need to go deeper!
Pip: But there's only blank subconscious down there! We might never get out!
Luna: We have to try it, it's the only way.
Pip: Noooooooooo!
*BWAAAHH*
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I hope this has a happy ending. I really hope this has a happy ending.
1985690 Did you read Lavenci's follow-up series? You can piece alot of the scenarios in those stories to predict the outcome of this one.
1985690
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Actually, these stories no longer follow the same continuity. They started out that way, but at some point we decided that checking up on each others' work to keep things consistent was holding everyone back. What happens in Silver Sky isn't reflected in Lavenci's stuff (especially since he doesn't know how Silver Sky ends. I haven't told anyone. )
There's some awkward phrasing here. It seems to imply that the sun appears larger than the moon. You should reorder the sentences something like this:
The moon was expanding. It was getting brighter as well, blindingly so, until it looked like a miniature sun.
I'm really confused here, mostly because "she" seems to be referring to multiple ponies.
Not sure why, but the Author's notes section links to chapter 10, insted of the chapter 12 blog.
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Huh. Shows how much attention I was paying that day. I fixed it, thanks for letting me know!
The colt could sense that what awaited him there