I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Well that was a nice encouraging conversation with Twilight.
The Applejack sequence started off a bit surprising.
Uuuuh, My friend, you are a master in leaving cliffhangers!
Now that's just evil. Pushing back the date like that then leaving us with this....
“You’ve been deceived,” Indigo said. “There’s a pony here tonight who you shouldn’t have trusted.”
Really Indigo, just ONE pony Fancy should not have trusted? JUST ONE!
Still very well-written. The Applejack section came as a surprise.
I know we are in the final stretch so I'll make an estimate for how many chapters to completion.
1 more chapter for Fancy meeting Rarity and Silver Liberating the Gallery
1 more chapter for Fancy being enraged at being betrayed and for a final show down
1 more chapter for a final defeat of the villains and a bittersweet ending
1-2 epilouges
That estimates Silver Sky to be 23-24 chapters in total. Or 53% longer than Twisted!
Typo. Speaking of teasing, you like to do that:
spoiling someone's death without actually showing it in the exact chapter? That's crueler than running The Circle.
2229029 Dragons and Princesses also can prolong the story.
I was prepared to cry my eyes out after that Introduction to the chapter. You are evil. This story is amazing. That is all.
Omg xD
Not quite as tense as the last chapter but still - Omg
Who do they now know about? XD
Damnit!
We have to wait a whole week for the next one D:
Thanks :)
cliffhangers!
Half of me wants this thing done, half of me will cry when it is.
Just too awsome for words.
Dammit, this is like watching a Shonen anime.. Compelling for the same reasons but friggin' A is it unsatisfying
Big, big teases for this episode, then we get one important event (twilight reunited with spoon) and a stinger cliffhanger, with a massive out of nowhere flashback taking up the majority of the chapter.
I suppose we should be grateful to have not had an extended scene of circle members charging up their rape levels.
Anything that I could add I've already said in previous chapters. Keep up the great work!
as daring do says best.
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Typo fixed. Thanks! Also:
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The little prologue at the start is meant to introduce the whole arc, not just this chapter, much like the similar prologue at the start of chapter one introduced the story itself. But it looks like I failed to make that clear, so I can see in retrospect how it comes off as kind of a tease to not resolve the death thing in the same chapter. Sorry if it annoyed anyone. But thanks so much for the critique!
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Believe me, I know the feeling. I'm both looking forward to the end and dreading it horribly.
Oh, well, more reason to get drunk at the wrap party.
>>Basically everyone
I know, right? I have too much fun with them. At least now that almost everyone's in the same place, the resolutions will come quicker. I've been looking back over the story so far and I'm horrified at how many times I would leave a pony hanging, only to shift to a completely different subplot the following chapter and not resolve the cliffhanger for two or three weeks. Not doing that again.
grammar nazi time. this week, i was only to find a single letter error, but an error is an error.
during the scene(or slightly after) in which applejack spoke to silver spoon, this statement was made. "They stopped teasing Apple Bloom and began to tease Featherweight i her place,".
omg, now i'm just being too picky, but that poor word is missing 50% of itself and must be fixed.
2229029 You forgot that Spike likes Twist, who's been raped often, and Spike is coming with a very large dragon, and emotions(from the shows base) seem to be what makes a dragon grow. Needless to say, interested in how that plays out.
DAMN CLIFFHANGING!
dammit hammy, i want to know now!
After this is all done im going to find a very sappy fluffy cmc story.
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And I'm going to find a Diamond Tiara/Silver Spoon fanfic that doesn't end in tears!
*crickets*
Is that meant to be YOUR, or is that part of the insult.
This chapter has been recorded, it's going live on Pony.Tube and Odysee.com on Sunday. But unfortunately my Youtube Channel got a strike and I'm not allowed to upload there for a week.
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It is indeed meant to be "your." Amazing that I didn't catch that after all this time. Thanks for noticing it! It's fixed now.