I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Awesome update!
I love that we are hearing more about Rarity, and the way you have integrated parts of the show into it.
Thank you
best story ever
Into the nightmare, what Luna will find will probably haunt her for a long time.
I almost died laughing at this.
This is intense. I have no appropriate words.
Commence read.
Guess it finally settles in for Rarity.
And Luna with the bombshell of responsibility.
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Another chapter with no reading of Pinkie's Letter? Stop teasing us.
And here I thought it would be a GOOD thing to replace Fancypants.
WTF was I thinking?!?!
I doubt that many people are even in this story for the smut anymore. This is the best planned out story that I've seen on this site. The circle is gonna have some trouble now that two of the three most powerful ponies in Equestria are now collaborating.
holy shit!!...upcoming shitstorm!!
Every time,
Every time you have me right at the edge of my seat, and every time you cut off just before ive had my fill.
Part of me koves you
Part of me hates you
Part of me envies your talent
But most of me just wants more
Well done.
I quote the one above me.
Ham Gravy you are a sick genius , i envy your talent and i'm waiting for next monday!!
Every time I go online I check this stories updates and read them BEFORE I check replies to my comments.
For me, that says loads.
Just when I mentioned Pippsy ( (c) Gavalanche) not appearing last week.... guess I forgot about Luna's connection to him, and odd that her relation to him is completely innocent when it was much more suggestive in the show, at least to me. Anyway, to the point: did you plan Luna's dreamwalking abilities before the Sleepless in Ponyville episode? It's one of those (probably the only one) headcanon things of mine that actually came true in the show! I am just curious how the story would have gone if you planned is somehow else.
Good job providing a credible motivation to the rebellious Circle members, and it fits your Fancy's personality very nicely as well.
You handle multiple story threads wonderfully.
Also, obligatory "Maref*cker you leave me at the edge of my seat every week!" to end this post.
And then Rarity broke into a spontaneous, incredibly well choreographed song with music coming from nowhere.
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I'm going to talk about this a bit more in next week's notes, but believe it or not, the Luna dreamwalking thing was just a really wonderful coincidence! I had a completely different plan for Pip and his nightmares, but then Sleepless in Ponyville aired and I was floored by how perfectly that new bit of canon would work for my story.
Question-
Can I write a story starring Dewdrop Dreams?
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Certainly! I'm flattered you would want to write a story based on one of my fucked up concepts.
All I ask is that you include a link back to my user page in the description and text.
Speaking of the Dream kids...yeah, we're going to be seeing more of them pretty soon. It's gonna be that special kind of weird.
I loved this story so much I included a foalnapping Fancy Pants into my Kingdom hearts Black Crusade campaign. He is actually attempting to 'collect' the main heroes(the PC's), which 1 of them is currently possessed with the predator(ultimate embodiment of love in marvel comics), he also wants to collect Carke (Prophet of Murtia of the Dancing Flame, Herald to the Kingdom of Light/Kingdom of Benny/Disney Castle, Chief Advisor to King Benny (from Scott Pilgrim universe). There's no way he could possibly control him, so he is going to anyway In the group to be taken in by Fancy Pants, we have a 1990's comic book character from Comix Zone by the name of Sketch, an Evangelion manufactured pilot by the name of "Gary", Taokaka from the blazblue universe(She is the one with the predator entity in her and is extremely perverted), Leon and Dante (a Digimon trainer and his Renamon "partner" who are a bit closer than the other players know) and recently Courier Six from the New Vegas area by the name of Kayle, Ravager (a doll child from the cthulhu mythos, whom Triage found herself surprisingly attracted to), and Surprise (a pegasi pony), vouched for Fancy Pants being a decent Stallion, and had heard good things from Rarity about them. The Mane 6 were present at a large party, and Fancy Pants brought the PC's over to talk them into it, in FRONT of the mane six, celestia and Luna. Assuredly, knowing he would be successful.
Oh, and they are currently on the Fallout: Equestria universe, saving foals that were the "favorite" of a supermutant pony "1st generation super mutant" named "The Master", she is one of those who lost her mind. The first thing she did was start humping the leg of Carke, causing him to be weirded the F*** out, and having one of the other slaves tie her up. She also had stated when Carke used magic (he is human but a Wizard from the D&D universe) "Oh no, he is a human, he doesn't have a regular horn up top, he has a lower horn!"
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Should be "And whom".
Should be "one of whom".
That comma should be a semicolon.
This is a little nitpicky, but the official title is Keeper, not Bearer.
Sweetie Belle doesn't live with Rarity; Sisterhooves Social established that Sweetie Belle lives with their parents.
You missed the F in "for this" and the space in "now… I".
All I could think was, "Oh shit, shots fired!"
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From the tags we know this is as AU. And from the events in "Rarity's Garden" I think we can safely surmise that their parents are no longer in the picture.
Which is not to say that they're dead. No, given Rarity's mental state at the end of the childhood scenes of the first story (and through the rest of the stories, for that matter), I'm picturing their father in a hospital somewhere, living in an unending nightmare that puts Pip's to shame.