I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Awesome, as always! (Even when you do post at ungodly hours...)
A good chapter. Plenty of development. The Dreams are underestimating Sweetie.
Was there any specific reason for the persepctive change from third to first?
My guiltiest pleasure on the site.
er... you should be ashamed of yourself.
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I can hardly wait for Fancy Pants and Silver Spoon's talk~ Ah, I'm going in to withdrawal again...
this story is so depressing!!! i wanna rip my blackened, icy cold heart out of my chest and end the pain!!!
(P.S. WRITE MOAR)
Doooooode.... I can't wait to see what will happen when Twilight goes all out!
great chapter btw!
Commence read.
Poor Sweetie Belle. Just got downgraded and just has to keep on holding onto the faith of Twilight helping her. Though it seems like plans are going to get awkwardly messed up soon. At least Twilight is in Canterlot, that's good...right?
Only thing I could think of through the Sweetie scene was that it would serve Indigo right if Sweetie had a magic surge like Twilight and turned her whole family into cacti.
Awesome as always sir. I really wonder what excuse Spoon will get, or what is Triage pointing to with Rarity's trial under the Circle
""Oh yes, of course. Officially, of course, he has not been exiled. He was ‘granted an ambassadorship’ to the Great Swamp.”
“Ah yes, the Water Buffalo homeland. It’s seen better days, as I recall. One wonders what he must have said to upset his auntie enough to send him there.” I chuckle. "
That might not actually have been only a punishment. If the princesses expect Twilight to do something drastic, they might've decided to send their one family member involved as far away from the fallout as possible.
The plot thickens... Again.
I Love this story!
I really want to know how it ends!
But I dont want it to end.
Please tell me you are going to write another story after this.
I dont even care what its about, just as long as you write it. :)
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Sweetie's been off-page for so long, I thought she deserved a chapter where we really got into her head.
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Aw, shucks. I am indeed going to write another long story after this. It won't be pony-related, but people who have been following me will get a heads-up when it's ready to see the light of day.
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Sounds awesome :)
I look forward to it
Another Good Chapter.
How is Sweetie getting out of this one?
I have just a quick question. In the gathering there were three Dream Children, one colt and two fillies.
We know two of the Dream Children: Shamrock, and Vermillion. Who is the third Dream Child?
Is it DrewDrops? Or is that what Shamrock wanted to name her baby?
Keep up the good work
Will Sweetie Belle escape the grasp of the Dream Family?
Will Twilight Save the Gallery Foals?
Will Rarity over throw FancyPants?
Find out next week on an exciting new episode of . . . .
A Silver Sky: Four Little Ponies, AKA Foal Rape Pony Soap Opera Drama Story!
(Plays Theme Song) (Halestorm: Innocence)
This may seem off topic but I wonder how spike is doing, cause god knows he might make a suprise appearance.
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Dewdrop is Shamrock's baby. The third of Indigo's children is named Periwinkle Dream, though her name hasn't been mentioned in any chapter so far. Yep, I'm just going to stick with that named-after-their-colors thing with them. They're like the Power Rangers, if their robots combined to form incest.
Eventhough I find all of your characters interesting, my favorite character for this story would either be Sweetie Belle, Silver Spoon, or Rarity. They all have very serious character flaws so the fact they are my favorites disturbs me.
I have never been this facscinated with an authors OC's before. Usually OC's are two demisional, boring, or too perfect. But I find myself oddly drawn to almost all the Original Characters in this fiction.
Twenty is cool, Gaze is Badass, I am way more interested in the Dream Family than I ever should be, I think Triage is cool too, I even find the minor characters like Aurora, Peregrine, Fond Wish, Happy Tune, and other minor characters to be surprisingly engaging. I never thought I would find a story that made Crazy Foal Molesters and their victims actually interesting characters and not just two-demensional cut-outs. Keep up the good work.
Balls.... Now I have to wait.... That's what I get for power reading....
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I'm glad you like them! Actually, seeing all the OC's listed together like that is kind of surprising. I honestly didn't realize I'd created so many! Counting the Dreams individually you listed twelve of them, and that's not even including one-time walk-on characters like Postmark and everyone's new favorite background pony, Incompetent Prison Guard. I never kept a count of how many new ponies I'd come up with, but it's quite a lot!
Not that that's a bad thing. I think OC's are fine if they're created to help advance the plot of a story, and not just because the author wants to show off his new overpowered alicorn character (who is secretly Celestia's mother and Discord's twin brother and Pinkie Pie's daughter and Derpy's cat.)
So Blueblood got his ass sent into exile when Celestia knows for a fact that both Twilight and Luna are making full power plays against the Canterlot circle.
You clever bitch Tia.
with celestia helping the circle exist by maintaining it, one could argue that she is the true leader of it. almost makes you think that taking her down would be the true answer to beat the circle, and chrysalis almost accomplished this too.
that I could know, without a doubt, that she meant it,
Poor Sweetie Belle can't ever get a break (I'm also thinking of Secret Life of Rarity when I say that).