I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Yessss.... YES. (omgbloodlust)
Fancy Pants dying was kind of disappointing. It just didn't do anything for my murderboner, not enough blood and suffering.
Also, I'm starting to get this feeling that Celestia might not be an entirely nice pony. I don't know.
I knew it! Man I'm so glad you chose to go this way with Gaze. The build up for it was perfect. The only problem now is that I have to wait until next week for your next chapter.
this is gonna be good
For the love of god let the entire Dream family be the next in line for gaze's vendetta!!!
As much as Fancy deserved it... Having it be Gaze who ends him didn't sit well with me. Probably because I don't really care all that much about him. Little invested in that one.
So, is he getting torn apart by the crowd next? For all his teleporting, he can't fight all of them off. He's no Shining Armor.
Then all of a sudden, Call of Duty protagonist. In a good way.
FINALLY! The long-awaited death of Fancy!
Yay, Schadenfreude time.
Kinda missed an opportunity to have Gaze's entrance be really something and have him appear in a telefrag (like what Twilight did to the crusader's ball). Oh well, those cunts are still all gonna die.
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I think it is more that Celestia has finally realised the futility of trying to eradicate evil, only to have it come back again in an even more vile form.
It can't be gotten rid of, so she tried to contain it somewhere it will at least not be noticed.
I didn't mind Fancy's death. The fact that it was just so simple and quick, lacking any form of grandure would have been a great insult to him.
OH GOD, NOT GOOD! Hopefully he doesn't kill too many before he is stopped.
FUCK YES
I had a hunch that Twenty and Gaze sounded similar
And now the bodies are gonna drop and the circle is well and truly fucked >:D
Commence read.
That ending!
Gaze is even more of a badass than i thought he was.
I really wasn't expecting that >.<
Good job!
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I was trying to be facetious about Celestia adding brainwashing Gaze (and four of his predecessor) to the long list of things she has done that she shouldnae.
Up until now, she's mostly committed sins of omission. Not stamping out the pedophile ring, not telling her sister about what she's doing, not responding to Twilight's letters about Rarity, not brushing her teeth before bed. I think this is the first time she's actively picked someone out of the crowd and said, "hey, you there, guy, yeah. Fuck you."
It is starting to give me the slightest impression that this fanfic might be some kind of dark version of Equestria.
"It worked! I can't believe it actually worked!"
That is now my favorite line in the story. I love how this is turning out!
HE'S DEAD, HE'S DEAD HE'S DEAD!!!! Also
2375204 I completely agree, kill the Dreams
Twenty Twenty just made mah fuckin day lad!
Seriously, I want to see the circle burn for what it has done, and I can't even feel bad for Rarity because she started the story with her sister.
All I have to say is at the end of the day, I want to be standing there next to Twenty T, circle member blood on my hooves grinning, cause I'll have known it was a damn fine day.
Gaze: I am become death, the destroyer of worlds!
So... Sleeping is now out of the question
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH HOW CAN SO MUCH HAPPEN AND YET LEAVE ME HANGING FOR MOAAAAAR!?
Totally saw Twenty's 'turn' coming though. Didn't expect the Silent Knight bit, but I saw it coming~
Pleassssseeeeee let dream die
first, i shall consume with my grammar nazi tendencies. when gaze first captures silver spoon, i noticed twilight saying this: "SHE’S SETTING YOUR FREE!” and the second thing that confused me was when gaze puts than silver spoon, this statement was had: Silver Spoon drifted gently to the grown as Gaze’s horn lost its glow.
as for the story itself, i think i have a new favorite OC ever. first it was peregrine of this story, until we hear gaze's, or should i say twenty's story. i loved how put the audience into twenty's head when he was recruited as a silent knight, it made sympathizing with him so much better. in fact, i found myself laughing along with him. never had i been so in sync with a character in a story before. man i wish someone make a wallpaper of twenty. that would be grand.
First of, I once read the Four Little Foals as pure sick fun for me to laugh at during midnight.......as I read the rest of the chapters though you accidentally awesomed it.
Then I read this.
It's amazing how you made this into an awesome, dark, twisted story that I really REALLY enjoy!
Keep up the good work mate! Maybe I can draw some fanart if I have the time...
needs less commas
Aww, you killed Fancy :(
2375250 true most antagonist in call of duty get strangled to death
Oh no! I honestly didn't want Fancy to be killed at all. It seems that his ultimate doom would be to see all of his riches swiped away underneath him, and to live on in poverty. This was the direction that the story was going in, too. Shame. Also, I do not really believe that all of the circle members should be killed by Gaze since the story focuses on them vastly over that little soldier-boy. To be killed by Gaze would be such a meangless death for most of the antagonists, especially Rarity. Please don't kill them all now!
KA-FUCKING-BOOM
Damn, now I can finally comment after reading the fourth fic, and catching up to this current chapter!
Okay, this entire series has been a nail biting, emotional roller coaster, thrill and chill ride! I was literally pounding my pillow when I thought Rarity's and Silver's plans were going to fail! But then Twenty came in, like a boss, and killed Fancypants. Honestly I would've preferred his death to be a lot more slow, oh so very slow. But what can ya do.
Anyway, as much as I'm sure I'm going to Pony Hell for reading this, I must say you are doing a damn good job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Edit: Oh yeah, I also forgot...WHY AURORA, WWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYY!!!!!?
R.I.P Aurora
Things just got... Twenty percent cooler.
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I like the contrast with Aurora's death. She died surrounded by loving friends she was trying to save by giving up her own life.
Fancy died pretty much alone, killed by one of his 'disposable' underlings, after trying to save his hide from what was coming to him.
You really like playing with someone's morality...
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Well, wouldn't Fancy have a similar death to the one in the story if left to live? The only meaningful importance would be that he would know it will turn out that way. Fancy would never, however, be able to face that fact and force himself to live the rest of his life in denial. Am I the only one who would prefer this?
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You mean dying of natural causes due to old age? But I think it would be very different, it would take out all the active elements from it. Like I said, I like it in comparison, and I actually thought if he was going to die, it would be at the very end.
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what was your first clue?
What a thrilling twist.
and the reunion is next, yay.
I find Fancy's death satisfying actually. I'm all for torturing those who commit horrible crimes, but there's a line behind which the "eye for an eye" principle just stops working. I can't think of any way to punish him enough to make it comparable to the amount of pain he has caused. Anything will be too small of a punushment. It's so much more satisfying to just get rid of him completely.
Maybe there's Hell and he'll be tortured forever, but this world is better without him.
Ok, this is favorited. You have earned it. I don't even need to see the ending and I can tell this deserves all the favorites it has. Kudos, Hamgravy. Kudos.
I also take back what I said about Aurora, Twenty is my favorite OC.
Go and fuck yourself, old stallion. Or even chuj ci w oko, bo w dupę to przyjemność, skurwysynu, because English swears can't express all my feelings towards you...
4162251 "fuck you in the eye, because it is a pleasure in the ass, motherfucker,"?
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Sounds like the skullfucking of a lifetime right there.
"Like a powerful spell was cancelled or" (it has one l, actually)
With the exception of Twilight and Silver's bit to remind us of how hollow this victory is, one word sums up this chapter. Satisfaction.
Been so long I forgot this twist.