I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Twilight took that rather...well. Though she probably should tell someone where she is headed.
Guessing Silver is going to awaken at Fancy's residence due to the maid's spell.
Hope Twist is having some progress with her group.
Plus it looks like Sweetie Belle is finally to be heard from.
As always you did not disappoint the one-week wait
*about the chapter*
This is quite well done, indeed. Twi's reaction was someway restrained in my opinion, but it was someway comprehensible.
Balance... the concept is understandable for the goddesses, yet not understandable for the mortals. Is something that makes reflect.
Silver's self destruction is interesting...
Oh boy, I like the direction where it's going.
EEEE, I love this chapter, and it's giving me goosebumps just thinking about the next chapter
Great Chapter again. Things are about to get pretty exciting.
I'm glad we get to see Sweetie Belle again, we haven't heard anything from her since Indiago Dream took her from Ponyville.
I'm looking forwards to the civil war. However I still can't figure out how this story is going to turn out. So many twists and turns.
I originally thought there was going to be an epic badass battle between Gaze and Twenty, but now I'm not sure what's going to happen.
Looking forwards to the next chapter.
keep going!!!!!
Just get me on a cloud! I can make abolt out of ice and shoot it celestia's head! It'll melt leaving no evidence.
Ok besides that brutal assassination this story is pretty damn exciting if I do say so myself. Keep up the good work you crazy wanka!
fi the Balance is intended to stop the rise of evils such as Nightmare Moon, then how is it that Discord was able to escape and the Changelings invade Canterlot? Also, Celestia said that she periodically destroyed the Circle, whenever it expanded out of Canterlot, and that's what its doing now. Didn't Celestia and Luna notice that the foals, Rarity brought were from Ponyville. Also, the slums in Canterlot show, that even without the Circle, Equestria is far from perfect harmony.
Oh yes, this is what I was looking forward to. Twilight exploding in rage and then getting determined to fix things This is going to be awesome.
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The balance doesn't make things perfect; in fact, it can't, since that would upset the balance (tricky bugger, isn't it?) Celestia's theory is that it causes major catastrophes. If Discord or Chrysalis had won, that would be a major catastrophe. As it stands, Discord was only free for about a day before the Mane 6 zapped him back to stone, and all the damage he did was magical and instantly reversed once he was defeated. Likewise, Chrysalis and her bunch caused some property damage and may have love-drained an innocent pony or two, but they were repelled only a short while after they launched their assault.
It was, but the problem took care of itself after the Circle's only not Canterlotian (Canterloter? There needs to be a word for this) got blacklisted by the group and thrown in prison. So right now it looks like the expansion is a failure, so Celly can keep Fancy's group around for a little longer. Of course, Celestia doesn't know that Rarity is planning to dethrone Fancy, or that her allies want to open Gallery franchises all around Equestria. She's not omnipotent, after all.
So if she's not all-knowing, you might ask, how does she know so much about the Circle's activities?
Stay tuned.
I fucking hate your cliffhangers, but your talent as a writer makes them bearable. How close would you say this story is from being finished? And when it does finish, do you have any intentions on putting another story within the same universe?
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I'd say we have 5 or 6 chapters left, but don't quote me on that since when I began the story I estimated it would be over by New Year's.
After the story is over, that's it for the main series. I want to concentrate on original fiction so I doubt I'll ever do another fanfic of anywhere near this length again (but I try never to say never.)
I do, however, have a couple of ideas for short stories set in the same universe at earlier points in the timeline, which will probably pop up every now and then, without warning.
I can't wait for more and yet I don't wan't it to end. I just can't get enough of this version of Rarity!
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I must say, I am always pleased at your boundless enthusiasm for my corrupted version of Rarity. If I could I would put her in a box and mail her to your house so you two could hang out.
Wait, you don't have any kids at your house, do you?
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I'd want Rarity to have her way with me... Shame she's probably not into 20+ year old male humans.
2244800 you could talk to twilight about deaging you and transmorphing you into a foal.....just promise me you'll talkto her about doing it for me too
Are you familiar with the Legacy of Kain series? Here I almost could depict Celestia tearing off Twilight's wings in the future.
Dayum with those previews, any could be a fine story by its own, is wonderful how much we get per chapter, the fact that the story is complete also helps.
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Twenty bucks says Gaze.
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Did you just make a pun? Is Twenty/Twenty the same pony as Gaze?
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That was my suspicion, and yet the pun was completely accidental. I'm not sure if that's sad or awesome.
it proves Celestia can't rule without Luna after all. The two balance each other, Celestia sees things on the macro scale and Luna sees them on the micro scale. both are important.