I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Poor Rarity. Indigo went pretty far. Waiting to see how Silver and Twist's plan goes.
This...Is gonna be good
Sounds like the circle is about to break apart even without Celestia's influence.
Indigo has to be loving this right now. Twilight was so eager to condem Rariity that she gave Sweetie over to an even greater monster.
Wow. Indigo has unbelievably long tongue. Because of her Rarity gained so much information that I'm not even sure that Indigo at Fancypants' side.
That was beautiful <3
i didn't think it was possible, but this story just keeps getting better and better. honestly i don't care for anyone so i don't give a fuck who wins or loses, but it's so entertaining seeing all these nimrods bleed.
I know i shouldn't but i feel really bad for Rarity.
Still im loving this story! <3
Oh my!
What will happen next!
So much taboo story line, such dark action, its riveting!
And she still has one more visitor to go.
In any case: The one I feel bad for is Sweetie. Despite the fact that Indigo and her brood might very well treat her better than Rarity.
Think about that for a second...
I do not seenhow there can be a happy ending to this story.
That said. Good job. I blame global warming.
Do I like this?the awnser is.....
Darn it, you pull the best damned plot Twists ever (pun, pun is intended). I was literally let down when I noticed I was reaching the end of the chapter. Consarn it!
I do wonder though, what would the conspirators hope to gain by causing Fancy's fall, especially given what would happen to them if he as much as suspected it?
Also, when I read "magic expert" I just knew there would be a decent dose of GnP in the story, and it made me reacall the wizards of Discworld's Unseen University.
Anyway, as always, I eagerly await the next chapter!
I would love for spike to come back to ponyville.
His reaction would be priceless!
wow I'm a sick bastard aren't I?
If this were a normal story I would expect Trixie to show up, try to free Rarity, and get her ass thoroughly beat down by Twilight. But this is not a normal story so I find myself wondering exactly what her job will be and if she will succeed or not.
I was a little disappointed by Trixie, was hoping for someone better. The only issue I had with this chapter was Rarity's reaction to Applejack, it just didn't feel real. It felt like you forced her fearful reaction in at the last second. Usually your reactions are pretty fluid, the end with Indigo felt real but Applejack just felt forced.
Hmm, is there anyone in the Circle who doesn't want to stab everybody else in the back?
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That has got to be the most badass Applejack I've ever seen. I mean, holy shit!
Shit just got real
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Country folk don't mess around. The law can say you're guilty or innocent...but country folk don't much 'tention to the little things like that. Keepin' people SAFE is more important than 'the law.'
Despite how many times I reread this series, I will never cease to be confused MY this chapter.
The scene with Indigo, it doesn't make sense to me. If the guard could hear her when she called for him, why couldn't he hear her during the rest of the conversation? Like don't prison conversations get monitored, and it's clear in this situation that that is the case and it just doesn't make sense. Was the guard paid off? I just don't understand it.
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This is a fair point! In my head I always held it that between Indigo's wealth and the Circle's influence, they'd make sure the guard was well and fully paid off before Indigo entered the room. But that's not really made clear in the text, which is totally my error. I'll try to revise this when I have the time so it's clear he's been bribed. Thanks for catching it!
So obviously I'm a bit late to the party, but I just wanted to commend you on your writing skill. I started this series for some fetish fuel, but i quickly fell in love with your writing, world building, and character altering. You have real talent, I've been bingeing this series for a few days now just for the story alone. You're great at cliff hangers, plot twists, and making such a deranged and sick situation actually seem plausible in this world, not just randomly shoved in there like other writers try to do. I'd love to see more stories from you :)