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TheRadBrad is awesome, props to him for inspiring you.

2019061 No, props to him for being awesome. Like you all.
Shadowstalker, logging out.

2019596 good on you sir... it's hard to leave me speechless. Mainly because I'm probably crazier than you
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yeeeaah
i watched his videos while i played DS2
thanks to him i never miss any gold on the ceiling

Okay then. I'll look. I think ive seen this though. OOOH!

The rad brad is the best playthrough person for games like dis

i have been watching his videos for a long time, and the man is great
he is called the king of walkthroughs

Hey bruh, you getting the Limited Edition of DS3? :applejackunsure:

2036470 I've gotten a hold card from target, it says it's for the limited edition. So I guess, yes.:pinkiehappy:

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kool I ordered mine off of the gamestop website and am gonna the get the gamestop exclusive weapon as well as the two others. :pinkiehappy:but what gets me really going is when my dev team collector's edition comes in!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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I know right?
I was like Collector's edition!?!?:pinkiegasp:
And there's only 5,000 being made?!?!?!:pinkiegasp:
*grabs debit/visa card* MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:


True story btw :derpytongue2: aside from wanting to get another one for my bud as a late christmas gift but ended up in the hospital before I could cash in my next paycheck :facehoof:
edit: I'm playing the demo as we speak =D

2048573 I'll fix it. Hopefully.

2082711 At the time I asked that, there was no 'Keep Calm and Flutter On'.

1957448 Do it. I love to see the funny comments other post, even if their not about my stories.:pinkiehappy:

2163727 Look up. See the story is marked as complete. Looks like were done here and i'm still alive.

2204531 you know that feeling like you made too many references people won't get? I just had this feeling after playing a game called Star Conflict

2235744 There's a reason why I began writing King of Velrain again... To fill in the, wait for it... Plot holes! *Ba dum tish*

2277572 No... Read King of Velrain. Celestia get's married, but not at the moment.

2286237King of Velrain and Lunar Madness. Lunar madness first, King of Velrain second.

Just finished reading this and I realized, the confusion adds to the hilarity. There are very few stories that manage to both explain everything and still leave you so confused you're rolling on the floor laughing your throat out. That was supposed to be a compliment, it came out sort of wrong but I honestly don't know how else to describe it.

First off, how many stories are you going to add to the group? Second off, HOW IN THE UNHOLY NAME OF GOD DID I NEVER FIND THIS!?!:flutterrage:

2425141 I've tried... It didn't work.

3232848 how necromorphs are formed in a nutshell

People die
Infectors form from those dead people
more people die
Infectors get to those corpses and create the necromorphs we all see and love

i...i wanted to print the whole story out so i could read it later, like in my room...at night...with a flashlight....but but but....40-something chapters? :applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry:

3619012 What chapter was this?

The master of chair throwing!

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It's actually the rabbit from Mony Python and the Holy Grail. :pinkiecrazy:

I see the Isaac in that art and I can imagine him say
"I must be having withdraw from all those Meds they had me on because now I'm seeing colorful ponies:facehoof:"

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six sadly dies on the last mission you can play.

the mission is called "omega".

also, if you read the books, Jun actually dies sometime after reach falls.

Hah, funny. This makes me wanna play my DS2 collector's edition. But I can't as I'm going for all the game completion rewards(sequels only).

Stupid reward challenge that I brought upon myself. Why you gotta be so hard!

5115892 *in FILISS's voice* firing main cannon.

4857130 he gives his life up for Halsey.

4855664 better start running. *caboose in background* buttons? I love BUTTONS! *me* FUCK EVERYONE GET DOWN! *Something somewhere explodes*

Is this a prequel, or a sequel?

Truly terrible story. Or I should rather say - story of 2 deal breaking problems.

The first problem is thus - you are bringing characters and concepts out of nowhere. Some exposition would be nice. Maybe a paragraph of explanations of whys a hows. But OK, it is crossover - I have never played dead space so maybe I should play it and maybe something will become clearer (but I have never played Fallout before reading Fallout Equestria and I never felt lost reading that).

The second problems is much worse. Your characters are bland and thoroughly uninterestingly unengaging. There is no arc to them! Isaac goes from nowhere to nowhere. The CMC on the other hand goes from innocent fillies to necromoph killing badasses in 10 picoseconds flat! How? Why? Impossible! That is chance for interesting development not just left laying down, but cutted to .1 micrometer cubes and then incinerated. And Scootaloo dying only to be revealed 10 words later that she is not actually dead is ridiculous. And her "resurrection" is actually what totally broke the story. Past that I was bored and just blasted through.

<tl;dr> Bad story is bad. Characters goes from nowhere to nowhere or from innocent to killing machines in an instant and they are flat as boards. Concepts and character are made from thin air without any explanation (where did that male alicorn come from? and how?). Broken storytelling is broken.

6552864 I'm to going to say a cliche about how the fillies became bad asses MAGIC oh god what have I done

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