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Ok what am I missing here? What's up with Discord?
1679214 I am also confused by this
Typos, typos everywhere. I'll help you out with the next chapter I read.
what?....wtf.....
I'm sooooooooooo confused!!!!!
Is that a hint for the evil machine? omg i love this story already
1679214 he became good during keep calm and flutter on.
Not a bad story as I'm reading it so far. I can have a little cartoony feel in it but I guess that was your intention? Could use more detail but what the heck, I'm only in chapter 2! Hope it gets more detailed near the end
since when was Celestia deemed "queen"?
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When Luna and Discord tried to have any influence in politics. She gave herself the title of "Queen" so that she could keep all of the power.
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That's what I'm thinking.
"He gave them the most sympathetic look he could manage before getting onto one knee and gently wrapping them in a hug."
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"No, Zombies want to just eat your flesh. Necromormorph's want to eat it, cut you into little bits, blow you up, impale you, tear you apart and turn you into one of them. But that won't happen as long as you stick by me, I’ve lost so many people I care about and I’m determined to get you all out of here."
Delicacy, and tact he would make a good father.
"Your right Pinkie. I believe, that they are in safe hooves. [..]
.... you're* [/grammar nazi]
well that an interresting story. I don't about the 3 little taking all those things cool, but yeah that interresting.
Dear queen Celestia
D-Don't worry I’m sure there safe... there just somewhere else
there not dead to our knowledge
Your faithful student, Twilightsparkle
There safe
Sweetiebelle asked
So there zomponies
Said Sweetiebelle
Yeah, I do to
Your right Pinkie
Rainbow Dash Fluttershy, you two have others who can fill in
I hope their alright
1. Princess.
2. They're. They're.
3. They're.
4. Twilight Sparkle.
5. They're.
6. Sweetie Belle.
7. They're.
8. Sweetie Belle.
9. Too.
10. You're.
11. Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy you two have others who can fill in.
12. They're.
I'm starting to wonder, are the rest of your chapters like this? Hmm... No rest for me then. At least, not restful sleep in this case
3487901 I have come to the same conclusion.
There's also some evidence that for the author, talking is a free action.
They're taking this situation quit lightly; if I remember correctly in the game (story/plot wise) Isaac had no time to catch his breath because of all the necromorphs hunting him down, making no single place safe for long. So what I'm trying to say is that while the rest are going along their normal matters the CMC and Isaac could die at any given moment. I mite be thinking to deep into the matter ,either way good story
Im gonna be honest, the story is good, but it seems very rushed
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I gotta get the damn trilogy.
I'm actually fairly sure that Stross said "Cross my heart, hope to die, stick a needle in my eye." at one point.
4784924 don't get 3 it's a piece of shot compared to the other 2.
7329998 alternate universe