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Yay an update! Now I have something to do during play rehearsal.
Whoo! New chapta!
Okay, first you're saying it's an hour past sunrise, and then you're saying it's nearly lunch. When is it? Even if it were winter, and the sun rose at 8 AM, it would only be 9 AM. That's not an early lunch. That's an early brunch at best.
Personally, I didn't mind the transformation ALL that much, aside from it eating into her limited magical reserves. But still, it accomplished several things, and will continue to do so, I'm sure, so it's alright. Now to be patient again for the next chapter.
Still loving this as always.
"Mundane-ity" should be "mundanity," no matter what Firefox's spell-check says.
(chuckling because of update.) I'm happy that you update.
Changeling pony spell is convenient. Now they aren't constrained to the apartment.
Dude says 'um' a lot.
My heresy sense is tingeling.
Good chapter overall. Wish Alex would tone down the rampant indecisive panic thing he's always doing. Its annoying.
As for transformation (eh, 'lings are allies, she got 'ling friends. Sure), the only thing i wonder about : Can Eth really afford to burn that much magic on an incomplete/flawed spell? That doesnt sound like a light and easy thing to do. It seem drastic compared to what other spells she had got to know.
And, well, that was pretty funny when she explained how "flawed" it was. That's gotta be awkward for her.
As for the Cassie incident: Imho, luck saved them. It could have gone south in so many ways.
Called it.
So how flawed is the spell? Does she still have a tail or something?
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I want to hear you accidentally insert a line from my story into your act.
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Yeah, that spell... One of Etherea's character flaws is at work there much like it has been through a lot of this story so far. And it will continue to be problematic until something bites her.
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How so...?
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Drat! You got me!
I wanted something that fit, that Etherea could get behind, but would also annoy Alex because he should have found a better choice.
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We don't know; I haven't written it yet!
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I could go with "Your clothes are not too comfortable," or "I am not completely human," maybe.
Actually, funny story. Arthur is supposed to lean over Lucy's coffin to give her one last kiss in the last act; during the second run-through he climbed all the way in. I closed the lid behind him, turned to Jonathan, and said, "Let's give him a couple of minutes."
Alex is having sooo much fun., and Craig is having so much he cant remember any of it.
It's almost jittery to see how insecure and prone to panic attacks Alex is...yet it makes things interesting.
I swear, the banging that ensues after all of this is more or less settled is gonna make Chuck Norris feel like a virgin.
Yes, update! And a great chapter as usual, very interested to see where this leads.
You just had to update this right as I was going to bed.
Least I had some reading material this morning.
Huzzah! Finally updated!!
You did something that I have always figured must be true. Changeling magic is spells that they simply do not let out into the general population and a unicorn could learn them if they could find a changeling willing to teach them.
My reaction this morning when I saw the update : "New chapter just before the week end. Dis gunna be gud !"
And it was ! Eager to see the next part !
The perfect way to remedy that? Shopping montage!
I feel that's like a minor theme of this story.
And now I eagerly await part two
Is Etherea even trying to build up enough mana/harmony to go home?
Shape shifting to a mostly unknown species has got to burn through her harmony stores pretty hard.
Enjoyed the update though, keep them coming!
I really wish you would update this story more often, but I understand that life happens. Great chapter; a few grammar/spelling errors here and there, but nothing too serious. You seem to be making the mistake of confusing led with lead (like the metal). Careful about that.
How are those two ever going to get along? Alex is constantly making up horror szenarios for what could go wrong with the unknowns in his life while Ethereas defining character trait seems to be curiosity. She's not even trying to get home anymore, is she?
This was an interesting one... We got a new character and a setup for further shenanigans between the two girls.
That thing with Etheria's hair color is a really cool idea, too.
All I can say is:
Phew! I was worried for a second you'd gone all Equestria Girls on us. Well, not really—You know that I know that you know that would be toooooo easy.
Alright, all caught up!
For some reason it feels like Etherea is moving to become the Earth ambassador. Having had a whole day to think and plan after discovering her lack of connection back to Equestria, the timeline has been expanded from a few days to at least a month (with current regeneration rate estimates and constant use of magic) and it would make sense to buckle down and get comfortable.
Sitting wouldn't normally be that big a deal, but with the design of standard jeans, well, yeah no wonder she was uncomfortable!
Keep going! ;)
I really like the story. It feels like a manga. Google megatokyo, a decent guy doing the best he can in a world with bursts of strange-mad-wonderful moments. Some more run-on than others. Please keep on writing.
.... Can I have some more, kind sir?
*story ends abruptly and inactive for nearly a year*. Oh come on!
It was still // remove 'it'
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I could sit here and post Warhammer 40K crossover with pony all night long, but I've got more chapters to reread.