Hi, I'm GRYFFINDOR123456 and I'm legally an adult. I love my little pony, Equestria Girls and G5 and I also love Harry Potter, Wednesday and Barbie!
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Disgraceful.
For a horror story, the last three seems too rushed, like mostly the rest of this chapter from there, which, while reading, gave me a vague vision of what is happening and that could easily be fixed by adding more (character's feelings) details or removing the periods replacing by commas that could help in the narrative description.