• Published 16th Mar 2024
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Salt: I love Going to the Doctor - CrimsonWolf360



After his impromptu trist with not just Rainbow Dash and Roseluck, but Derpy as well, all within the span of twenty four hours, Anon decides to make a quick check in at the hospital to see exactly what is going on.

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Well done!! Seeing these mares go wild over his scent is lovely!!

Perhaps Trixie and starlight get in on the fun

Twilight Sparkle? Please... :twilightblush:

Starlight and Trixie threesome

If he's going to have two mares at the same time it should be the spa twins and he should get himself checked out see if he's able to have any children with the mares.

Perhaps he should get town hall to mail out a notice about his magic porno sweat, and then hide in his home for a few days so mares can avoid him if they're not down for that sort of thing

Spa twins would be fun

I'm hoping for The Great and Horny Trixie next

Much to his relief, Mrs. Cake just chuckled along with him, "Oh, no worries, deary. You go on ahead and get those tests done. I'll like Pinkie know." She responded, before jokingly shooing him away with her hoof.

let?

Pinkie Pie.

Since Mrs. Cake is going to let Pinkie know he's not coming into work, perhaps he could end up being part of her "meal break".

Perhaps give Dash another go and add Gilda in for even more fun :rainbowkiss:

Well Pinkies coming by the hospital to see what's wrong after talking to the Cakes. Or she sends somepony else..

Could I get a link to the cover art?

Oh shit lmao that ending can only end poorly

Anon is going to end up with like 12 foals at this rate.

I feel like Applejack should be next. Like Rainbow Dash brags that Anon was such an athlete that he could give Applejack a run for her bits. Applejack takes her up on that challenge only to fall into the salt.

Surprised no one has mentioned how sweet it is that Anon is looking for an actual relationship, and not just sex. Adds a sense of sweetness to the story.

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On a different note considering the way the story ended I'm guessing he either chose to flee the doctor and nurses, had some fun with them, or they quarantined the room with magic until someone figured out what happened.

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That will depend entirely on who my patrons vote to be the next pony/ponies for Anon to seduce...

How about a scene with Fluttershy? She's supposed to be an expert on woodland creatures, so she might try to "help" Anon, only to "help" herself? Perhaps Twilight could be the one to recommend Anon to Fluttershy. And, since you mentioned Anon having two mares, maybe Twilight could get some, too?

:yay::twilightsmile::heart:

Maybe a Spa Date with Fluttershy and Rarity to try to clean off, since the nurse confirmed Anon's suspicions (kind of)... only to come to a head in the sauna room

Run Anon, all those medical professionals will drain you dry!

Is the doctor male? Could we be seeing some gay action in the next sequel? And what is said gay male doctor wants to top?

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All questions for my Patreon supporters, my friend :)

Next fic:Anon needs to look into clothes that will help cover up his sweat/ make it so he sweats less. Naturally rarity will be more than happy to comply.

Or he goes to flutters/zercora for herbs and potions to help his sweat not turn every mare on but it just makes it temporarily worst.

Theory confirmed, now he needs to find somepony who can bottle it up for profit!

This was absolutely awesome I'm glad we are getting to know a little of how it works

Anon - The living salt lick.
Funny I use the same idea in one of my stories to less extreme degree... yet.

Comment posted by Mrnom deleted May 10th
Mrnom #29 · May 10th · · 1 ·

the human predator teeth is kinda annoying tbh decent story I'll comeback to the series. previous comment was this didn't know it posted

Dan
Dan #30 · May 16th · · ·

Pony doctors find him hot. Maybe it's also true for a cute Zebra, or maybe it's not.

It might be worthwhile to beg Zecora for help. Regardless, she'd surely love a studly hominid making her yelp. To use a human expression, she'd lend a helping hand, and if not, she's got the best rump in all the land.

Oh dear. It'd be funny if Chrysalis had him abducted because 'she enjoys spicy food' and it turned out that Changelings were completely immune to the effect due to them not being ponies at all.

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