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Through magic crystals, a new portal to another world is opened. But unlike Equestria, this world is also inhabited by humans, but they also have a very popular sport that uses what are called Beyblades.

How will the world change with the introduction of Beyblades? How will Sunset Shimmer experience this? At least one thing is certain. It is something that she will experience with her friends and her new Bey. Flare Phoenix

PS: I do not own the Beyblade or the Equestria Girls brands. It belongs to their respective owners. Also this story takes place after Beyblade Burst QuadDrive and Friendship Games. Also I will mostly be using the Beyblades that were in the show for the Burst characters.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 48 )

Pretty interesting

Where was Spike though when the Mane 7 got to watch the battle?
Will he become a Blader too?

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I don't know if Spike will appear in this Fanfic. if he does he's probably a dog so he won't be a blader

Great story, just became a fan of Beyblade Burst a few weeks ago.

Question, does Flare Phoenix have the same special moves as Revive Phoenix?

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whats wrong with making him human/granting him a human form?
Its completely possible.

Doesn't seem fair the Mane 7 get to go on this but Spike gets left out hard.

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I'm not saying there's anything wrong with Spike as a human. It's just that I haven't planned for him to make an appearance. I'm writing this story as if it takes place after the Friendship Games movie so everything before is still the same as it is in Canon. Including Spike being a dog.

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No, All Mlp eg characters' Beys are mostly self-designed with their own functions. So Flare Phoenix is not the same as Revive Phoenix. There will be more information about Flare Phoenix in Chapter 2 coming soon.

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Ok dude, can you stop with this spike obsession.


You do this in almost ANY story involving spike and complain a lot when he stays a dog OR when he isn’t a dog, you complain about him NOT getting anything or get to
Join in on the action with the rest of the main 6/7

If the authors don’t have any plans with him or wanna keep him as a dog, then please respect their decision and not complain about it and beg for him to get something/join in

JD1

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That's typically how all Spike fans are.

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I agree, I like Spike he's a cool character but he isn't the main character and doesn't have to be in every book. Now I personally can't speak upon Spike fans, I do have to agree that someone shouldn't be asking if a certain character is going to be in the book. Just let the book play out if the author wants to involve Spike then cool, if not oh well there's plenty of books with Spike in them. This is the author's book which so far looks good, it's not up to us the audience on whose in the book or not. I apologize for the rant, I too just don't like how some people request for a character like that it's rude and disrespectful to the author

Hello, Just so the information is available. I write the chapters and release them when they are ready. I try to keep only a few days between each chapter but sometimes other priorities take focus. This was just information for those who wonder when it takes a while between the chapters.

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I have an idea for your story if you're interested.

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Issue is too many EQG crossovers left him out hard all because he's stuck as a dog(and apparently HAS to be stuck as a dog).
And on certain crossovers in general.

How am I being rude? I am not insulting or bad mouthing the author or anyone.
How is it wrong for me wishing Spike wasn't left out? He kept getting left out a bunch in the show.

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I really can't just be ok on that though.
Spike kept getting left out a bunch by the Mane 6/7 in the show alot and in EQG ones it ends up getting out of hand all due to he's stuck as a dog.
Its just doesn't seem fair for him.

Sorry if me asking about Spike or saying how I feel is being really bothersome but I can't help it..

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Dude, you can totally help it.

You’ve asked these questions before on some of my stories, and to me, it feels like you’re just yelling into an echo chamber trying to get authors to add more stuff about Spike.

Personally, I find it rude because it doesn’t contribute to the story in general. Plus, if an author has no plans for Spike, they don’t have to include him. It’s their decision, not yours.

Apart from the images of the original Beys of the series, do you think you could also include the Beys of the Rainbooms and that Robin?

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Thanks for the tip. Now I have included pictures of the Rainbooms Beys in the chapters they were introduced in. Made them myself so don't expect any masterpieces

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PERFECT

And what about the idea that I mentioned to you privately?

I have things to say:

1) It seems that Sunset already has one goal in this story: climb to the top ranking and challenge Valt for the title of champion.

2) The rivalry between Sunset and Robin reminds me a lot of that between Valt and Aiger.

3) Did you see my last private message?

I have three things to say:

1) It seems that there will be a tournament, where the winner will face Xavier and his Xcalius.

2) Which Beyblade character are you inspired by with Dyabin Richson?

3) My last private message?

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he is most original. if the character is not from burst or eg i mostly came up with them

hey do you need any new faces for this story at all???

Hey, that little mini battle at the end of this chapter really surprised me:pinkiegasp: and when did Adagio get the data on fafnir?

If you don’t mind, I have a good idea for a release of a new bey after sword flame cup arc is finished.👍

Happy Beyblade day to you too!

I have two questions:

1) What original Beys did you draw inspiration from for the Beys of the Rainbooms designs?

2) What is the way each one launches their Bey?

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No, I really can't.
I can't really just let it go and such. It just won't go away in my head.

Its really not rude to be asking about Spike though.
Like it can also add on stuff or touch on a certain conflict.
Its just one issue in the show that the girls always get to go on something but Spike gets left out hard.

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That isn’t an excuse to keep posting about it on every story you see. Also, I found it quite rude when you did this same thing on some of my stories. If an author doesn’t want to feature Spike, again, IT IS THEIR DECISION, not yours.

Plus, Spike “adding onto stuff” or “touching on conflicts” or whatever it is you said, is not a universal constant across the site.

Finally, the way I see it is that your “wishing “ is just seen as complaining by everyone else. Especially when you keep commenting about it.

For the love of god, please stop badgering authors about Spike.

When I read this chapter, I thought that the Bey that our beloved Dark Prince was going to use was going to be this:

Divine Belfyre

Why didn't you use it?

Just out of curiosity, why didn't you use Devastate Belfyre in its perfect gear form in the chapter?:rainbowhuh:

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The events of Quadstrike's first episode were the reason why Bell evolved Devastate Belfyre into Divine Belfyre. But in these fanfics, those events have not happened, so he has not undergone the evolution.

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I have a thought to introduce that form in later chapters. But if you want an in-universe explanation, Bell will say something like "I just needed the perfect opportunity" but in reality he'll either have forgotten it until now or because he underestimated Sunset and the others .

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That wouldn't make sense, since the Beys that Ken and Xander use in this story debuted in Quadstrike.

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According to Quadstrike, Bell evolved his bey after his battle with Pri/Quadra. But Ken and Xander evolution seemed to happen individually. So in-universe it is possible that they could do their evolutions separately and maybe before Bell.

But my inspiration is also because their last bey was King Kerbeus and Surge Xcalius and they felt like too far back. It didn't feel right that they would both have the same bey while everyone else has much more modern beys.

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And what happen with Hazard Kerbeus and Breaker Xcalius?

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A. Both of those Beys were owned by other characters from Turbo. Ken never owned Hazard Kerbeus and Xander had only borrowed Breaker Xcalius during his only appearance in Turbo.

B. If a character last had a bey from Rise or earlier and then changed to a Quadstrike Bey then I will choose the Quadstrike bey.

Comment posted by Lucasnike123 deleted April 6th

hey. do you need any new faces for this story??

Just do what you need to do with your break, I will be looking forward to the next chapter in the future.

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I have two things to say:

1) I respect your decision to take a break and will wait as long as it takes.

2) Any clue as to who the villain is that has become interested in Sunset after her battle with Xander? Is he an OC or a character from EG or Beyblade who has returned for revenge?

I know, but I have a feeling that we will be facing the EG version of Sombra, and maybe he has a Beyblade that has a it’s own DB burst prevention system, like Prime Apocalypse.

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