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When the Cloudsdale stock market crashes, the entire Pegasus race is left in a depression. To make matters worse the Canterlot government has refused to send any form of financial aid because of this several radical pegasi would form together to create the Pesagus Liberation Army. A paramilitary group that vows to have the entire pegasi race under one banner and fully independent from Equestria through any means necessary.

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Is the ENTIRE pegasus race in Cloudsdale???

Interesting, though i cant imagine rainbow would let scoots suffer like that.

I wonder, does this Situation apply to all Pegasus entirely, or just cloudsdale citzens?

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The first thing they did was go on a recruitment drive. Asking anyone who wanted to join. Ultimately around five thousand pegasi from Cloudsdale signed up alone. Several pegasi were sent to other pegasi cities such as Las Pegasus and Cloudsburg to recruit. Where an additional ten thousand pegasi joined the rebellion, other pegasi from other cities such as Manehatten and Baltimare also joined.

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All pegasi in equestria

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Oh dear. If i may ask theoreticaly, do the pla take every Pegasus or do they have Standards? Also, i am afraid how they would treat prisoners

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Any Pegasus that can fly, communicate. And before you say scootaloo cant fly I have a reason as to why she is still kidnapped but unfortunately you will have to wait till the next chapter to find that out same with how prisoners are treated

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To me, shes a late bloomer.

Its your Story, the prisoner thing came from a thought while reading it. The pegasus, what about disabled, like injured wing?

Sorry, just thought would be an interesting aspect. I leave it up to you, if you want to discuss it

This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Can't wait to see how great Scootaloo will do along with your upcoming chapters, and remember:

Keep your dreams alive. Understand that achieving anything requires faith and belief in yourself, vision, hard work, determination, and dedication. Remember, all things are possible for those who believe.

Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy!

https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU?si=y5ZfmItJSw5D-0jm

Welp, both Celestia and Luna really screwed up on not preventing this or helping out the Pegsi more before it was too late.

poor scoots.

no ofense but a little error i noticed

Scootaloo was sat on the top row at the cloudiseum where she looked down to see three pegasi strapped to a wall two of them were proper soldiers while one of them was a cadet. The soldiers looked to be in their twenties while Scootaloo whi recognised the cadet from the training camp was 13, one year older than Scootaloo, althought she didn’t know his name.

and noffense about my last comment, just popped in

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Thanks for telling me ive fixed it now

great start mate keep it up:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Scootaloo when you see a chance desert and head for greener pastures awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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Will the next chapter focus on the Main Six, and the princesses?

Comment posted by Void Streak deleted Dec 21st, 2023

poor scoots but nicely done!

If i may ask, got yet an idea how a pegasus unable to fly would be in the PLA?

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That will be answered in the next chapter

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okay and my pm back then, pardon, old habit.

nice to see thos updated. somethig i noticed, culd be an error

Apple Bloom felt sorry for her friend but in her mind, if she didn't turn Scootaloo in then she would gain no bits and therefore her family would suffer even more. “Scootaloo, ah don't want to do this but if Celestial found out that I let yah go then me and mah family would be ruined.

the ending, how should i say, feels a bit to quick, no offense

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You can have autocorrect to thank for that.

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i see, yeah, it sucks, doesnt it

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Will Princess Celestia probably blame the extremist unicorn and earth ponies in the Canterlot government for triggering the Pegasus uprising in the aftermath?

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