Scootaloo wakes up inside of a padded room, completely restrained with no idea of how she got there.
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an interesting idea
While an interesting premise, I suggest looking into getting an editor to format the story a little better.
Good start! I look foward to seeing where it goes!
I don’t know if I like this, I don’t understand this story therefore, I am not sure if I like it as another commenter pointed out you need to really get an editor, there are some grammatical errors and technical errors with the story that do not make it flow well.