A boy from earth gets transported to Equestria, where he is turned into a colt and sent to an orphanage.
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Huh, rather dark.
Huh. Seems that his situation hasn't improved much. Twilight seemed a bit out of character, but then again, suddenly offering to taken in a random child found in the woods is not normal behavior either. Hard to imagine Fluttershy using The Stare on a child though. I'll keep an eye on this one.
This story is not free from the clichés of all such stories, but I think there is little that can be said about it. By the way, you've already convinced me of the potential of this story (just a good tip if you end up with someone, the city cliché will go around, pls leave it out because it's really irritating) Oh, and "Spoiler alert" Scoutalu will be his roommate, and later his love? ?
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What do you mean by city cliche?
And good guess.
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1. thanks but that was clear
2. when they go to Rarity's boutique, then to the sweet apple garden, etc., and kontrol c kontrol v we can hear the same thing 5 times in a little pepita.
3. I have one more tip, that Fluttershy and Rainbowdash will adopt the two little ones.
and 4. as for that, even though it's such a cliché that the wall falls, I would be very happy if he had to die for something one way or another along with the retentive parents, and Discord or someone else saves him so he gets a second chance , such as the Turkish anne, or mother, in the series.
I almost forgot to ask. Do you want to represent yourself as the main character, such as me in my own book?