For years, the Blueblood line has been considered to be a paragon of royal Equestrian breeding. But for the young Prince Blueblood, it’s been a royal nightmare. Endless mares pursuing him without a lick of commitment, he kicked them all to the curb without a second thought. In return, with the constant negative press and the large amounts of disapproval from the Princess’ council; his line seems to be close to collapsing.
That is, until he was sent to train a young troubled recruit.
Shining Armor, a young recruit from lower Canterlot has been training hard in the Royal Guard Training Service. He hopes that this will be his chance to win his high school crush’s heart, Princess Cadance. But after failing multiple exercises and various getting reprimands from his superiors, it seemed that his love will soon drift away with a dishonourable discharge close by.
That is, until he was ordered to be trained by a young haughty prince.
Written entry for the M/M Shipping Contest 2023. Unfortunately, we weren't able to fully complete this by the end of the contest so it will be disqualified. Regardless, new chapters will still be uploaded however!
And great credit to Party Cannon for helping me with editing, and proofreading this fic!
Good luck with chapter 2!
Finally an odd ship. I like it!
Cant wait for more chapters!
The writing feels more like a screen play then a full proper story, could use more narrative exposition and explaining the protagonists thoughts, but the premise still seems interesting at least and there are a few good gags. Looking forward on seeing more of your story and to see you improve in your writing skills.
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Thank you for the constructive criticism, it's always hard to find these days. The contest ends really soon so we might not have time to make the story less like a screen play but we'll keep it in mind and try to implement it. Thanks again
Best of luck on finishing the story in time!
That's not a ship I would have thought of but hey its an interesting thought.
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Hope to see more of your upcoming chapters, and remember:
Keep your dreams alive. Understand that achieving anything requires faith and belief in yourself, vision, hard work, determination, and dedication. Remember, all things are possible for those who believe.
Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy!
https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU?si=4FpVlBRgtRx1gYCB
This Crushes any criticism I had from the first chapter perfectly, good job. It's starts to slip away after the the haft way make, when Shining is dejected, but but pick up back mostly toward the end. I do like the descriptions you added and the way you put the humor.
New chapter is better then the first keep up the good work
So far, so good on this new chapter I like it!
I wonder what Blueblood is going to do, I better wait and find out soon.
Here's a song that will make you natural. Enjoy!
https://youtu.be/V5M2WZiAy6k?si=R_uKttfOzMpzpHUa
I can't wait for this to be updated
Still waiting for an update
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Sorry for the silence, but lately I've been engrossed in my studies for my finals so writing this has sort of stalled. However, after the exams are over I plan to continue this until its finished! ^^
Hope you understand that.
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thank you, I'll want for till then. hope your exams go well