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Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, and Prince Blueblood are childhood friends with Blueblood and Shining Armor pining after Princess Cadence. Years later after Princess Cadence come back from Princess training, they are still in love with her. As they fight for her affections, Shining Armor is torn between fulfilling the expectations of his family and following his heart and embarks on an adventure that spans three fantastic worlds where he must face his greatest fears.

Default picture belongs to the great ChaosQueen who offered to make this for me. Thank you ChaosQueen, it's amazing :derpytongue2:

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 89 )

I love this movie. it's better that Fluttershy is the goddess insead of Celestia.

I love the idea of this story and I know my fellow Fluttercord fans are gonna love this. Update soon please!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

This is to freaky I was just thinking some one should right a story about this to day, with the exact same characters. I can't what to read it :yay::pinkiehappy:

Lol I could really see Celestia being the candle master...

Cool so far!
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I agree in away it make more sense because of how they describe the character she is now in the movie.

I just watched the movie and I can't wait for you to update this so I can read it! You chose perfect characters to fill the roles. I'm so glad you chose Fluttershy over Celestia! Personally, I hate Celesticord and I wouldn't have read this story if you had chosen her instead. Fluttercord is my OTP! :heart:

oh my gosh please do more

Very good! I like that you aren't going exactly with the movie! You potrayed Discord and Fluttershy very well by giving more depth to them than the movie does. The only complaint I have is that you took soooo long to update. Don't worry, though, it was worth it!

Okie Dokie Lokie!

When I realized Twilight died:

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Nice chapter and I agree with Mlpfluttershy, you did give them more depth! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Thank you all for your support. I was so worried that no one would read this but i'm glad I have some fans out there. Again, thank you and I love you all!!! :heart::raritycry:

Fluttershy (La Muerte) and Discord (Xibalba) :yay: I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next chapter. Is this a Fluttershy x Discord as well as a Cadence x Shining Armor shipping? :pinkiehappy:

5562171 If your looking for cover art for this story I would love to draw a picture for it. :pinkiehappy: I already have an idea for it. Top of the page: Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie & Discord Middle of the page: Shining Armor, Cadence, Prince Blueblood Bottom of the Page: Princess Luna, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, Button Mash, Pipsqueak with the book & also the title some where in there too

Comment posted by AlleyCat124 deleted Feb 5th, 2015

5584788 that....sounds....AWESOME!!!!!!:rainbowkiss: thats actually actually EXACTLY what I had in mind. I would of done it myself, but i'm still working on my art skills and they're just not good yet. I would greatly appreciate it and honored if you could do a cover art for this story. And I know a lot of the viewers would love a picture to go with this story. Thank you :pinkiehappy:

5589112 Happy to hear it. :pinkiehappy: Do you have anything else to add to my idea? such as: how the characters look, the background things like that I already have an idea of how Discord & Fluttershy should look but the others not so much Your sugestions would be very helpful. :twilightsmile:

5589415 ok, well discord and fluttershy in the outfits that i described in chapter 1. shining armor in his outfit from his and cadence's wedding, cadence, I just want her in normal attire from the series, just her crown and the pendant around her neck, blueblood in his normal tuxedo and blue tie. same with luna and the kids. just normal outfits from the series. other than that, go however direction you think it should look:coolphoto:

5591456 thank you that is very helpful :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by ChaosQueen deleted Feb 12th, 2015

I'm finishing drawing and coloring the characters. Just wanted to tell you my ideas for the backgrounds. :twilightsmile: Top Page: Fireworks around Discord/Pinkie Pie surrounded by balloons/ animals around Fluttershy Middle of the Page: Blueblood, Cadence, and Shining Armor in Ponyville Question: Is "Ponyville/The Land of the Remembered/The Land of the Forgotten" the only places that will be mentioned in your story?

5619386 Yes, those are the only settings in the story. The picture that you have given me for this default is great. I can't wait to see it.:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by ChaosQueen deleted Feb 14th, 2015

OH man i m trying to complete my story based on book of life i was so happy cause i thought i was only one but oh well good luck with yours hope you'll check out mine when i post it

5620867 Holy crap, same here! I thought I was the only one! I can't wait to read yours!

5619593 If I finish my picture tonight I could probably have it up sometime tomorrow. :twilightsmile:

5625859 Oh....my......god........its AWESOME!!!!!!!:rainbowkiss: this is exactly what i had in mind!!!! This is great! thank you so much!

5629470 So happy that you like it. :twilightsmile:

Actually Rarity's talent as shown in the season 5 premiere is the ability to know beauty like how a diamond shines beautifully.

This story.

I see potential.

When are we going to see Diamond Tiara?

This is amazing! I love it! :pinkiehappy:

whens the next update

I think it turned out pretty good. However, I always wondered in the movie, why Maria was mad at Manolo. Explanation would be much appreciated.

Also,

Cheers erupted in the stadium as Prince Blueblood entered. Looking at all the admiring gazes around him, Blueblood’s smile broadened and his chest swelled up with pride. He’s come a long way from the colt he was before. And sweet Celestia, he was going to show them.

Should be he'd.

Other than that, loving this! Keep this story rollin'!

6334571 I have two possible explanations and this is my own personal opinion.
1. She didn't approve of the sport. She knows at the end of the fight, it was required to kill the animal and she didn't like it. I think she only went to support her friend and because her father and the town wanted her there.
2. She knows that Manolo doesn't want to be a bull-fighter and was disappointed that he was doing it knowing that he didn't want to.
But like I said, this is only opinion, I'm not sure if one of these was the actual reason. I think it's more the first reason though.

6335657 Maybe so. It just seems a bit out of place. I mean, get to know them first. You haven't seen them in forever. Seriously, I know what that's like.

This was a great chapter. I love that Angel is the one to do something when Discord is staring at Cadence. Then Fluttershy lectures/thanks him for it.
Question: Will Shining Armor be singing my favorite song from the movie in your story? :twilightsmile:

I think you did a great job with this scene, even if it was hard to work around, you did great. :twilightsmile:

I too, figured that cutie marks only show what thier talents are, not what they are going to do for the rest of thier life.

When's the next chapter gonna come out?:rainbowkiss:

6127342 Diamond Tiara's already in this

Okay, clever having Angel bite Discord. :raritywink: He's third best pet

This was a good chapter! :)

Great chapter. This was one of my favorite scenes in the movie and always will be.

No sweat, it's important to do what you think is best, I can wait as long as I have to. Great work with this chapter!

Great chapter!!! It was about time!!
So... this means there's gonna be another chapter for Little Orphan Applebloom?
I wanna know what will happen with Discord's clones and Fluttershy!
Still following you!

hope to see more soon

Plz write more soon :scootangel: Absolutely love this story

Hey take your time! Rushing will only make more mistakes. Plus, I'm really excited on how you do the balcony scene, which will be worth the wait!:twilightsmile:

So who's going to play that big bandit leader? (I forgot his name)

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