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Visharo


"Creativity flows when boredom grows." -The Bored Author (of Doom)

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Changelings have invaded, Equestria is in fighting back desperately. A town near the border has been overwhelmed, civilians have either been gunned down or have fled. One group were too late, they are now trapped in a post office. Mailmare Derpy and her daughter are trapped here, will they make it?

Commission by shining paladin.

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Comments ( 17 )

Mailmare Derpy and her daughter are trapped here, will they make it?

Knowing the actual event, RIP.

history was not kind to the Polish after the war but the bravery of the Polish lives on in this story great story mate keep it up can't wait for the next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I will not read the story because its premise is not my thing, however, I could change the title to "Operation: Postal Office" I do not know you, but it seems to me something that would attract more attention...

Although if Derpy doesn’t go to "Postal" I think I could accuse him of lying...

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Indeed indeed, salute for the fallen and may their sacrifice be remembered.

When i first heard of this Event, it quite surprised me. Don't take this the wrong way but i am glad dinky made it

Intriguing take on the Polish Invasion. Their story is already heartbreaking, but with ponies – and, my goodness, Derpy – this takes on a different meaning.

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indeed, was quite the commission, but I'm glad i wrote it, glad you liked it

I understand that this comment might get disliked, but since I am polish: Gdańsk.

I like this take on the story. Thank you for giving light to the bravery of the Polish people and the atrocities they had to go through during the wars.

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Ur welcome, may they be remembered for much longer, and I know how it's spelled, i just ponified it. Polepony as the country and Gdance as the city, get it? Pole and dancing? Yeah, i thought that was smart.

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Oh wth :rainbowlaugh: That was very clever.

Now I understand it better. Thank you for clarifying. :twilightsmile:

I didn't expect to see art I got for a trade used in a story, unexpected cause I would have hoped someone would have asked me first, and there's no credit to the actual artist who drew that version of Derpy I asked for a while ago. That was a reference I asked for for use in a story I'm currently trying to write.

Can you please change the cover art? I would appreciate it.

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My apologies. I shall have it changed

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