There are two rowdy places in Ponyville. Sugarcube Corner is only the second rowdiest. This Nightmare Night, Pinkie Pie is just dying to get into the rowdiest place of all. The trouble is, she'll need Discord's help, and the Spirit of Chaos drives a hard bargain.
Note: This story contains death, but it is safe for everyone to read.
A big thank you to Skywriter for the betaread and proofread!
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Great to see this here!
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Death is present as a theme/occurrence in the story, but the story is not sad, horrific, nor dark.
I have mixed feelings about this story. On one hand, I think the premise is funny, and there were definitely some funny moments here and there. On the other hand, it felt much too long for a story that revolves around a single joke, and so much of that time was devoted to Discordisms, to the point where it felt a bit indulgent. I think this could have been much better if it had been trimmed down a bit to remove a lot of the unnecessary elements.
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Thanks for the feedback!