It has been sometime ever since Sombra's temporary return in the Crystal Empire and now he is back again to take over all of Equestria. Twilight Sparkle and her friends, old and new, must work together to stop the forces of evil once and for all.
This story takes place after Season 8 and starts off just before Season 9. There is some things that remain true from the actual show and the comics story of King Sombra, while others are slightly changed, or new things are added. I'm glad that the MLP fandom is still strong and hope everyone enjoys
I also have this story available on Wattpad and Archive of Our Own, under the same story title
Chapters (23)
Damn! Sombra being so fascinated with Twilight of their "destin rivalry" feels eerly similar to the likes of Shang Tsung and Shao Kahn to Liu Kang from MK.
Oh No, you asked for this.
Damn! Savage! Fluttershy will be very upset when she hears what happened to the poor dog.
Again, damn! First pony kills!!!???
Tell me about it.
Loyalty or Cooperation is jack shit to the villains. No wonder they always lose to heroes or anti-heroes when working together solves a lot of problems.
P.S. And so Sombra is now the defacto leader with this new "League of MLP Villains".
He will be way better than what Discord pretending to be Grogar ever was.
Yeah, his "mother" from the MLP IDW Comics.
So, about the infamous three's own Nightmares and Fears.
Tirek's was rather funny, but alright. Although, I thought it will make a lot better or more sense of seeing his brother; Scorpan, Mother; Queen Haydon, and especially his own Father; King Vorak. All being very disappointed to Tirek's fall to villainy.
While Chrysalis was a little pathetic on how she is too blind on her revenge or not quitting being a villainous.
That she couldn't accept that a different option for her kind's survivability to "feed" was right in front of her, and it was her own fault for not accepting a better future with the Ponies and the reformed Changelings.
( But that's just my personal preference. )
BUT, being sacrificed by a random giant dragon came out of nowhere? That was weird!?
And Cozy Glow's was sad. Having bad/terrible or neglectful parents makes a lot of sense on her character.
IF only Hasbro itself give her a freaking origin similar like that. Then fans won't hate her so much, or even sympathize and like her.
DON'T underestimate his inventions.
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Yep, Sombra is definitely going to have it out for Twilight in this story, thanks so much for the comment :)
Still can't believe that despite Twilight being one of the "smartest" ponies, and know about different worlds like Equestria Girls/MLP Human World thanks to the mirror portal.
She still doesn't take a hint that Pinkie Pie is a fourth-wall breaker, and make tons of references!?
Twilight, you have no idea on how important the Tardis is.
And is he trying to be Doctor Octopus/Otto Octavius?
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I completely respect your opinion. I'll admit, I struggled a bit in thinking of what the worst fears could be for Tirek and Chrysalis. Your suggestion actually does make a lot of sense, and definitely works much better as a fear lo. I'll admit I was kind of going for a little humor with Tirek's fear. For Chrysalis, I really wasn't sure what her worst fear could be, so I put in the scene with the other reformed changelings. The whole part with the dragon, I was kind of going for like a fear of fire thing. Depending on how I feel about it, I may change their fears to something that makes more sense and is more of a fear. Thanks for the comment :)
Exactly. And Twilight, you should know better!
Because the mirror portal itself does show you different worlds besides the Equestria Girls/MLP Human World.
There could be another MLP x Human World but with Marvel Superponies and DC Pony Heroes mixed together of all things?
So? This reforced my point that if there are magical comic books of all things? And there's probably a real fictional world where those comic books come from are real life!!??
I'm still SUS about that?
That's the same excuse that Otto Octavius try to say from the very beginning. And look what happened to him.
Those unique features on those arms will be very terrible for everybody/everypony if it goes to the wrong hands/hooves.
Oh brother! This is exactly what I was afraid of. And what does it mean "discorded", I highly doubt Discord would do anything bad again!?
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The chapter, To Be Discorded will definitely answer that, it will quite the chapter 😅👍
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And an evil Doctor Who/Whooves of all things would be an end of everything on Equestria.
Still feel it's rather silly and dumb excuse coming from Starlight and Trixie on "not helping" during the movie.
Considering on how Starlight is "oh so powerful" unicorn that can take on Alicorn Twilight.
But not against a couple of Storm Soldiers!? Seriously!?
Dang it, it's so obvious but they can't take the damn hint!?
Pinkie is a fourth-wall breaker! Don't they have comics that has similar characters like a pony version of Deadpool, Gwenpool, etc...?
Total ridiculousness.
Who this guy!?
Oh how right you are, Twilight. You will regret thinking that.
P.S. the scary stories are alright and cool references.
Dang it, are they really this naive!?
Although, I agree with Pinkie. Who ever come up with creepypasta anyway!!??
Yeah, that's very Sus.
WHEN do you think those two will finally go on a date!? Because, this is getting hectic that those two aren't try anything by this point?
Fluttershy does have a point.
Are you sure about that?
Oh how right you are.
You will regret saying that.
How come she or Celestia learn how to use Sombra's dark magic?
And is there obviously any "negative consequences" of using it?
Are those two serious, seriously!?
If burning it, the combined might of an alicorn and decently powerful unicorn like Cadence and Shining, or using a literal freaking Cannon doesn't bust down that indestructible door!!!
How the heck can Rainbow's punches or Applejack's kick will do anything against that!?
No offense to those two, but come on!
They should have freaking common sense!
It just confirms that those two aren't very bright in the intelligent apartment.
And Applejack paid that incompetence by injuring herself.
Didn't you hear what I just said that fire doesn't work!?
Okay, that was something. But it still didn't break down the door.
Twilight, you're so freaking hopeless!!!
Okay, you see. Just completely give up by this point. I highly bet Sombra himself will just casually unlock his own door.
Edit: I'm taking a break from reading and commenting for now. I will read the rest and comment tomorrow.
This story is really good!! Keep going, you are doing a good job!!
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Thanks a bunch! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!
Sombra doesn't have a plan. He's just an arrogant stallion who was full of himself as an air head villain like that Yakitori Ouja, Hellriser Phoenix from the anime High School DxD.
As of 03/04/2024, I have updated and added a bit more to Tirek and Chrysalis's fear sequences in the chapter, One True Master
Uh-oh, not good. (Bitting my nails in fear)
That can't be good. (Bitting my nails in fear)
This whole chapter was epic as all hell. Roaring to go for the next chapter!!