An unorganized mess who try's to work by a schedule, and fails repeatedly. Oh well. Nobody's perfect.
Celestia and Luna follow Radiant Hope to The Crystal Empire in order to stop Sombra's imminent reign of totalitarian terror. But what they find when they get there is anything but what they expected...
This story screws with a lot of elements like the chronology of the show and comics. Please keep that in mind while reading
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Can't wait for the next chapter
I'm curious to see what happens next. Hope was always my favorite character from the comics. In my interpretation (and my story) she's Sombra's love interest.
Oooh, well, this was nice and suspenseful! I noticed a very small spelling mistake in the first chapter:
Yes, a very small spelling error. I think that should be 'wrapped'?
Otherwise, some parts were a bit confusing, but that doesn't always have to be a bad thing. Some parts fit, others didn't... I wouldn't worry about it too much; the story is great.
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Thank you for pointing out the spelling and your comments. Itâs greatly appreciated.
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Oh, thatâs right, I read one of your stories. âSon of Shadowsâ I believe.
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Thank you for reading it! I appreciate that.
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Thank you for the grammar suggestion. I will gladly take you up on that.
Ahahahaha I love this fanfiction so much. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Thank you!
The synopsis and title makes it seem like it needs a comedy tag. Why isn't there one?
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It didnât cross my mind, especially when I think about where I want this story to go.
But if the tag limits will allow me, I might add a comedy tag.
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Looks like this is getting interesting.
Interesting.
Eh, the canonicity of the comics is weird. I doubt many will complain.
Come on!