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BlueyWaifu


Hi. I'm an avid pre-reformation changeling enjoyer. Talk to me on Discord! Bluey#9168

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Faltic, Restel, and Klaven. Three changelings previously involved with the invasion of Canterlot now find themselves in the bustling city of Manehattan after the failed raid. With Faltic being in need of love, finding a new love subject was no difficult task. However, his latest food source feels... different. Genuine, perhaps? Follow this trio of changelings as they live their scouting life in Manehattan, operating out of the same hotel room, and whatever else may happen!



Big thanks to the artist of the cover!
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Chapters (17)
Comments ( 39 )

Just want to say I absolutely love this story, as well as you last one. Both really well written. Can’t wait to see the next chapter (side note out of curiosity do you take story requests?)

A good start. I look forward to more updates.

Lovely opening. The chemistry between these three seems pretty chill and relaxed for pre-Thorax changelings -- and I definitely have a soft spot for that. I'd say that this story should be getting more attention!

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Thank you so much for the kind feedback! Pre-Thorax changelings are the best and there's plenty more interaction with the boys in the story to come

Well, I'm waiting for moar! Keep it up :twilightsmile:

I was looking for a good simple changeling Romance/Slice of life fic, and it's exactly what I wanted. The dynamic between the changeling trio is funny, Faltic's relationship development is nice, just overall a very wholesome story, thank you for writing this.

Finally, another chapter!

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Wanted to get that cover art on there before I continued :D We're so back

That's a golden friendship between those three if I ever saw one.

So, this is what the city looks like from their room window?

Nice to see the trio back again. Hope Faltic and Whimsy's relationship pick up nicely.

Great to see you back again!

The tension between Faltic and Whimsy is making me want more. Seriously, all we know about their date is from Faltic's mouth, and then she suddenly shows up in the convention center. I'm begging for the next chapter to resolve this...

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The next chapter will be fun, I hope

From the clues I have seen, Whimsy is a Changeling too I’m guessing. I’ve thought of it being like that for a while now, but stating how Faltic is always tired after seeing Whimsy, I really think Whimsy is a Changeling.

She was a Changeling! :rainbowdetermined2: Like, the only other one that you mentioned. :trixieshiftright: Now that i think about it, that made the most sense. Bravo. :twilightsheepish:

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I was so happy to see your comment last chapter. You sly dog :moustache:

I had my suspicions that she was also a Changeling, but not her ex.

Well, the plot just escalated in interest.

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I thought it would be neat if it was that other changeling he mentioned liking, but I didn't think it would actually happen. :twilightoops: Cause there was no way that the author would actually go down that route. :derpyderp1: Clearly I was wrong :twilightsheepish:

Woah... that wasn't expected at all.

Please, I want more.

I see. You set up expectations very well, I kinda saw this twist coming but wasn't 100% sure

The cringe of poor Faltic's dream.


I just had a horrible idea of where this story could go and I hope it doesn't go there:

The Whimsy that Faltic saw at the convention wasn't acting very Whimsy-like, because it wasn't her!

What if Whimsy is real and the Whimsy that Faltic saw at the convention was just Cyril using Whimsy's appearance as a disguise?

And now Faltic is going to ruin what he has with the real Whimsy by believing it's Cyril.

I feel that this chapter could improve a little. Faltic's emotions seem to be a bit too chill for a revelation as huge as this; perhaps make him undergo stronger, more vibrant emotions?

Aside from that, that's a really interesting development! I wonder if Whimsy was just Cyril all along, or she's a real pony and Cyril's just taking up a disguise.

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What’s your requests?

Faltic's insecurities ooze throughout this chapter... I love it!

As far as the author's notes go, I think you're doing an incredible job doing exactly what you want to do with this story.

Y'know... how do we know that Cyril doesn't know that it's Faltic? This has all been from the trio's POVs, and not often Cyril's/Whimsy's, if at all. What if she knew the entire time that Enthrall is Faltic and was just letting things ride themselves out in a comfortably slow burn until she was finally 'accidentally' discovered.

Also, Faltic's freshly rediscovered trepidation over screwing up a new chance at a previous relationship? It humanizes(Pony-izes?) him and helps to identify with him better, which I personally enjoy a lot.

With a final thought, its also kinda retroactively funny to me that Faltic picked Enthrall as his pony name, and he used to be more or less enthralled by the idea of being together with Cyril.

Hey, your story is great, and also it's hard to find old changeling appreciation nowadays, so thank you for this.

It looks to me like Faltic should let it go tbh. Cyril's impressions of him are pretty much ruined, and it they don't even appear to have much in common. Looks like an unhealthy obsession at this point.

I'm willing to bet that that filly with bubble gum was Cyril in disguise. Wouldn't take it past her to spy on her "love subject"

This chapter is a great example of how to change the reader's perception of a character. Faltic is screwed no matter what.

I now see why Cyril would have such a problem with Restel. Before I thought she was a stickler for rules, though now I can see that there was other reasons behind it... I don't what anything bad to happen to Faltic, but I don't see a way of weaseling out of this. If all happens as I think it is going to go, of which is like saying 'I think there is a crust on apple pie', Faltic is in for a really bad time.

This turn of events is absolutely not what I could expect. I had been confused about Faltic's worries about Restel in the previous chapter, but now it's all clear.

It was heart wrenching to read while being aware that no, Faltic won't make the right choice in the end since we already know the outcome

"Tomorrow." Was Klaven's simple response as both he and Restel entered. The inside appeared just as big as the outside. Three stories of floors were visible in front of them, as was evident with other ponies walking along the glass railings higher up. An escalator going down was immediately in front of them, and more mannequins displayed the walls on either far side of them.

TOMORROW! Oh no. OH NOOOOO! Faltic you FOOOOOOOOOOL! I can only see this going well.

"Just kinda, stay home?" Restel asked.

The tragedy is inevitable now.

"Both of you need not be here. Let us be, please." Faltic had a difficult time conveying that confidently.

This might go better than I thought. Or not. Well shall see...

I didn't expect you to bring back those ponies from Canterlot into the story. I wonder if Skywalker will have a more significant role in the plot, with her knowing that they're changelings and all

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Nah, just a couple of my friends' OC's who helped me stay motivated and encouraged me to keep writing ;)

Romantically deceive on a Pony is the norm for Changelings, that's how they get food... but, I wonder, how will romantic deceive on another Changelings be viewed in Changeling society?

In this case it is obviously a mistake, a misunderstanding, and Faltic and company want to come clean, and because of the way Klaven and Restel are acting, situations similar to this may be a common occurrence among Changelings and therefore not a big deal; But Cyril may not be able or willing to see it that way.

Klaven (slaps Restel upside the head): Nice going, genius!

Restel, you idiot. Even if he hasn't seen Cyril in the room, is it not obvious that she'd be around Faltic at that moment?

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