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Big Imagination E


For those who wants to get to know me i may be 21 years old and feel like a teenage boy who may feel small but i got a BIG imagination inside me

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“Oh my. It’s a human. Is he okay Cadence?” One girl said.

I didn't ask about this last time.

But how do they know about humanity?

By the way, it's actually Alicorn without the extra I.

You and the girls ran fast to find the exit. When suddenly you were blocked by 3 bridesmaids who seem to be mind controlled.

“You’re not going anywhere.” They all said in monotone.

Suddenly you had an idea. You shot red lightning and shocked the 3. They screamed in agony and you then stopped. The 3 fell down unconscious and the girls looked with surprised reactions from what you did. You were also surprised by this.

Oh thank goodness. That's much better, and a good conscience on your main character.

P.S. I'm surprised that you kept Shining in canon?

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Right sorry. Anyways to answer your question. I’m guessing that the dragons they saw were walking and talking like humans so maybe that?🤔

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Dragons are totally different than humans. And there are other MLP bipedal species ( walks on two feet ) like the Minotaurs, Diamond Dogs, Cats, Birds, Storm Yetis, etc..

So that explanation makes little to no sense. Sorry.

And this is way before Equestria Girls or the introduction of Sunset Shimmer/The Dazzlings even happened.

But then again, Lyra ( Actually one of those bridesmaids. ) somehow knows and is obsessed with us ( humans. )!?

So there's that? :rainbowderp:

Other than that, the story is fine so far.

The demons obeyed his command and attacked the Changling army. They were killing them real good. Some were eating their souls out. Others were slashing them til they bleed to death. Even one demon ate a Changling's head right off! When they finished the demons disappeared back into underworld. Chrysalis saw her now dead army and looked at the Demon King in fear.

Hot damn! Hopefully, Thorax, his brother, and Ocellus weren't there. :twilightoops:

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Don’t worry. I’m pretty sure they weren’t.

"Whoa. That's cool man. Hey, how come when you open your eye, our world doesn't get destroyed?" Rainbow said.

"Umm. I dont have that ability. I can be called the Demon King for the other abilities I used but that one? Yeah I don't have that. That could be bad if I did." You said.

"I guess it's better that you don't have that world destroying ability." Applejack said.

Well duh! :applejackconfused: :ajbemused:

Why would you need that highly dangerous power!?

"Just shut up!! Get over that candy brain! It's just cake! It wasn't even that important anyway." You said.

Just bake a new one?

"I got rid of Chrysalis didn't I?! You really should be thankful that she didn't succeed or all lives would be taken!" You said.

"He's right Rarity. If it weren't for him we would have been done for. Besides I actually like having him around." Rainbow said.

"Thank you Rainbow. At least someone gets it." You said.

He's right. And as for Rainbow Dash. This is actually one of the few stories I've had ever read, where Rainbow Dash wasn't a total OOC jerk or antagonizing the displaced human.

Thank you for making this different and nice.

"Maybe stick with Demon. But other than that sure you can." You said accepting your nickname Demon.

Why not your name?

Everyone left Twilight's place and Demon went with Rainbow to stay at her place. He was beginning to develop some connection with Rainbow but didn't see it yet. Was he beginning to have feelings? Guess he'll find out later.

So, both Rainbow and possibly Cadence? A unique combination. But how do you deal with it with a nice Shining?

WOW!! What a fight that was! Tune in to see a sexy dream and Demon seeing two familiar ponies he blasted out.

Is that who I think they are? :unsuresweetie:

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Yes. The two guards he blasted away. Now they want revenge😈

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I was kidding. Of course it's not them. What exactly were you thinking they were?

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Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon? Well i'll make it look like they returned and want revenge.😈

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Again, they will pathetically lose. He is the demon king for a dang reason.

"Sorry babe. The love poots is a condition I have when I got really close to someone and love him so much that my tummy had nervous gas bubbles inside." Rainbow said.

The f**k!? Is that a real thing?

"That's what you thought. After our last encounter Nightmare Moon here had I chance to resurrect me. She also distracted you by fighting a fake version of her buying us time to plan our revenge." Chrysalis said.

Seriously, she just casually revived someone back to life!?

Then they combined their magic and blasted him far away while he was screaming his head off. The evil royals smirked and prepared their revenge plan. Demon kept flying til he landed straight into a cave. He rolled on the ground til he hit his head on the crystal stand which hold a ruby skull knocking him out cold.

Well, that was BS! :ajbemused:

He turned seeing the ruby skull. Then it glowed brightly and started to take a form of a wrestler he watched back home. He was the spirit of a man with black hair and beard. He was originally the first Demon King in NXT. That was Finn Balor. He looked at Demon as he was surprised.

Who!?

"Nightmare Moon! Queen Chrysalis! You just made a fatal mistake! Now get ready to suffer cause the Demon King is coming for your souls!! Ponies I'll save you and everyone in Equestria if it's the last thing I do!! Canterlot! Here I come. And I'll be more powerful than ever!" Demon said as he took off into the sky heading for Canterlot.

Make those two pieces of shit to ever regret messing with you. :pinkiecrazy:

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Sorry dude. I didn't mean to piss you off. :fluttershyouch:

"Easy. You have the power of the Demon King. All you need to do his take the Raging Ruby Skull and boost your power up." Finn said.

"You sure it will help me stop those two for real?" Demon said.

"Yes. The Raging Ruby Skull will give you new abilities to use against them. You must use all your strength to stop the evil royal duo." Finn said.

"Well ok Finn. I've gotta to kill them for real making sure they never return." Demon said.

"Yes you do. Take the Raging Ruby Skull and boost your power. Equestria needs the Demon King." Finn said as he vanished into thin air.

But isn't your current power as the Demon King already enough to possibly kill the both of them?

Whatever, more power to make you more OP than ever I guess. :unsuresweetie:

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Only upset that he just got knocked out so easily, but that was it. Did you read the rest?

"What the hell?! He's got a rocket launcher?!" Chrysalis said.

You live in a cartoon fantasy world, how do you even know that!?

"Ok. I give up! We can't even get one attack on you! Please spare us and we won't hurt everyone again!" Chrysalis said.

"HAHAHAHAHA!! I still ain't sparing you asswipes!! I told you that you make a grave mistake and now you're paying for it! This is the end for real fuckers!" The Demon King said.

He conjured a huge ball of fire and got ready to aim.

"No!! You can't do this!! Not again!" Nightmare Moon said.

"HAHAHAHAHA!! SEE YOU IN HELL FUCKERS!!" The Demon King said.

He threw the ball of red fire at and burned them alive. They screamed in agony as the flesh began melting off their bodies til they were nothing but piles of boiled blood and bones. Then the skulls that laid right there were crushed by the Demon King's feet. He let out a demonic roar knowing he won the battle. Then the transformation was undone and you returned to normal with the Raging Ruby Skull in your hand. Everyone cheered and ran to you. Even Rainbow hugged you for a victorious battle.

Good riddance! :pinkiecrazy:

"Well there was no way I was gonna let everyone suffer. And it was all thanks to the Raging Ruby Skull. Hey Celestia. Take this and put it in the Vault. You never know when I might need it in the future." Demon said handing Celestia the relic.

Can you really trust her with that? Thought you could have kept it yourself.

"Ok you know how I said that I had the love poots? Well I actually made that up. It wasn't a real condition. It was only gas problems. Sorry for lying to you." Rainbow said.

Hmm, I know there was something fishy about that. :unsuresweetie:

While this story has potential it jumps around to much while you don't have to explain everything not explaining at all is a problem.

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Sorry man. I just wanted you to like it. I didn't know that it jumped around too much.

i hope u plan to continue this

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