You and the girls ran fast to find the exit. When suddenly you were blocked by 3 bridesmaids who seem to be mind controlled.
“You’re not going anywhere.” They all said in monotone.
Suddenly you had an idea. You shot red lightning and shocked the 3. They screamed in agony and you then stopped. The 3 fell down unconscious and the girls looked with surprised reactions from what you did. You were also surprised by this.
Oh thank goodness. That's much better, and a good conscience on your main character.
P.S. I'm surprised that you kept Shining in canon?
Dragons are totally different than humans. And there are other MLP bipedal species ( walks on two feet ) like the Minotaurs, Diamond Dogs, Cats, Birds, Storm Yetis, etc..
So that explanation makes little to no sense. Sorry.
And this is way before Equestria Girls or the introduction of Sunset Shimmer/The Dazzlings even happened.
But then again, Lyra ( Actually one of those bridesmaids. ) somehow knows and is obsessed with us ( humans. )!?
I didn't ask about this last time.
But how do they know about humanity?
By the way, it's actually Alicorn without the extra I.
Oh thank goodness. That's much better, and a good conscience on your main character.
P.S. I'm surprised that you kept Shining in canon?
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Right sorry. Anyways to answer your question. I’m guessing that the dragons they saw were walking and talking like humans so maybe that?🤔
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Dragons are totally different than humans. And there are other MLP bipedal species ( walks on two feet ) like the Minotaurs, Diamond Dogs, Cats, Birds, Storm Yetis, etc..
So that explanation makes little to no sense. Sorry.
And this is way before Equestria Girls or the introduction of Sunset Shimmer/The Dazzlings even happened.
But then again, Lyra ( Actually one of those bridesmaids. ) somehow knows and is obsessed with us ( humans. )!?
So there's that?![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
Other than that, the story is fine so far.
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Okay man. Your right. Sorry
While this story has potential it jumps around to much while you don't have to explain everything not explaining at all is a problem.