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Valiant Charge
Why do we fight? To protect home and family, to preserve balance and bring harmony. The true question is not why we fight but rather "What is worth fighting for?"
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Wow! What a great start!
But shouldn't there also be a death, romance, and dark tag? Also, will some of the old cast appear here? Or will us readers be able to request our OC's like in the old version?
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thanks for the missing tags.
Most of the cast is already filled out so no. No other OC's will appear in this fic by request.
11690093
Ok, but are some of those OCs from the original? Or are some of them meant to be very similar to those from the old story? E.g. Crafty, Marshall, Sergeant Quartz, Bronze Pommel?
P.S: Romance between some of the rebels will still be a thing right? Like Wulfric, AJ, and Dash. Or Luna and Marshall? I'm asking cause, the romance tag still isn't there.
P.P.S. I'm personally hoping that the royals(Chrysalis, and Celestia or Luna) take part in the war and join the rebels. I loved how the Emperess and Princess Luna, commanded their own resistances against the corrupt nation until they all joined forces together.
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No they will not be in this fic. This will be a whole brand new cast and yes romance will be a theme in this
11690100
Okay
Nice, let go for another round
Hope this revamp version will have noticeable change than the original, some villains turn heroes and some heroes turn villains
11690109
Yup; but you mean like how Chrysalis and the changelings turned good, and how the Nobles and brainwashed Equestrians turned bad right? Cuz those are mainly the only changes between heroes and villains in the original. And I really liked those; the former villain fighting on the side of good, and the bad guys being punished for their crimes. Blueblood was never really good to begin with, but that was ok as well...
And so the journey begins again, spun with a different thread.
At some caribou had some decency and moralities if it involves women but I hate to see AJ get raped by that peacock sucker Ragnar guy.
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Ciphers, I meant to reply to your post but due to some error, it said that it instead replied to a completely different message from another story; I fixed it now.
11690219
Well mainly only the Stonehooves were evil like that, and I hate to say this but, due to the non-con tag, and based on the stuff from the original, it seems likely we are gonna see rape of some of the Main 6. Including AJ, maybe.
11690228
And this is why Caribou are the sworn enemies of all bronies. They’re awful.
You know, if a human came to Equestria and granted some powers, they will used it to protect the ponies from the caribou and stop them from invading like raiders they are.
11690168
I liked how the original had these...uh, narrations or descriptions at the beginnings, and sometimes at other parts, of each chapter that sort of zooms out and just recaps many events, everything that had been going on, and the settings and such...
I mean, personally they felt cool and made the reading of the action feel exciting. Like watching a movie and you feel like you're in the setting. Who else thinks so?
11690232
Well...Technically not all Caribou, Remember, they're not all bad, at least not in stories that include the good ones.
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You mean like this? https://www.fimfiction.net/story/462877/the-devil-of-the-caribou
11690247
I'm sorry. It just that Dainn had gotten my blood boiled and earned my wrath. Also, I want some humans go to the caribou land to stop the invasion.
Don't forget the Valerian dragons this time
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No i mean making the revamped version differs from the original Fall of Equestria: For Honor
Give these characters different fates to make the story unpredictable and fun
like giving someone whos is the bad guy in the previous stories into a heroes in revamped version and vice versa
Blueblood seems to be an interesting case. from someone with ambition, gets desperate, makes a deal with Sombra and become pure evil. He still has some good side in him like how he tries to fix what he screws up.
Too bad the old stories never talk about it again and treat him like your typical pure evil dark lord. Hope the story this time will make him more gray, or even a hero with a different fate, who knows, someone from the Equestria government who blames Celestia's regime is the reason why Equestria fell and want to change it
but most importantly: make Lock confused
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I'm a little confused, does this anti-Celestia person/pony become good or bad? Did you mean that they caused the Fall or did you mean that they thought she was the reason why the Fall happened? Change it how? And how would that make Lock confused?
Lot of questions here...Sorry
P.S. Many Nobles, barons, and lords in Canterlot betrayed the Princesses out of greed, cowardice, or belief of superiority over the lower classes that Dainn granted them. Not to mention stallions who were already bad guys beforehand; Wind Rider and others who naturally didn't like the Alicorns' rule
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You mean the Frost Wyrms? I thought they were meant to appear in the next story/Game of Thrones, 15 years later... But hey, Huge Ice-breathing primal Dragons joining the battles may be interesting...
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I get it, reading the original For Honor makes me infuriated at the nobles, stonehooves, slavers, and every other bastard who got what they deserved. Another great thing about all these stories Valiant made, is these pitiful excuses of living beings being tortured, humiliated, and slaughtered like the pigs they are.
I mean, I'm no sadist, but watching/reading about the executions, torture, and massacres that the rebels & allies did in both original stories makes me feel good and satisfied
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True and then there's the original Fall of Equestria story. After seeing that one shot that my buddy KR Chrome wrote, it made me concerned about the bronies getting picked on by bullies and they couldn't even defend themselves if they go physical. And ironic as it sounds, it did help me on creating the story that involves humans going to their country to stop a tyrant from breaking the barrier and try to conquer Equestria with the help of both Yabuki and War Monkey. I hope you have time to read this. It may be a rough draft but it’s a good start and I was trying to make it like my buddy’s one shot:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/500567/guardians-of-harmony-rise-of-the-knights
And the second one for you to get the idea:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369378/equestria-falls-no-more-kamen-rider-jam-champion-of-equestria
11690100
The only major protagonist you included from the original was Wulfric.
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Yeah...
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Although Valiant stated there'd be a brand-new cast, since Wulfric and Surt(from GoT) are here, maybe there'd be a few more from the old timeline/universe/two stories. I'm not sure...
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No, Valiant told me he was planning on adding OC Valyrian dragons to this version
11690432
that was GoT
I hope Flash will be alright. I got to say, this little remake of your original story looks great so far. At least this one you had Twilight get away safely
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Oh yeah, well as long as you're still going to include the main characters bonding with Valyrian dragons in this version I don't care if they show up in For Honor or GoT Equestria.
By the way if you need ideas for Valyrian dragon OCs, you could ask Saberrex if you can borrow his OCs on DeviantArt.
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mmm sorry dude. All OC slots have been filled for this revamp
11690592
Wait, does that mean No Valyrian dragons?
Something tells me Celestia, Luna, and Cadance have their wings bound, strapped to their bodies and have magic canceling rings on their horns, same with Rarity’s horn, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy’s wings.
11690593
not in this revamp, sorry.
11690600
Nuts, I was really looking forward to reading about Beorn riding a dragon into battle
11690601
this is the For Honor fic. Beorn's not born...yet.
11690602
Oh I don't care if there are no dragons in For Honor, I just wanted the dragons to be part of the storyline. And if that means they only show up in the sequel story, so be it
11690604
Ohhh! I gotcha.
Well so far so good with this new version of the original and I’m looking forward to seeing how things will both change yet be similar in one way or another and how this goes later on
11690232
If they are all embrace Dainn’s perverted ideals and such yes but who knows there might be those who don’t and are better then most of their kin
11690239
Maybe or stop the caribou from interfering with their take over, it all depends on the person and what their goals/ideals are
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That’s deep and my goal is to keep Equestria safe and send the humans to the caribou’s homeland to stop the invasion.
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That name sounds like a wolf for a caribou don’t you think?
11690605
Could you at least think of a description for the war beast that the caribou are riding?
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So there will be Valyrian dragons, they just won't appear until the story that takes place right after this one right?
Welp the Warborn and their allies are out for blood and the Stonehoves and their follower's are gonna feel that wrath so hard I almost pitied them. Not really and can’t wait to see how they die the deaths they deserve
Sucks for the princesses and the elements here but hell is on the way and wonder how Twilight will adapt to this. It’s time for her to wake up in the real world and see that life is not a fairy tail like she lived before and that friendship can’t solves everything but a weapon and the will to use it and spill blood dose. I’m sure this could prevent her from making a very stupid and idiotic decision like she did in canon that led to the pony separation in gen5
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And I agree on that and hey maybe help change them for the better and there’s a better way to live and such
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Agreed and end Dainn’s tyranny.
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already thought of one. They'll be described in the upcoming chapters
11690754
Indeed and have him impaled in a spike with whats between his legs cut off and shoved down his throat
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Btw, did you come up with the description of Dainn?