*All characters from My Little Pony belong to Hasbro
*All human characters belong to Israel Yabuki
On their special outing, the citizens of Equestria received a new visitor, a Caribou from a far distant land.
He warns them of an ancient evil that will be Unleashed in Equestria, but because of the laws, no pony, not even the Mane 6 can enter. Except... For the husband 6 and Emily.
Having no other choice, the husbands and Emily embark on a dangerous journey to save their home. But along the way, siblings reunite, a true king will rise, and the husbands and Emily will become something greater than they could ever imagine.
Special shoutout to my friend/editor/partner Dragonknight92 and Chrome for helping me write the story
Set during season seven, between after episodes 24-26
That was rather a very stupid and dumb move on that King's part. Considering that the deadly consequences bites him, his kingdom, and possibly the entire FRICKIN world in the ass. Because, since the Ponies and the other Races won't help them stop a certain evil prince from conquering his kingdom. But, it's too late by now.
I hope that when he goes to the afterlife. He WON'T be very proud of himself, for making that smart decision to prevent the ponies and other races to help him STOP Dainn much sooner! That dumb idiot! 🤦 🤦 🤦
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I know right? Dainn is a villain. And if we know him from every stories that involves him, he still has his ambition. I really wish that someone would stop him before a terrible future befalls on the ponies and I hate that reindeer.
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How is that a feedback for the story?
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I have no idea. I don't even know where that guy even got that idea
10927669
Agreed, that's why I call King Dorian a FRICKIN idiot for also "forbidding" potential allies that could help him STOP Dainn from rising to power.
I guess it's karma for making a stupid decision, thus his kingdom is taken over. And even him and his royal loyalists are DEAD!!! And Equestria, and the entire world is in danger right now!!!!
Thanks a lot, dumbass ( King Dorian )!!!!!!
Now, our Human heroes have to clean up his mess, and I hope they get highly rewarded after this!
10927840
. At least the humans are protecting Equestria from a terrible fate that is worst than death. This story is better than the other ones that involves Dainn conquering Equestria with an iron fist since he's a sexist against females. Mainly mares.
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Yeah, those "Fall of Equestria" stories, I get what your saying. But remember, their are other stories that have bashed, displaced, and even have crossovers where many characters from other franchises didn't like what Dainn and his Caribou are doing. And they decided to punished them in a bloody and brutally fashion.
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But I wish they would come to Equestria early to prevent this tragic event from happening.
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Plus I don’t know any stories that have what you said.
10927871
Yep, I'm a bit upset with that too. He was a late messager in a very dire situation like this.
10927872
This is the group I was talking about, have fun reading them:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211678/the-caribou-hunters-club
10928145
Same here. I just hate seeing those ponies get enslaved. This is the reason why me and War Monkey made this story so that he will face justice at the hands of the otherworlders.
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I like that!
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Thx.
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Genus and Fluttershy were feeding some of the animals that chose to come with them, especially Angel Bunny, being its usual obnoxious self, with Genus thinking How that rabbit became obnoxious is beyond me (Hey, where's Trusty?)
As soon as she closed the door, Beau said, "You can remove your wing from my face now."
"Not until we finished washing up and getting dressed," said Twilight.
"Oh I get it," said Beau as he teased her. "You just don’t want me to look at anypony’s boobs except yours, right?" (You do know the kids are still there right? Also where are they now?)
All of a sudden, the door slowly opened. And from out of nowhere, two certain ponies popped out, smirking as they looked at their parents, then each other, and then to them again. Though they were only a year and a half older, they had already spoken their first words and were already as crafty as their Mother. They tippy hoof into the room. They were crawling like insects and didn’t make any noise. (Let's go with kids since Pecan is half human because of his father's skin)
Without saying a word, she planted her lips hard onto her husband's and the two passionately kissed, not wanting to let go of one another. But as they continued to make out, the bed creaked and squeaked from their constant movement. At the same time, a certain colt, Bolt Junior walked in, groaning. (Don't you mean, 'boy'?)
Sure enough, Sweetie Belle stood by the door and said ‘Morning Rarity, morning Silver.’ (Do you think Sweetie Belle heard everything of what Silver said about what Rarity did like in the Sisterhooves episode and that Crystal say that her cooking stinks? What would she react and think of that?)
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Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. I'll start fixing them now.
Also, i dont think Sweetie Belle heard Crystal talking.
Also, the kids left in one direction whilst Twilight and Beau went to the other.
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Then you might want to write that one; the kids left in one direction while Twilight and Beau went to the other.
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And did Sweetie Bell heard what Silver said about how Rarity improvise the stuff she made like in the Sisterhooves episode?
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I'll get right on it
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Nope, thankfully not
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Okay then.
As soon as she closed the door, the kids ran off to meet up with Crystal and Moonlight whilst Beau and Twilight went to the other direction. (You do realize that Moonlight is with the kids the whole time aside from her parents.
Beau and Twilight appeared out of nowhere via teleporting with Twilight’s magic, while they were also thankfully dressed with Moonlight following suit.
Genus and Fluttershy were feeding some of the animals that chose to come with them, especially Angel Bunny, being its usual obnoxious self, with Genus thinking How that rabbit became obnoxious is beyond me, before Trusty appeared from out of nowhere and licked his face, making him laugh before he walked over to play with Warm Breeze. (when you mean, 'he', you meant the dog right? Also, Warm Breeze is helping Crystal with knitting some sweaters for the little critters for winter.)
After they taken Balin to the Castle of Friendship, where's Discord anyway?
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Oh yeah, and Angel Bunny and Trusty?
As soon as she closed the door, the kids ran off to meet up with Crystal and Moonlight whilst Beau and Twilight went to the other direction. (You do realize that Moonlight is with the kids the whole time when she came with her parents right?)
Genus and Fluttershy were feeding some of the animals that chose to come with them, especially Angel Bunny, being its usual obnoxious self, with Genus thinking How that rabbit became obnoxious is beyond me, before Trusty appeared from out of nowhere and licked his face, making him laugh before he walked over to play with Warm Breeze. (When you say 'he', you meant the dog right? Also Warm Breeze is helping Crystal with knitting some sweaters for the little critters to wear in case of winter.)
When Beau, Twilight and the others take Balin to the Castle of Friendship, where's Discord, Angel Bunny and Trusty?
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Within mere Moments, the Mane 6, their husbands, Spike, Emily and all of the kids quickly came together to find both Apple Slice and Bolt Jr. hugging one another, trembling in fright. (Also, Discord is still with them.)
10945066
I'll look into it once I get back, and yes, by he I meant trusty
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I think the animals went back to Fluttershy's cottage, but I'll try to find a way to add Discord into the mix.
10945105
Okay then. And sorry for sending you the feedback three times. I thought I forgot to send it but it turns out I did and I don't want to pressure you.
10945113
Eh, no problem. It never hurts to have another set of sharp eyes to spot a mistake.
10945137
So true.
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Speaking of which, should I post the 2nd chapter soon?
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I’ll work on it and I’ll text you when I’m done.
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Gotcha, thanks for the update
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Your welcome.
And after their night, they got married a few months later. And not long after that, she gave birth to their son, Bolt Junior, who had his mother’s hair and eyes, but his father’s skin color. (Don't forget his mother's wings since he's a flyer like RD).
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Alright, changed it like you said.
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Thx.
10948757
You're welcome
this is getting interesting
10955110
Thank you. Dragoknight92 is currently overlooking the others, but as soon as he's finished, we'll post them as soon as possible. And if you want when I have the time I can send you the coup scene.
You do know that Busterleader92 and Dragonknight92 are the same person who edited this story right?
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Whoops, my bad.
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It’s okay.
This is a very good story and I'm looking forward to chapter 3.
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Glad you liked it.
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Another chapter is out if you're interested.
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You're very welcome.
Say War Monkey, when they get to Moria what happened to the wagon they’re have along with the Grogu beast?
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Oh, they ditched the wagon but they kept the beast. Can't just throw animals away like that.
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Well we must have missed the part of what happened to the wagon and the Grogu Beast in the chapter.
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Doh, knew I should have added that part.