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Naren


May Harmony Prevail.

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This story is a sequel to A Knight's Wrath.


The night before the Canterlot wedding, Twilight Sparkle was kidnapped by Queen Chrysalis. Transformed into a changeling, she would have followed any of her Queen's commands. Now that Chrysalis is dead, slain by a Knight's hands, Twilight can begin her recovery. Unfortunately for her, the wheel that is fate continues to spin on, and one of the greatest threats Equestria has ever known is about to return.

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Most of her body was the way it should be, and her cutie mark was still there. That was when the horror began. Her horn was the color it should have been, but it was twisted now, sharp and filled with holes. Her teeth were now pointed, shaped like a predator’s. The worst part was her eyes. They were violet once more, but her pupils had become slits. She was still a monster.

It was at that moment that murdering her former friends and mentor was the right thing to do. Damn the consequences :twilightangry2:.

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If not. She clearly's now despised them, and not forgive them for a long ass time, and for good reason too.

I see Fluttershy is still a chump. She should've stayed with Twilight, whether she liked it or not, and damn Rainbow Dash.

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And do what be Twilight's New Queen?!
You read what happen, she accidently started to become Twilight's Queen or brought back the trauma.
She stayed Twilight would freaked out more and attacked.

[bThe Journey to the cold north has begun, despite how much Twilight hates it. Equestria needs her, and so despite her pain, she will try to step up to the challenge. The question remains, will she stand, or will she break? Should she stand, then Harmony will Prevail. Should she break...]

All shall fall.

“Ponies.” He said, his voice deep and powerful. “Kneel, or face Sombra.”

“GO!” Shining Armor roared, already in motion. “We’ll buy you time, but you have to go!” At his words, Twilight, the girls, Spike, and Cadance fled.

“You…you are soldiers of her-the blazing sun. DEATH IS A FATE TOO GOOD FOR YOU!” Sombra roared behind them. As they fled, they could hear the sounds of battle behind them, the Royal Guards buying time for the Heroes of Equestria.

Blah blah blah. Big talk for a loser. Hasbro failed to Sombra interesting. I seriously doubt this will be any different.

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Then I will endeavor to exceed you expectations. If you don’t mind me asking-what did you want out of Sombra, that wasn’t done by Hasbro?

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Nothing. That is how bland and uninteresting I find Sombra. Nothing Hasbro, IDW, or this fandom, has done has changed my mind on that. And if professional writers have failed that badly, I'm not holding out any hope a fanfic writer can do better.

Also, why are you replying in italics? Might work in the AN, but now you just sound weird.

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I thought it looked kinda cool, but at the same time you have a point. When it comes to Sombra, there has been one characterization of him that I really liked. His depiction in “Fall of an Empire” a Royal Canterlot Symphonic Metal Orchestra, by L-Train, is really good.(https://youtu.be/vtBqTFsiLxM?si=_UtRsRGVIXIgnrZe)
This Sombra is not the same as that one, but he will be a bit darker compared to canon. His words are not a falsehood, death would be preferable to the Guards Fate.

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