• Published 28th Dec 2011
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Why me? - Ice



A human wakes in everfree forest only to find he's in equestria how will he react? find out now

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Epilogue

Since I love you guys so much and the ending sucked so HERE WE GO

"WHAT?" shouted Brice.

"We...we..don't know what happened she was fine compared to you but something was killing her and even Celestia thought we should have pulled the plug." said Rainbow Dash hanging her head in sorrow

"NO I WON'T BELIEVE IT!" said Brice as leaped over them,into the hall and began frantically searching for Twilight's room.It was for a brief second but it was enough he saw a room labeled "Morgue"

"Please Celestia don't let it be true." he thought as he entered the room.After a minute of looking he saw what he didn't want to see,one of the blocks had the name "T.Sparkle" on it.Brice collapsed to his knees crying.

"It's not fair,it should have been me." he thought

"It's okay sugercube" he turned to see AJ with her hoof on his shoulder.

"No AJ it's not,it's all my fault" he felt a sharp pain at the back of his head.

"What they hay was that for?"

"For being so stupid do you think Twilight blames you?"

"Yes" he got another hit to the head.

"Brice we worry about you can't blame yourself."

"Give me one good reason why I can't." he said tears still pouring from his eyes

"Cause Twilight loved you and it would break her heart to see you like this."

"W..what?" he ruubed the tears from eyes and stood up.

"Feeling better?" she gave a slight grin .

"Nope,much worse." her grin disappered as he walked out the door.
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Five days later.

"GET OUT HERE NOW!" yelled Rainbow Dash

"LEAVE ME ALONE!" shouted back Brice he had locked himself in the library for the past five days and wouldn't let anypony in.

"IF YOU DON'T LET ME IN I'LL BREAK IN!"

"YOU COME IN HERE AND I WILL BUCKING KILL YOU!" Rainbow Dash backed away from the door she could tell he meant it.

"FINE BE A PATHETIC LONER THEN!" she screamed as she flew off

"Ugh dammit where did I put that book on ancient stones?" he looked around the room until he heard a knock from the door

"Ugh....Who is it?" he called out.

"Dude it's me and Zeph we came to come check up on you."

".....Come on in then." he said unlocking the door.
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"Wow that's brutal man." said Zephyr after hearing what Brice told him about the past five days

"Yheah well I've been in here trying to find out something to bring her back and I think I've found it." said Brice showing them the book.

"Újjáéledési kő...what's that?"

"Well if I'm right it translates as revival stone." said Brice in a matter of factly tone

"So where is it?" said Blue Breeze

"It's located on the tip of the mountain the Canterlot hangs off of." he said

"What are we waiting for lets go." said Zephyr

"Heh I knew I could count on you guys c'mon then you'll have to let me ride one of you then.

"Ugh it's gonna be a long trip" thought Zephyr
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"Okay I'm gonna get something to eat wanna meet up here in an hour then head up?" said Blue

"Ugh,fine I've waited five days I can wait an hour." said Brice as the trio set off their on ways.He approched the side of Canterlot which was a huge drop which would kill anypony who feel from it but it wasn't a pony falling it was Brice.He had been falling for around a minute when suddenly he heard a boom and looked towards the noise to see a Rainbow streak head towards him.
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Author's Note:Not a great improvement but I feel it's better than the ending I gave you guys but now you have to read why us? to see the rest.

Comments ( 16 )

well

the ending is better

but the grammar and punctuation kinda stole the good-ness of it

we now need a epliouge to this epilouge i want to know if twi gets revived or not

So basicly you rided on my back.

kewl

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124273
Agreed.

Regardless, I am honestly proud of you for going back and posting a better ending. :twilightsmile:

Ice

141542 0_0 shit teachers found my safe zone......RUN

Ice

146793 I know what you mean.146429 Heh cool

Ice

162255 Wait...really?

162551
............yes

Ice

163831.................intresting

Ice

246094 if you stopped at 13 keep reading.

Ice

261194 Probably not even the same country.

261723More than likely I'm like 100% sure we are nowhere near each other

Still a better ending then mass effect 3


Yep. I said it :moustache:

Ice

444694 True story.

92571
LOL I was about 5'11 when I was 12

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