It would be pretty funny if there was just an endless parade of aggrieved enemies of Twilight stumbling upon each other and mind controlling each other there, all while the enslaved Rarity brainwashes the Elements.

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Drat! You've uncovered my master plan!

No, I'm only kidding, but you're right, that would be a fairly amusing idea for a story. Maybe this story will eventually reach a point where I can add some non-canon "what if?" chapters...

Very nice chapter! Loved it!

The way you wrote Chrysalis in this one is ingenious and honestly makes me yearn for a story about that Chrysalis going up against the alicorns.

Lovely work on this story, particularly enjoyed the candle and spoon inductions, looking forward to seeing where it goes in the future!

Just finished reading this, and damn, it's a real shame it's been in hiatus -- this definitely has potential to be one of the greats of hypno/mind control on the site!

Out of curiosity, where have you published your furry/nonpony stories? I'd love to read those as well!

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Agreed, these three chapters definitely isn’t a lot of quantity, but the quality is A+ for sure!

One of my favorite stories on this site, even in its non-finished state!