What a lovely start. I eagerly await more.

Incredible work thus far. Just one thing:

Swaying slightly, femcum and water dripping in equal amounts, she stepped out of the tub onto the drenched carpet.

Did Rarity carpet her bathroom!? There's sinister plotting, and then there's outright horror.

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Thank you for the kind words! Updates may be infrequent, as I have multiple projects ongoing, but I've already got at least the next two chapters plotted out, so hopefully you'll be seeing them sooner rather than later ^.^

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Haha, nope! I was envisioning it more as a small, absorbent carpet right in front of the tub to soak up any excess water. The rest it tile - she's not some sort of monster, I promise!

Thank you for the kind words, though, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

This is great 👍

Something my eye kind of caught on:

Before she could mount the stairs, however, the mail caught her eye. Right…it had been so busy she hadn’t had time to actually go through it, and there it was, now perfectly dry and still sitting in the sink from this morning. Along with…the pegasus rolled her eyes, thrusting the candle to the side. She’d toss it in a second, once she got done going through the mail. Rarity shuffled quickly through the pile, mouthing along occasionally as she read. Nothing leapt out to her as terribly interesting, or needing her immediate attention, until she got to the very bottom of the pile.

Rarity is great, of course, but I do believe the only time she actually grew wings was with Twilight’s help.

absolutely fucking loved this; sexual f/f corruption mind control is 1 of the greatest wonders of the world!!! this was so well written and HAWTTT!!!