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DougtheLoremaster


You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster

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No one told her, and for seventeen years she never knew. She was always different. The scorching flames that made her mane and tail, and the fiery path she left in her wake. She was never quite able to put her hoof on it, that is until one day, her sister and her stumbled upon their mother's secret.
When the two sisters go on the run from their own family, they are determined to discover the truth. What happened that night seventeen years ago? With no idea what lies in store for them, they venture into the unknown.
The only clue they have is a strange golden amulet, engraved with the images of a falling snowflake, a leaf twisting in the wind, and a flickering dancing flame. And beneath those a single word:
Sana.

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Unsure if I'll pursue this, let me know your thoughts and feel free to vote using like or dislike, I'll take a look at the feedback within a week.

Well I'm definitely interested hope to see more because I like the premise. Sana how did you come up with that name?

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Sana. Pronounced Sauna, because she is a pony elemental constructed entirely of fire, and I felt in these situations Ember was far too common. Since she's the last of her kind I wanted an exotic, mystical and intriguing sounding name, so I chose Sauna. I then shortened it using the English language to sound the same but look different.

Also, I'm glad you are enjoying it.

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Do you know what the names Fia, Neoma and Yuma mean interestingly I choose those names for OC's of mine before I knew what they meant but when I found out I couldn't believe how well it worked.

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Fia is Italian and it means flickering flame, Neoma means new moon and Yuma is a Japanese name that means evening horse or pony.

That cover art reminds me of infinite eclipse's aqasha
Its nice!

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Would you like to know about them?

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Sure, feel free to send me an onsite mail. The comment section isn't the right place to explain a different story.

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