Twilight is a alicorn, meaning she would live far longer than most creatures. What happens when death takes her friends one by one in a very short time? Was death really to blame or were there other forces at play?
Characters: Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Zecora, Rara, Minuette, Vinyl Scratch, Tempest Shadow, Spitfire, Bon Bon, Braeburn, Lemon Hearts, Twinkleshine, Spike, Lightning Dust, Ocellus
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Chapters (21)
Damn, bitch dead
Ok
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Your characters die in most predictable and straightforward way. I get that you are going for shock value mostly, but there is literally nothing much more to it, not even a sadistic spin as a cherry on top.
But that might be just me, wanting a bit of showmanship. After all, I do not know where this is going
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You're far too kind.
I also suffer from a similar negative quality.
Oh no... Nevermind. I can't be kind at all so I'll tell the truth.
This is a story that is being written.
baby flurry heart
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Why are you saying this when you aren’t the one writing the story?
This fic hits different when you listen to this before reading each chapter:
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What about twilight
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she’s still alive
That's horrible what happened to Fluttershy
Couldn't Luna use her magic to teleport? Also, all the deaths were toooo short. I would have loved to read a lot about Rainbow's death, even though she is my fav character. I mean, who likes happy endings? They are soooooooo boring!!!
Well that was fast and jarring throwing flutter shy death first.
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Agreed but it could’ve been way worse.
Well at least she ahead on her orders for the night lords.
Hmmm
Noooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Damn you author and that unicorn/alicorn damn you
Umm shoot her/him or stab it with your horn
If happy tree friends was in MLP: FIM, that's what I been getting at with this entire story.
I don't have many theories on who this character could be that's killing everyone, clearly there very powerful if they managed to kill Celestia and Luna including Cadance and Shining Armor, because how could they get past all the guards? Well except Luna since she was somewhere entirely different.
I'm also curious when Twilight will make an appearance, by the looks of the description Twilight will be on of the main characters in this entire story, and if Twilight does die she probably won't die easily, but it's just a theory.
I noticed that Discord will also be in this story, probably might be another main character considering Discord is the lord of chaos and is probably invincible, especially since he can probably heal himself with a snap.
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I will say, once this story gets to that point Twilight and Discord will be main characters.