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Princess Celestia has been dethroned, Princess Luna is missing, and the Elements of Harmony have been sent into exile. But that’s old news.

Four years after a bloody war that raged across the continent of Equestria a supernatural winter rages as ponies try and survive under the rule of a cold ruler.

Twilight Sparkle and her friends have been called back to Canterlot and must now come to terms with the new kingdom that Equestria has become. As they learn to cope events conspire against them that force them back into the fight.

But a single question remains, who will they fight for?

Edited by the awesome TacoTown

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Comments ( 17 )

Its good. Really good. The ideas fresh it hip is hive its... its.. ok its really good. Like the Blueblood part. And the fact that the Tiara guy is not inherently evil. Just cold, like the winter. All in all this is pretty good, and you could take it a lot of ways.

down at her. I forgot to mention that before didn’t I?” He asked with a smirk.

down at her. "I forgot to mention that before didn’t I?” He asked with a smirk.

You missed a quotation mark. *Blinks* Wait... Damn! This story must be good if it makes me points out small errors like that! Good job!:pinkiehappy: Fav and thumbs up from me!

I could really care less about the power he had, Blueblood would've been the first prick I would've killed.

i like it and there alot of things to explore so i cant wait to see where this go's
but i must ask how did u come up with the name Taiga?

1351926 just did you clever person you

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Oh i try, the real question is how long till i can fit in a game of thrones reference :twilightsmile:

This is going to be an interesting chess game, since i doubt there isn't something bubbling underneath ready to burn this guy bring back Twilight is about as dumb as it gets.

Moving too fast, not enough exposition, and I feel like I've read this before.

But, still better than most of the shit on the front page. Some people really shouldn't write. Ever. I'll refrain from rating, I didn't like it but it's not utter garbage either.

Interesting idea :twilightsmile:

Then again I dont see too many adventure stories. All of them are romance these days :rainbowwild:

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Thanks for not down voting. Honestly I'm planning on adding a lot more backstory, but I’ve learned that people tend to ignore anything with over 4 to 5 thousand words in a first chapter and I just didn't see enough room for it.

As to the front page I completely agree, at the moment there are at least eight clop fics on there, and while I have no problem with clop on a general level there are way too many people doing it badly for the good stuff to stand out. I pity the mods...

TO THE READLATERMOBILE!

wow. I read fics where equestria falls, but usually there about the war, not the time after. Love this fic.

This is a really interesting story, I hope you continue it:twilightsmile:

You seriously need to continue this at some point. It's great.

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