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The Cowardly Christian


For everyone seeking guidance, I recommend looking up Ravi Zacharias, he's gotten me out of some dark times. His FULL sermons are available online for ALL...

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Big AU! Massive crossover! All of your favorite cartoon characters have been invited to a tropical cruise...but what starts with fun in the sun ends with a fight for survival? Who will survive and who will achieve apotheosis? Human!Zim! Human!Gumball! Human!Webby! Human!Twilight!(and many more!)

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Comment posted by farfandavid187 deleted Jun 7th, 2023

It's Alive! It's Alive! someday you will be able to continue with your fanfic Babes, Bullets and a whole lot of Adam

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Actually I've had to come to make some tough decisions...

Until further notice, big stories like 'Babes, Bullets and a whole lot of Adam' are to be considered on hiatus...I am currently looking for people to commission or adopt them...

Would you be interested? Or know someone who'd be interested?

Remember that I told you that I had a story that I had been writing, so I managed to create the prologue of this story, it is on my fanfiction.net page https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14243487/1/Never-Alone-apokolips-war now A warning is available. It is in Spanish. I suggest using the chrome extension, Google translator, so as not to be confused when reading the fanfic. please spread the story and comment

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You do know Fanfiction won't allow me to do that, right?

I'm sorry, I'll try to read it eventually, but doing so will just a be nightmare as is...

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use google translate it is not so complicated that you are overkill

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Overkill? What are you talking about? The site won't let me do that, I don't know what else to tell you...

if you want to talk we can talk in my discord farfandavid187

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(sigh) everyone wants to go to discord...

Alright, let's do it...

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Somethings wrong, I input the name you gave me, but it won't take me there.


I'm going to level with you, I have NO clue how to use Discord, I barely use it...

The only reason I got it was because everyone kept insisting we 'talk on discord'.

I don't get it...why is everyone so eager to talk on discord?

to whom old boomer my email farfandavid187@gmail.com I hope we can talk with that

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Hey man...I sent an Email several days ago...did you get it?

if you check your email i also did the same

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Okay...so you didn't get it?

Well I don't know what to tell you then, I used the address you gave me...

dakota umlauf du619013@gmail.com


Hello?



Testing? Testing?

that was what you sent me it was you

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Oh, okay.

Great!

So...was there something you wanted to talk about?

so it was you well if it's not too much to ask you can answer me in your email what is my fanfic
Never Alone apokolips war
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14243487/1/Never-Alone-apokolips-war
To be honest, I'm just getting thick in writing, by the way, as I told you, it's written in Spanish, use the translator.

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Okay, here's the deal. The only way my translator will work is if you copy it and send it me on Gmail...I can then copy and paste it and put it in the translator...that is the only way I can get it to work.

I know it's a hassle and if you don't want to do it, that's fine. I'm just telling you, that's the only way I can read it...

check your email and sent it

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Got it, I'll look it over when I can. I'm celebrating fathers day with my family right now though...

HAPPY FATHERS DAY!

Tell me, have you read it, how was the story?

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I'm really sorry, but somethings wrong with my translator, I keep trying to put your story into it, but it keeps spitting out THIS:

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I'm really sorry, but I just don't know what else to do...

you can ask someone or a friend to translate for you

translates the fanfic check email is in a word file that I sent you recently

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thank you

Okay, first of all thank you for this, in fact I recommend you make a separate anglish version of this chapter and publish it to double your audience.


Second...while this has promise....this was less a chapter and more an info dump...nothing really happened in it, you mainly just EXPLAINED things.(I recommend just putting things like that in footnotes and saving the chapter for the actual story)



Plus it was kinda all over the place and random, just explaining mainly random things, and kinda confusing. One second it implies Dipper is telling the story, the next it's this brotherhood guy.


Sorry man, but for what it's worth I do wish you the best. We need more of this stroy type out there.

new chapter of the fanfic

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Something's wrong, I keep trying to look for your story...but I keep getting an error message...

sometimes I have made updates and changes it will be for that reason but I will send you chapter 2 by mail

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read it...

Okay, that was better...


But seriously man, you need to break up the sentences and paragraphs, NOT clump them together, I could barely read most of it!


Also, you forgot to put down quotation marks...it was nearly impossible for me to tell who was talking or when they were talking.




Also in some places you mixed up the 1st/3rd person POV, which only made it more confusing.


You also need to separate the author note from the rest of the story with SOME kind of divider, otherwise it's just confusing...

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/538822/never-alone
It seems that someone copied the name of the fanfic ha ha ha xd

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