"Twilight?!" The ruler of Equestria suddenly exclaimed loudly. The bump under the blanket immediately stopped shaking, and two heads peeked out, one of which belonged to her best student and the other... her little sister!

Yay, TwiLuna cameo!

And after a little more time on the roof, she turned and, with Spike, headed inside the clinic where her lovely wife, the Great and Powerful Trixie, worked.

Twixie ending, not bad.

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Aha, so that's what this shipping is called. Thanks for the tip, and I'm glad you liked the story

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You're welcome!

great job on story

Great story!

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Sequel?

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I don't know. I wrote this story spontaneously under the impression of an artwork I liked and didn't plan a sequel. But I have a lot of other projects ahead of me, which I will post here from time to time

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Please sequel

What do you think could go wrong?

Equus save me, i'm afraid to scroll down
/me scrolls down anyway...

"That's... genius!"

D'awww, it is nice to see things go well for Trix'
But...

race change experiment

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
nightmare fuel
(technically, that was a complement)

Have you thought about an anthropomorphic version of this story? And if not, would you be opposed to anyone making such a story?

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Honestly, I don't mind if someone makes a version of my story like this. I myself have too many other fics in multiple languages at once to do it right now, so I'll allow it. Just include what story you're basing it on and... don't forget to send me a link so I can read it later

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Oh! Well, thank you very much! And don't worry, if I make it, I will credit you! I can't guarantee it will be any time soon, and I might go some different directions. I will definitely credit you!

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No problem, I'd be happy to read my story in a different version

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Would you want it to follow the same general course, at least the intro, or just a loose same scenario?

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As you wish. As a writer, I'm all for free creativity and if you want to stray away from the original, I won't mind