Avenge me!

by Anonymous15

Chapter 10- The end

It ended well, for Mr. Goldenhoof. He got away with the crime and didn't face any jailtime or fines.

Mr. Goldenhoof hung his PhD on the wall, he said, "That stupid mare destroyed my priceless PhD. I worked hard to get this.. and it cost so much to get this.."

He had a proud look on his face, he was happy to have defeated Rainbow Dash. His torso was wrapped in white, thick bandages, he attend rehab and is all better. He then walked to the couch and said, "I am going to watch something.. I am bored.."

He then grabbed the small black remote and pressed the red button, the screen on the TV turned into a funny cartoon. He laughed, knowing he got away with two murders and how intelligent he is. Mr. Goldenhoof sipped on his drink and burped.

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Then, Twilight, Apple Jack, Fluttershy, Rarity got the news of the death of Rainbow Dash and Pinkie, a hoard of tears race down their eyes. Rarity was taking it the hardest, she lies in a fetal position and a puddle of tears were forming under her.

Apple Jack then said while crying and in a sad tone, "Ya.. ya.. lost... ma' marefriend.. Rainbow Dash.. she.. was.. the best... marefriend.. ever.. And Pinkie.. was the best relative ev.. ever!"

Twilight said, "RD and Pin- Pinkie.... were a gr... gr-.. great friends!"

Fluttershy was on the ground, laying on her belly, her thin yellow hooves were covering her eyes. Tears race down her eyes, Angel had a sad look on his face, he was petting Fluttershy's head with his paws in a way to comfort her. She then muttered while still crying, "RD.. R-.. rai... Rainbow Dash.. was.. m- my... b- b... best frien-d and.. she.. defend.. me against.. bullies... Pinkie was such a good.. frie- friend. she always makes us.. laugh.."

Twilight then said in a sad tone and still crying, "I am going to miss... them!"

The other mares nodded their head in agreement. They are sad they will never see Pinkie or Rainbow Dash again. They wish they were there to say goodbye.. they have thoughts of finding the pony responsible for this with the intention avenging Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash. You never know. Fluttershy continued to cry on the ground, the puddle of tears under her is getting larger and larger. Rarity also was crying up a storm, a hoard of tears raced down her face.

Sorry this chapter was short.

Author's Note:

Trivia:

* I got the idea to write this when I was in my gym class

* There was originally going to be 16, but I didn't know how to expand the story to make it that long so I switched it to be 10 chapters instead.

* Some chapters are short because I wanted certain parts of the story like when Rainbow Dash died or when a certain event to happen in certain chapter and I didn't know how to expand or advanced the chapter.

* I might write a sequel where Fluttershy, Apple Jack, Rarity or Twilight tries to investigate and find the pony responsible for the killings.

* Mr. Goldenhoof didn't have a permit for the gun, but the cops didn't ask.

Thanks for Reading!

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