Avenge me!

by Anonymous15

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After the death of Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash swore to get revenge on the pony responsible for the crime

After the death of Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash swore to get revenge on the pony responsible for the crime. Rainbow Dash will teach the pony responsible for this a lesson, they will never forget..

Thanks to God for helping me make this.

Chapter 1- The hospital

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Thanks to God for helping me make this

It was a late evening in Equestria, everypony was getting ready to go to sleep, everypony was happy or jolly except a few. Rainbow Dash was part of the few, she sits on the red chair in the Ponyville hospital. Green walls, posters, and red chairs that were on the other side of her greeted her. Rainbow Dash looked down, a huge worried grin was visible on her face, she looks at the clock, it reads "7:40pm" the hospital smelled like petunias.


She then glances at the door where Pinkie Pie was in, and said to herself in a worried and hopeful tone, "I hope Pinkie is okay, she was attacked by some pony, luckily I tackled the attacker but he manage to break free and use magic to escape.."

She looks on the ground, she tried to not cry, she was always the pony who never cried even in tough events like this. She then looks on the wall, she sees posters like "An Apple a day keeps the doctors away!" with a picture of a big red apple below the text. She then had thoughts where the doctor said that Pinkie is okay and can go home. Rainbow Dash cracked a small smile from that thought. Rainbow Dash then looked around the room, she wanted to look for something to do, she glnces slowly to the clock, it says, "7:41pm"

She asked, "Why is time going by so slow.."


She sighs and said in an angry tone, "Is Pinkie okay?"

Small blue sweats started racing down her forehead. She is worried that Pinkie Pie will not make it, she was struck very badly, a huge red line could be seen on her pink body. Blood was racing out of her body, and some glass was in her body, the criminal also decided to, for some reason to make a huge mark in Pinkie Pie's neck.

Rainbow Dash had a worried look on her face, her face started turning red, her worried look started to look like an angry grin. She then said, "ONCE I FIND THE PONY WHO DID THIS, THEY WILL PAY.. REALLY PAY... AND LEARN A LESSON.. ABOUT MESSING WITH ME AND MY FRIENDS!"

She screamed so loud that some ponies sitting next to her and in the waiting room started to stare at her. The nurse walked up to her and asked her in a worried tone, "Miss Dash, are you alright?"

Rainbow Dash replied, "No, I am mad.. because.. somepony attacked my friend..."

The nurse said, "Do not worry miss Dash the police is tracking the offender down.. and we are trying our best to help your friend.. what's her name again... oh.."

Rainbow Dash rolled her eyes and said, "Pinkie Pie, her name is Pinkie Pie!"

The nurse said, "We are trying our best, she seemed really hurt and she looked like she was going to die... so we called up our top-notch doctors..they have been working hard the last few hours.."

Rainbow Dash looked at her, she is at least happy that the hospital doctors are trying their best to help Pinkie Pie. The ponies who were staring at her stopped. The nurse then walked away from Rainbow Dash, Rainbow Dash then looked on the ground again and sighed. Rainbow Dash eyes started to leak a few tears, she really hopes her friend is okay. Her heart was beating fast and faster, faster then when she's flying, her hooves started getting sweaty. Then, she heard the creek of the door. Rainbow Dash quickly glances over to where the creek of the door was heard.

The doctor walked out, he was wearing a blue mask, he shook his head, he was also crying a few tears like Rainbow Dash. The doctor then walked to Rainbow Dash who was sitting on the red chair. Rainbow Dash looked at the doctor, her smile started to form, she hopes the doctors was able to save Pinkie Pie.

The unhappy doctor removed his mask, Rainbow Dash's courage and hope was gone like the wind. She saw the unhappy look on the doctor and the few tears racing down his face.

After what seemed like forever, the doctor could just mutter out what he could muster at the moment, "I'm sorry.. w- we.. did all we could.. Pinkie is still alive.. I do however.. regret to tell you... -"

After a few moments of silence and the doctor crying, he continued, ".. that... due to the complications of the attack or injury..... she will only be alive for a few more minutes, if.. you.. want.. you can say.. goodbye to.. P- Pinkie Pie..."

Rainbow Dash started at the doctor, she then made one of the largest frowny faces she made in her entire life, even larger than when she was mercilessly bullied when she joined the Wonderbolts.. She remembered that she was told by the nurse that the best doctors are trying their best to help Pinkie Pie but failed, these were the top notch doctors, doctors that were rewarded awards for their amazing efforts, not some newbie that just became a doctor. Rainbow Dash then said in an half angry and half sad tone, "How can the best doctors in Ponyville fail to save a pony that was struck with a knife and an axe? THESE ARE LIKE THE MOST EXPERIENCED AND BEST DOCTORS IN PONYVILLE!"

She then said, "They got many awards for their efforts.. I overestimated these doctors..."

After a short silence, more tears race down her eyes, she cried so much that a small stream of tears started to flow from under her and the doctor. The doctor patted his hoof on Rainbow Dash and walked away, then five other doctors walked out of the room with a regretful and sad look on their face.

They were getting ready to go home. Rainbow Dash's eyes were redshot, red like blood, a dozen tears were racing down from her magenta eyes. She ran inside the room and said, "Pinkie.. are you... there?"

Pinkie looked at Rainbow Dash and said, 'H- hey Dashie.." Pinkie Pie was laying in bed, white bandages were around most of her body mostly her torso and legs. Her hair still remained puffy and curly like always

Rainbow Dash walked over and hugged Pinkie Pie, she took a deep breath, getting ready to spend time with Pinkie during her final moments. She said, "Pinkie, I'll see you again.."

After a short silence and a few tears in her eyes, she then said, "I- I.. I lo-... I love you.. y- you.. w- were... like.. t- the greatest friend I-.. I... c- coul.. could.. ev- ever ask for.."

Pinkie Pie then cracked a small smile and said, "Thanks, Dashie.."

Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie hugged again, tears were in both of their eyes, there was silence in the room for a while. Pinkie said, "I- I think I know who attacked me, he did have a golden yellow face, green eyes, purple mane.. wait a minute.."

Rainbow Dash looked at Pinkie Pie then there was a short silence between the both of them, Rainbow Dash then asked, 'What is it?"


Pinkie then replied with a confused tone and with the little energy she had left in her system, "The.. stallion.. w- who.. at- attacked me was my teacher, Mr. Goldenhooves.. I pranked my teachers... a lot when.. I- I was in college.. he hated me and my pranks and even called me the most annoying and the worst pony in.. Equestria.. I set an array of pranks during his wedding anniversary and caused.. him and his wife Mrs. Golden.. hooves.. I think that's her name.. to get divorce.. he knew it was me but I thought it.. would be funny pranking him just like I pranked you and the other citizens.. of Ponyville.. He even begged the headmaster of the Ponyville University to expel me.. he refused since.. my- pranks.. were funny.."

During Pinkie Pie's explanation the machine monitoring her heart beat was making "Beep" "Beep" noises meaning her heart is pumping normally. Rainbow Dash said in a confused tone, "Soo maybe he was the one who attacked you... he wanted to get back at you.." Pinkie Pie then had a small frown look on her face. She said, "I never thought he will try to kill me over some pranks.. my friend from.. col- college, Creme Pie loved my pranks and called me the queen.. of pranks!"

The machine started making beep noises but after the third beep it went, "BEEEEEEEEEEEP" the sound continue for a while, meanwhile Pinkie Pie was placing her hoof on her chest and she was moving back and forth. Rainbow Dash looked at her and said, "Goodbye Pinkie Pie.. I'm sorry.."


Pinkie Pie looked at her friend, death has consumed her... Rainbow Dash and said, "Bye Dashie.." she had a sad look on her face, tears rushed through her eyes. Rainbow Dash stood there, with tears in her eyes, enough to make a river from here to Canterlot. There was a short silence among the room.

After a while, Rainbow Dash whispered softly, "No.. no... Pinkie.. can you hear me?"

She then closed her eyes, her mussels seem to relax, her once puffy and curly hair is now deflated, her look went from a frown to a calm and peaceful look on her face. Rainbow Dash looked at her dead friend, a sad look was on her face.

She then started to pound her hoof where the lampdesk was, she then yelled while tears race down her eyes, "NO NO NO! THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE... THAT DISGRACE TO PONYKIND GOT AWAY WITH KILLING MY FRIEND, PINKIE PIE... HE THINKS HE IS SAFE NOW... WELL HE IS SOOOO WRONG.. I WILL FIND HIM AND TEACH HIM A LESSON, ONE PAINFUL, UNFORGETTABLE LESSON... I AM THE ELEMENT OF LOYALTY AFTERALL, I SHOULD NOT JUST SIT AND LET IT GO...!"


The nurse walked behind her and said to her in a stern tone and an angry look on her face, "Miss Dash, can you stop yelling, you are disturbing the patients, one mare is even giving birth and foal can't stop crying because of your absurd yelling... plus, I already told you the police is looking for the pony behind this act.. calm down.."

Rainbow Dash looked at her angrily and said, "Sorry, I- I guess..." walked away. She walked out of the hospital, she has a goal to avenge Pinkie Pie and to teach one pony a lesson in messing with her and her friends.


She is on a mission, a pony on a mission!

Chapter 2- Search

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It was very dark out, the stars were sitting in the night sky, the moon watches over the ponies in the town. But some clouds crept in and soon rain drops were being dropped from the clouds, Rainbow Dash started getting wet and her rainbow hair started becoming flat.

She then said, "I will get my revenge and beat up and teach a certain pony a lesson about messing with me and my friends.. my friends, she was my only friend I had left in Ponyville, meanwhile my other friends like Apple Jack moved away to make more money selling apples and for new opportunities.. but first I need to know where this "Mr. Goldenhoof lives!"


She then placed her thin blue hoof under her chin as she thinks for a bit where Mr. Goldenhoof lives. She then said, "Wait.. Pinkie Pie said that she had a friend.. named Creme Pie.. maybe she knows more about Mr. Goldenhoof.. also I thought I was her friend.."

She then said to herself in a curious tone, "I remember visiting her one several occasions like when this Creme Pie pony invited me over to her college reunion party... Pinkie brought me along but... a- also forced me to eat pie even though, I hate Pies.."

She then said, "Where is her house again.. I know it is next to a pub, it is hot pink and on the roof there is a giant creme Pie on top of the roof. Also she had one red gnome on the front porch of her house.."

She then walked, looking both left and right to find the house of Creme Pie, Pinkie Pie's college friend. After a while she couldn't find the house, she almost was ready to give up but then she smelled something that is out of this world. She asked, "What is that delicious smell?" it smelt like blueberry pie.

She then followed the smell, she took a few left and right turns but eventually reached the home where the smell is coming from and was luring her. After a moment, she then noticed the pub that she saw when going to the college reunion. It had flashing lights that were flashing pink and yellow. The flashing words read, "Club Ponyville" it was a big brown building, made of bricks.

Below "Club Ponyville" she saw the sign, "Open 24/7"


She then noticed the pink house with the pie on the roof. She then yelled in an excited tone, "There is Creme Pie's house!"


She saw the pie sitting in the window frame, the window was open, Rainbow Dash was tempted to steal the pie but knew that that is wrong, Rainbow Dash is strongly against stealing. She didn't wanna climb into the house through the window since that could mean Breaking an entering which would warrant jail time. she was previously in jail for speeding and some public intoxication charges. She got out at least three months before Pinkie Pie was attacked by Mr. Goldenhoof walked passed the dark green grass, she walked up to the front door of the house of Pinkie's college friend, Creme Pie's house. She then pressed the doorbell. It made a "Ding" sound. Then she heard hoofsteps from inside the house.. She was confident that Creme Pie knows a lot of information of Mr. Goldenhoof.

Chapter 3- Creme Pie and Rainbow Dash

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Rainbow Dash watch as the door opened. Creme Pie had a nervous look on her face. There was a short silence among them. Rainbow Dash broke the silence by asking, "Hello, uh.. are you Creme Pie?"


Creme Pie's started to sweat, she doesn't know Rainbow Dash and didn't know how RD knew her name. She then slowly and nervously nodded her head. She then yelled, "How do you know my name?"

Rainbow Dash was taken away from this and said, "Pinkie Pie told me about you, you and Pinkie were friends in College also..."

Then rainbow Dash hung her head low and then Rainbow Dash said, "I am Pinkie Pie's friend... but today.. she.. she.."

Creme Pie had a confused look on her face, then said in a curious tone, "She what?"

Rainbow Dash then sighed, she looks into Creme's Pie's green eyes and said, " She... d- died.. she said she was attacked by someone.. with an axe and a knife!"

Creme Pie then said in a sad tone, "P-.. pi- Pinkie Pie.." tears started forming in her eyes. She can't believe her college friend died. She was sad to see Pinkie Pie go. She then started to cry, tears race down her eyes. She covers her face with her white hooves.

Rainbow Dash placed a hoof on Creme Pie's shoulder and said, "There, There.. you'll see her again!"

Creme Pie sniffed and said, "I miss her so.. so... much!"

Rainbow Dash nodded her head and said, "Me too... she died before I got here..."

Rainbow Dash's eyes started leaking some tears, then she started crying too. For a while, Rainbow Dash and Creme Pie cried together, they are mourning for the loss of Pinkie Pie. After a while, Rainbow Dash and Creme Pie sniffed, there eyes were red-shot, red like a tomato. They have been crying for a while, Rainbow Dash then said, "She was my best friend.."

Creme Pie who was hugging Rainbow Dash then said, "Mine too.."

Rainbow Dash then smiled and said, "So.. I thought you know about Mr. Goldenhoof. Pinkie Pie's teacher?"

Creme Pie then looked at Rainbow, and let go. She then wiped away the tears that were falling from her eyes, she then said, "Yes.. I was a senior and Pinkie Pie was a Junior.. she was the funnest and craziest friend I ever had. She always pulled a lot of pranks and was a party animal.. much to the dismay of the professors, headmaster, and other students.."

Rainbow Dash chuckled for a short moment and said, "Yeah, she so is soo random and goofy.. that is a compliment!"

Creme Pie then said, "This teacher, Mr. Goldenhoof.. hated her. He hated her so much, he begged the headmaster to expel her but luckily for Pinkie Pie, the headmaster loved her pranks and let her stay!"

Rainbow Dash's mouth started to open, she then had a flashback..


Flashback:
Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie hugged again, tears were in both of their eyes, there was silence in the room for a while. Pinkie said, "I- I think I know who attacked me, he did have a golden yellow face, green eyes, purple mane.. wait a minute.."

Rainbow Dash looked at Pinkie Pie then there was a short silence between the both of them, Rainbow Dash then asked, 'What is it?"


Pinkie then replied with a confused tone and with the little energy she had left in her system, "The.. stallion.. w- who.. at- attacked me was my teacher, Mr. Goldenhooves.. I pranked my teachers... a lot when.. I- I was in college.. he hated me and my pranks and even called me the most annoying and the worst pony in.. Equestria.. I set an array of pranks during his wedding anniversary and caused him and his wife Mrs. Golden hooves.. think that's her name.. to get divorce.. he knew it was me but I thought it.. would be funny pranking him just like I pranked you and the other citizens.. of Ponyville.. He even begged the headmaster of the Ponyville University to expel me.. he refused since.. my- pranks.. were funny.."

End of flashback..


Rainbow Dash's mouth remains open as she recalls the memory. She remembered what Pinkie said, Rainbow Dash realize that the pony behind Pinkie Pie's murder was other than, Mr. Goldenhoof.

After a few minutes, Creme Pie was confused what Rainbow Dash was doing. After a short silence, Creme Pie then asked in an annoyed tone, Rainbow Dash, "Hey, are you okay?"

Rainbow Dash then said in an angry tone and an angry look on her face, "I know.. who killed our friend, Pinkie Pie!"

Creme Pie gasped, she asked in a hopeful tone, "Who.. who?" she was yearning for an answer.

Rainbow Dash looked at her and said, "Pinkie Pie said that he had a golden face, green eyes, what colour eyes... oh yeah.. purple according to her, the pony with those looks are Mr. Goldenhoof.. she said that she pranked him during his wedding anniversary and caused his wife to divorce him.. she pranked him because she thought it would be funny..."

Creme Pie then gasp and said, "Wait, so that would mean that Mr. Goldenhoof.. wanted revenge for what happend on that day... so he tried to kill her to get back at her.."

Rainbow Dash then said, "Yeah, that could be what happend... good detective work!"

Creme Pie blushed and said, "Thank you.."

Then Creme Pie then asked Rainbow Dash, "So what is your name?"

Rainbow Dash then said, "My name is.. Rainbow Dash!"

Creme Pie then said, "Cool name, also I saw you at the Wonderbolt show..."

Rainbow Dash smile started getting larger and larger, she then said, "Really, how did I do?"

Creme Pie chuckled and said, "You did great!"

Rainbow Dash blushed and said, "Thanks, Creme Pie!"

Creme Pie then said, "Anyway, Mr. Goldenhoof was my and Pinkie Pie's physic teacher.. he was very strict.. if you turn in homework late, he would rip it up and give you a big fat 0, which would lead to you failing the class... and even if you get one question wrong, he would remove 10 points..."

Rainbow Dash then gasp and said, "Wow that's strict... I thought that Spitfire was strict.. but Mr. Goldenhoof is way worst! his strictness makes Spitfire look nicer in comparison"

Creme Pie said, "Yeah.. who is Spitfire, a friend of yours?"

Rainbow Dash shook her head and said, "No, she is the instructor for the Wonderbolts, I joined the wonderbolts a while ago, she is mean and yells alot but deep down, she cares about us.."

Creme Pie then yawned and said with a sleepy tone, "Sorry, I am tired, it is like 8:20pm, I want to go to sleep.. it was nice talking to you though.."

She then made her horn glow purple, in a sudden, Rainbow Dash yelled, "Wait, one more question please!"

Creme Pie groaned and said, "What?"

Rainbow Dash took a deep breath and said, "Do you know where this, Mr. GOldenhoof lives?"

Creme Pie then started to sweat and said, "Uh no.. but I see him walk by my house every Saturday..!"

Rainbow Dash then nodded her head and said, "Good night!"

Creme Pie then made her horn glow purple, and in a fraction of a second, she was gone, she preformed a teleportation spell that teleported her to her bedroom. Rainbow Dash had a big smile on her face. She knew that Mr. Goldenhoof must have lived nearby since according to Creme Pie he walked by her house every Saturday.

Rainbow Dash then walked away from Creme Pie's face, she then said, "I am getting closer to my goal of avenging my friend, Pinkie Pie!"

Chapter 4- looking for Mr. Goldenhoof

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Rainbow Dash then walked away and she passed by the Ponyville club. She then overheard some ponies in the club talk about Mr. Goldenhoof. She was stunned and walked towards the window where the ponies where talking. She then heard one mare say, "This Mr. Goldenhoof is so scary, he was not only my teacher but also my neighbor, there was this one foal, who was orange and had purple hair, she was riding her scooter like everyday, then something happend I can't remember and she and her scooter was laying on Goldenhoof's lawn. Then the stallion ran out swiped her scooter and drover her away and even threaten to beat her up if she trespasses again.. the police were involved but he denied it he did anything..."

The other mare said, "That's crazy!"


The first mare then said, "I live next to him, He lives in the eastern parts of Ponyville, the house was red, there is a broken window, and there was even a ditch under the house!"

Rainbow Dash then said, "Eureka, I know where that pony is now.. I can finally strike vengeance like how I strike a spare in bowling!"


Rainbow Dash then flew very fast to the eastern ghettos parts of Ponyville. She had thoughts of beating up and striking Mr. Goldenhoof, even if she doesn't kill him, she wants him to learn a lesson, a painful lesson about messing with her and her friends. After what seemed like forever she arrived to her destination, the sky was dark, stars were dancing in the sky. Her heart was beating, "Beat, Beat, Beat!"

She then said, "Okay the mare said that Mr. Goldenhoof lives in a red house, a ditch under the house, and a broken window."

She looked left and right, there lies rows and rows of the houses. She flew above the houses, some were made of wood, some broken, some were three story houses that was worth Rainbow Dash's yearly salary.. she shrieks in joyfulness about getting revenge on the stallion that killed Pinkie Pie, she will never forget this. After what seemed like forever she then eventually she made an evil grin when she saw the desired house, a red house, with a broken house and ditch. She said in a loud, and prideful tone, "BINGO!"

A young stallion walking by her said, "Bingo? where.. I love bingo!"

Rainbow Dash sighed and said, "No, there's no bingo, I just said Bingo cause I found what I needed..."

The young stallion smiled turned upside down, he hung his head down, he sighed in disappointment. Rainbow Dash then said, "Sorry.."

The stallion sighed and said, "It's.. fine.."

The young stallion walked away, his head was still hung low, he had a sad look on his face. Rainbow Dash then marched angrily to the house of Mr. Goldenhoof. She then pounded on the door with her cyan hoof, she was huffing and puffing. She is going speak her mind to this Mr. Goldenhoof! The stallion inside then yelled, "Coming, just wait.. and you better not be wasting my time, little fool!"

Chapter 5- Confrontation

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After what seemed like years, Rainbow Dash heard footsteps from inside the house, she then saw the light turn on from the living room, then after a long moment, Mr. Goldenhoof opened the door and said, "Hello, what do you want?"

Rainbow Dash took a deep breath and yelled, "YOU!"


Mr. Goldenhoof raised an eyebrow and said, "What?"

Rainbow Dash responded in a angry tone, "YOU.. YOU KILLED MY FRIEND, PINKIE PIE!"


Mr. Goldenhoof was dumbfounded and started to sweat then she said, "What? me, never... I would never lay a hoof on Pinkie, she was my favorite student.." which was a lie of course. Rainbow Dash didn't buy it and was even more angry that anypony dared to lie to her.


Rainbow Dash hoof-palmed and said, "Pinkie Pie died, when she was attacked she saw the face of the attacker, she said the attacker had a golden face, green eyes, and even a purple mane, you fit the description.."

She then took a deep breath and said, "Also, Mr. smartypants... her and Creme Pie, HER COLLEGE FRIEND said that you hated her, and her pranks and even begged the headmaster to expel Pinkie..."

Mr. Goldenhoof then started to sweat more and more, Rainbow Dash could tell he is sweating and knew that he is nervous. Mr. Goldenhoof knew that now there is no way he can get out of this, he has been caught, red-hoofed. He then said, "Maybe that was my twin!"

Rainbow Dash said, "You are the only pony in Equestria... with those descriptions, nopony else!"

Mr. Goldenhoof said, "Well, it's not me.. good night to you, miss.."

Rainbow Dash then said, "It's you.. Pinkie will never lie to me, you are the only pony with those descriptions, also they describe that after Pinkie Pie set a series of pranks during your wedding anniversary.. you were mad at her so maybe you killed her so you can get back at her.."

Mr. Goldenhoof said, "Well, she should have not set those pranks! I love my ex-wife, she was my high school sweetheart, we love each other and were inseparable, we got married and on that day, my wife through I set those pranks to humiliate her and to troll her.. she divorced me.. THE LOVE OF MY LIFE, DIVORCED ME.. I LOVED HER WITH ALL MY HEART AND EVEN BOUGHT HER EXPENSIVE SHIT.. Pinkie ruined my life.."

Rainbow Dash gave him a cold glare and said after a short moment of silence, "So, you killed her?"

Mr. Goldenhoof said, "No, i would never kill her.."

Rainbow Dash slapped Mr. Goldenhoof and said, "Oh really, you were going on a rant about how Pinkie ruined your life and you denied killing her.. Creme Pie and Pinkie told me you were their teacher and how much of a monster you were!"

Mr. Goldenhoof said, "So, they didn't see me do it.."

"Pinkie literally told me what the killer looked like, you fit the description that was given.." Rainbow Dash said, scolding the lying stallion.

Rainbow Dash then yelled, "I LOST MY FUCKING FRIEND BECAUSE OF YOU!"

Mr. Goldenhoof yelled back, "I DID NOTHING WRONG!"

Rainbow Dash said, "YOU WILL LEARN A PAINFUL LESSON, ONE DAY!"

Mr. Goldenhoof yelled, "GO POUND SAND!"

Rainbow Dash replied in a stern tone, "I don't know what that means, but I am offended by it.."

Mr. Goldenhoof punched Rainbow Dash in the nose and slammed the door in the speed of sound, then locking it, some blood was jumped from her nose after the attack. She had an angry look on her face, she is taking time to process what happend. On the ground there was a small droplets of blood on the ground. She was stunned, only for a moment. She then said, "Now, this is PERSONAL!"

Chapter 6- Prepare

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Rainbow Dash walked away, she had the angriest look on her face. She couldn't believe that no only did that stallion killed Pinkie Pie, and lied to her on the face several times, he also assaulted her. She was not only going to get vengeance for her dead friend, but also get vengeance for being unjustifiably attacked.

She then said to herself, "I won't tell the police, they are doing a terrible job of tracking the killer aka Mr. Goldenhoof down.. now I am going to take these into my own hooves. I need to get some things to prepare me for my revenge against Mr. Goldenhoof"

She then yawned and said, "Maybe tomorrow I will start my vengeance, I am sleepy." She pulled out her wings and took off to the sky, the sky was still dark, there weren't many clouds in the sky. After a tiring five minutes, which felt like forever, she found a big, gray, and puffy cloud, lay down on the cloud and dozed off.

Then she woke up before dawn, the sun was entering the sky. Rainbow Dash rose up from her slumber. She has a tired look on her face. She rubbed her eyes with her hooves, she then open her eyes and said in a sleepy tone, "I haven't had a lot of time.. t- to.. sleep.."

She then remembered what happend last night, the death of Pinkie Pie, her meeting Creme Pie, the teacher who slaughtered Pinkie Pie named Mr. Goldenhoof. She then gasp as she remembered what happend and how yesterday she swore she would get vengeance.

She then took off. She then said, "I must serve justice.. Mr. Goldenhoof killed my friend.. Pinkie.."

Rainbow Dash then asked, "Wait, what should I do?" She then got an idea, she will ask Starlight Glimmer or a friend of hers for advice.

She then started to flew at the speed of light, when she was flying, she wants to know what her friends would do in a situation like that. Then after a while, she bumped into Starlight Glimmer, Starlight Glimmer then yelled in an annoyed tone, "Hey, watch where you are going!"

Rainbow Dash then blushed pink out of embarrassment and sheepishly said, "Sorry, also I need to talk to you.."

Starlight Glimmer was shocked to see Rainbow Dash, she was curious on why Rainbow Dash needed to say. She sighed and asked Rainbow Dash, "What would you like to talk about?"

There was a moment of silence, Rainbow Dash's eyes started to leak a few tears. Starlight Glimmer was confused and asked, "Are.. you alright?" Starlight never saw Rainbow Dash cry before, it is such a rare occurrence, you have better chances of finding a four leaf clover than see Rainbow Dash cry. After a while, Rainbow Dash said, "So, I and Pinkie were in the hospital and she was... a- about to.. die... then she told me how she recognized. w- who was attacking her with an axe and a knife.. it turned out to be her college professor.. Mr.... Mr... Golden..hoof... then I met her college friend.. Creme Pie.. and.. I found out he attacked her because.. because.. he hated her pranks and it unintentionally ruined his marriage and then he killed Pinkie!"


Rainbow Dash continued, while a few tears climb down from her eyes, "After a while, I confronted him and after a while he punched me.. in the nose..."

Starlight Glimmer was shocked, she stood their in silence. No words were exchanged for a moment. Rainbow Dash sniffed and cried for a little more. Starlight Glimmer and Rainbow Dash's eyes met for a bit.

Starlight Glimmer then said, "That pony deserves to be punished.."

Rainbow Dash, unable to speak since she has been crying a lot but was able to muster up some words. She spoke, "Y- yes.."

Starlight Glimmer then said, "Well, I would time travel back to before Pinkie was attacked and slaughtered but... I tore up the paper that had that spell also, I don't know where it is... but I will help you get revenge on that cockface.."

Rainbow Dash rushed and hugged Starlight Glimmer tightly. Starlight Glimmer was shocked, she then started blush red. Rainbow Dash also started to blush, it was silent for a while, no words were spoken, Starlight doesn't mind being hugged but Rainbow Dash started to hug her a bit to tightly. Then, Starlight then said, "Ok- okay.. your.. choking.. m- me.."

Rainbow Dash then let go and chuckled to herself and said, "So sorry.. I didn't mean to harm you.."

Starlight Glimmer then wore a stern look on her face and said, "Seriously though, we really need to take care of that Mr. Goldenhoof.. anyway do you know where he lives?"

Rainbow Dash nodded her head and said, "Yes, he lives the ghettos of Eastern Ponyville.. but we should get things that are effective to use to defend ourselves if... he attacks like he did.. to me.."

Starlight Glimmer then asked, "Why can't we use magic?"

Rainbow Dash said, "Well, he can easily repel the spells, and magic isn't really effective or deadly.. he deserves punishment worst than prison... he killed not only my friend but an element of harmony, Pinkie Pie did a good job as fulfilling the element of laughter!"

Starlight Glimmer said, "That is true..."

Rainbow Dash said, "She makes ponies laugh, no matter where she goes even if the ponies were having a bad day! I never saw any pony else do that!"

Starlight Glimmer nodded her head. There was a short silence, the newfound silence was broken when Rainbow Dash then said, "So since he attacked Pinkie with an axe... we can attacked him with an axe.. and knife!"

Starlight Glimmer was a little shocked and confused by this statement. She doesn't think it's okay to hurt someone with an axe just because they attacked your friend with an axe.. She took a deep breath before she asked, "Don't... you think it's a little extreme to... do that.. I mean he committed assault and murder and if we attacked him we will be guilty of break and entering and maybe attempted murder or murder.. depends if he dies or not.. let's just tell the police... they know how to handle stuff like this!" she wants to do the same thing that Mr. Goldenhoof did to Pinkie. She isn't going to back down. She is a daredevil and a very strong pony.

Rainbow Dash didn't like that answer and whined, "That is what the nurse said, the police still haven't found him.. if we just rely on the police, it would be like a forever game of Hide and Seek, but the hider or in this case the offender wins!"

Starlight Glimmer then said, "Sorry but I am not going to harm anypony... but I will tell the police about him and where he lives.. but no more.. got it?"

Rainbow Dash sighed a defeated sigh she then said in a sad tone, "Okay.. fine.." she wasn't happy that


She then flew away, she was angry that she didn't get to do things her way, she was a daredevil an risk taker, she saved those seniors from dying, she saved a little filly from being forever stuck in a well. She isn't going to back down because her friend doesn't want to. She then groaned and said, "If you want something done right, you got to do it yourself."

She then flies home, she opens the door and enters her cloud mansion, it is made of strong, white, but puffy clouds, the sky is still has a blue hue. She saw an axe by her door, in between the door and her big, 24 inch TV. She grabs it and said, "Time to strike!"

She then walked away and the door became closed. And while of this was happening, Tank, Rainbow Dash's pet was sleeping in his glass tank. He was sleeping peacefully, he never thought his owner, Rainbow Dash was about to do something horrific. He has a wide smile on his face, his eyes are closed like a door.

Chapter 7- Hunt

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Rainbow Dash then started taking off, she plans to go to the Eastern parts of Ponyville. She has one mission, and one mission only. To avenge Pinkie Pie who was unjustifiably killed, anger filled her heart, she is mad that anypony would do this. She narrowed her eyes as she flew quickly though the blue and bright sky. She haven't said a word wile her entire flight. Ponies on the ground were still doing whatever they do everyday, like walking, buying things in shops, going to school.

Rainbow Dash then said, "Today's is Mr. Goldenhoof's last day in Equestria.."


Rainbow Dash was still flying and then she said, "Wait, I can't kill Mr. Goldenhoofs.. I would then get arrested and sentence to life, and I will lose my dream job of being a Wonderbolt... are the risk worth it?"


Rainbow Dash smile turned upside down, she doesn't think this would be a good idea. She then said, "Well, he killed my friend... she was my best friend.. also she is an element of harmony, without her, Equestria would be vulnerable to villains like Discord, Tirek, and many others.. but the reason why he killed Pinkie was dumb.. like him.. how is he married again?"


Rainbow Dash continued flying, in her mind she was debating if this was really a solution a serious problem like this. She says that this is wrong and she will be persecuted, be thrown in jail and be kicked out of the Wonderbolts, her dream job, a job she worked her hind off to get. On the other hoof, Mr. Goldenhoof provided a terrible reason for the murder, just because Pinkie pulled some pranks and ruined his long time marriage.

She said, "Maybe I won't kill him.. I'll.. I'll just knock him out enough that he felt the same pain Pinkie did.." she nodded her head. She reached an agreement with herself, she also hopes to get revenge but also to not get arrested and lose her dream job. She continues flying with vengeance in her heart.


After five hours, which seemed like forever, she arrived in the Eastern places of Ponyville. She then said to herself in an angry tone, "Okay, so what was his house again.. red house, broken windows...and a ditch.. or something like that?"

What she saw was trash cans were unopened, nopony was outside, Rainbow dash heard nothing but her own heartbeat. She then glances left and right, and every corner for the red house, with a broken window and a ditch. She then said, "This might take a while.." There was a ton of houses everywhere, she couldn't remember where the red house was, it left her memory. She hopes she can find it soon and carry out her mission.

Chapter 8- Final Battle

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Then, it was getting late, Rainbow Dash noticed the sun rising down, the sky having a purple, and yellow hue. The moon was sneaking into the sky, Rainbow Dash was struggling to hold her axe, sweat race down her head, she was grunting and looked like she was going to drop the axe down. She then said while breaking the silence and still grunting, "I- i a.. am.. so. tired... and I will.. n-.. ne.. never.. find the.... house! And this dang axe is soo heavy!"

She then grunted and yelled, "WHERE IS THAT PONY'S HOUSE?"


She then looked left and saw the house she was looking for, the tall red house, the broken window, and the ditch. She then saw the door with the sign, "KEEP OUT!" written in red and on a wooden plank. She walked forward and said, "No one messes with me, or my friends. I am the element of loyalty... I refuse to let such conduct to be left unpunished!" She reached the porch and is behind the purple door with the wooden plan with the red words, "KEEP OUT!"


She then said, "Wait I can't knock, he'll see the axe, and also i knocked and confronted him before, it didn't end like how I've hoped!" she then was silent for a moment, thinking of what to do in this situation. She then after a few moments thought of a plan. A plan that will surely work. She said, "I'll use the back door.. how hard could it be?"

She the walked from the door and went to the backyard, in front of her was a brown gate, she laughed to herself and used her axe to swing the gate. The gate yelled, "CRACK, CRACK, CRACK," as the axe splits the gate open. Luckily for Rainbow Dash, nopony heard it so she is safe to continue the mission.

She then walked closer and closer to the back door, she had a look of determination. She also hopes Santa wasn't watching, she doesn't want to end up in the naughty list, again. She chuckled to herself and imagine how easy this will be.

She then saw the back door. She said, "Now, time for my plan to officially start!" she then grabs the doorknob with her hooves but it didn't open the door. She growled in anger and frustration, she then said, "The door is locked..."


After a short silence she said in an angry tone, "WHO THE BUCK KEEPS THEIR BACK DOOR LOCKED!?"

She then said, "Wait, I have an axe!" she then swung the axe and the door started making a crack. "CRACK, CRACK, CRACK" the noise that could be heard as the door started splitting into two. She then entered the house and said, "Where ya hiding, Mr. Goldenhoof?"

She entered the building, she looked around, she saw the kitchen with a big white refrigerator, sink, freezer and a pantry. She then looked at the right and saw a giant TV, a medium sized, brown and long, coffee table. And she saw a bed where Mr. Goldenhoof's cat was sleeping in. She whispers in a quiet so she doesn't wake up the cat, "How can a murder have a pet?"


She then looked around, Rainbow Dash sniffed and cringed. With one of her hooves she covered her nose and asked, "What is this smell?" it smelled like dirty diapers, dead ponies, and a hoard of other smells mixed together to make one disgusting smell. She said, "This smells like the Wonderbolts locker-room!"

After a moment of walking around. She then said, "Where is he? maybe he is the bathroom or sleeping.."

She then gagged, she can't handle the smell of the house. She looks like she is going to vomit, she then said, "How does Mr. Goldenhoof live with this ugly smell?"

She then heard something, her ear rises, she heard a little sound, she heard somepony snoring, the snoring seems to come from upstairs. The snoring also sounds like a pig. Rainbow Dash whispered, "I think I know where he is!"

She then walked towards the front door, she saw something hanging on the peach walls, it was Mr. Goldenhoof's PhD. The PhD is a white, had a signature, had Mr. Goldenhoof's name. There was a smiley face written on the PhD. It seemed to come from the University of Canterlot. Rainbow Dash asked herself, "How did he get into university of Canterlot?"

She then muttered, "That university is super hard to get into.."

She then sneakily walked up the stairs, she made sure not to make a sound so she doesn't wake up Mr. Goldenhoof. The stairs were brown, old and made little sounds as Rainbow Dash goes up the stairs. After a short while, she finally manages to get upstairs without waking up Mr. Goldenhoof. Then, Rainbow Dash walked and looked around, she is scratching her head, she sees two long, white doors. She asked, "Which is Goldenhoof?"

She then walked over and open the door on the left. She then stepped inside and turned on the lights, she saw the marble sink, a white toilet, a giant white bathtub. She admires the unique array and colors of soap, she sees purple, green, and even rainbow colored soap. " She whispered quietly, "He's not in here, but the bathroom looks cool..."

She then snuck out of the room and turned off the lights. She then gently and quietly closes the door and and walks over to the other door. She had a look of determination, pride and vengeance filled her heart, she is about to avenge her friend who was unjustifiably killed.


She slowly open the door, the room was dark, she then sneaked inside. She couldn't see much but saw a few things. She saw Mr. Goldenhoof laying in bed, his eyes were closed, he had a small smile on his face. He was breathing, peacefully.

On the lamp-stand there was his thin, yellow glasses, a picture of him and his wife. In the photo, Mr. Goldenhoof was proposing to a mare. The mare had brown hair, had a yellow coat and had cute little freckles on her face. She was also wearing a red and white handband. Rainbow Dash's smile then grew a little larger. She then swung her axe, the axe hit one of the sides of Mr. Goldenhoof. The axe blade had small splats of red, gooey blood, Rainbow Dash chuckled to herself.

Mr. Goldenhoof's eyes started to open, he then saw Rainbow Dash and an axe on his side. He then yelled in a confused tone, "WHO ARE YOU? WHY DID YOU SWUNG AN AXE TO ME?"

Rainbow Dash then punched Mr. Goldenhoof in the face, and swung the axe again. However this time, he dodge it and avoid any attacks. He jumps out of bed, blood was swimming out of the scar that Rainbow Dash hit him, due to his injury he limps slowly. He forget that Rainbow Dash is the fastest mare in Equestria. She then race out of the room, leaving the axe behind, she followed the gooey, oozing red trail that was unintentionally left behind. Rainbow Dash and Mr. Goldenhoof were on top the the stairs. Rainbow Dash pushed Mr. Goldenhoof down the stairs. Tears race down his eye, there are small purple bruises on his face, and he had a black eye, then in a few seconds, Rainbow Dash then jumped and elbow dropped, and gave Mr. Goldenhoof a sever injury.

Mr. Goldenhoof yelled while tears race down his eye, "WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?"

Rainbow Dash yelled, "You... killed... Pinkie Pie... Pinkie Pie said you attacked her... she died because of you.. I LOST A BUCKING FRIEND BECAUSE OF YOU!"


Mr. Goldenhoof said, "For the last time, I didn't kill.. her.." tears continued to race down his eyes, bruises were everywhere and Rainbow Dash was huffing and puffing, and had an angry look on her face.


Mr. Goldenhoof was laying on the ground, puddles of blood form under him. He struggled to breath. Rainbow Dash slapped Mr. Goldenhoof and yelled, "Don't mess with me or my friends.. you forgot.. I am the element of Loyalty!"

He then said, "I didn't do anything wrong!" which was a lie. He then lays on the ground, unable to move, blood everywhere.

Rainbow Dash spit on Mr. Goldenhoof. Mr. Goldenhoof with the little strength he had, kicked Rainbow Dash in the chest. Rainbow Dash was stunned and shocked he was able to fight back. Rainbow Dash got up slowly, then she said, "I am not going to kill you.. I just going to make you severly injured."

Mr. Goldenhoof was laying on the ground, a stern look on his face. Rainbow Dash grabbed the PhD that was hanging on the wall and threw it at Mr. Goldenhoof's head.

A Giant red bruise appeared on his face. He yelled, "OW!"

Rainbow Dash said, "I hope you learned your lesson, dumb stallion!"

They looked at each others eyes, anger and hatred filled their hearts, they were staring daggers at each other. Rainbow Dash then thinks that Mr. Goldenhoof learned his lesson and felt the same pain Pinkie Pie felt. After a few seconds, Rainbow Dash limped away slowly. Mr. Goldenhoof sighed a defeated sigh, he then remembered that the lamp-desk that was left of him. He pushed down the lamp-desk, and a gun bounced on the ground. Mr. Goldenhoof grabbed the gun, whcih was a small shotgun and yelled, "Hey!"

Rainbow Dash sighed and turned around, she had an angry but happy look on her face. She looked Mr. Goldenhoof and yelled, "WHAT, DID YOU LEARN YOUR LESSON?"

Mr. Goldenhoof yelled, "No, but you will learn a lesson about fighting the best teacher in the world, Mr. Goldenhoof aka me!"

Rainbow Dash raised an eyebrow and said, "What?" Rainbow Dash saw the gun in Mr. Goldenhoof's hooves, she tried to fly fast but can't. The sound of the trigger could be heard, a small gray bullet jumped out. The bullet kissed Rainbow Dash in the back of her cyan head. She then fell on the ground, blood started leaving the bulletwound.. Mr. Goldenhoof started to laugh.

The sound was very loud like a bomb, He gently dropped the gun and said, "You might be faster, and stronger but I am smarter, afterall I do have a PhD!"

Chapter 9- Aftermath

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Then a pony walked inside the house, he sees the dead body of Rainbow Dash, the gun, and Mr. Goldenhoof was bleeding from one side, there was a short silence before the pony with blue coat, green eyes and black hair asked, "What happend?"

Mr. Goldenhoof started to sweat a little, he needs to come up with a lie, he can't be caught red-hoofed again. After a short while suddenly muttered, "She... tried.. to attack me!" he said in a rush, sweat was racing down his head, his palm were sweating and he had an awkward look on his face.

Then something catched Mr. Goldenhoof's eye, it was the flash red and blue eyes, somepony must have called the cops when they heard the loud gunshot. The gunshot was loud like a lion. Then the car parked by the red house. One pony stepped out, he had a serious look on his face. He had yellow hair, white coat and was wearing his black uniform. He closed the door. Then two more ponies step out of the black and white car, one of the ponies was teal, had yellow mane tied in a manbun and was wearing sunglasses. The other cop was purple, had a smooth but curly blue mane.

The team of cops entered the house. The cops looked around, one pony was looking at the dead body of Rainbow Dash. One pony was investigating the gun, the other was asking Mr. Goldenhoof questions..

The purple mare said in a serious tone, "So sir, what happend" she asked him for details on what happend.

Mr. Goldenhoof replied, "Well, I was minding my own business and then.. uh.. Rainbow Dash tried to attack me and after a short fight, I grabbed my gun and shot it.. now she is on the floor!"

The purple mare nodded her head, she was write something on the notepad. She then looked up and said, "What did she attack you with..?"

There was a short silence, Mr. Goldenhoof said in a neutral tone, "An axe... part of my sides were cut and some blood jumped form me.. take me to the hospital!"

The purple mare nodded her head, and grabbed her walkie-talkie and said, "We need medics to the scene, right away, a pony was struck on one of his.. sides!"

Then after a few minutes, but to Mr. Goldenhoof it felt like a decade. Two ponies who were paramedic enter the scene and scooped up Mr. Goldenhoof on the long, white stretcher. They than flee and went into the white van with the red plus sign on the right side.


In Mr. Goldenhoof's head he chuckled and said, "Good thing I got away with two murders.. I pity Rainbow Dash for even thinking of fighting a smart, handsome, brave, and strong pony like me.. I won the battle.. fair and square.." but then after a few seconds, he then started closing his eyes due to the massive blood lost. Blood started getting on the stretcher too.

Then one of the officer ponies said, "I investigated the place, there was an axe in the bed, there was sticky and dried blood on the blade.."

The purple mare said, "Captain, Mr. Goldenhoof was defending himself with the gun, the offender is dead.. we should just go, we should also dig a nice grave for the dead pony.. and plus it is stating to stink here!" she covered her nose to block the smell of the rotten body. The white pony with yellow hair who was the captain said, "Agreed!"

The three officers put on blue mask and carried the body away. They then put Rainbow Dash in the Ponyville graveyard. The housekeeper pony dig a hole, a deep hole. They then placed the late Rainbow Dash on the brown casket. They gently threw the casket into the hole. The captain said, "Now let's wash our hooves!"

Then the three officer washed their hooves, they were touching a dead body, blood and tons of dirty things. Then they drove away.


The next morning, the news of the incident was everywhere, from Ponyville to Canterlot, to even Griffinstone. Even Princess Celestia herself even learned about it. After a short silence. Princess Celestia looked up from the newspaper, tears were in her eyes. Her eyes were redshot. She then said, "It's sad.. we lost.. Rainbow Dash... we now lost two elements of harmony.. without the elements of harmony, Equestria is in danger to villains, if someone attacks, the elements of harmony will be useless against them!"


Starlight walks towards Rainbow Dash's grave. On the large gray headstone, there was written, "Rainbow Dash" Also on the headstone the cutiemark of Rainbow Dash was printed on. Starlight Glimmer then started leaking a few tears, there was a silence for a while. Starlight Glimmer also had an angry look on her face. Small tears race down her face.



After the short silence, Starlight Glimmer's eyes were redshot, red like a tomato. She then whispered, "I told you... don't do it..." After a few more tears, she walked away. She will never see her friend again. She is also upset that Rainbow Dash didn't listen to her. But, she is happy Rainbow Dash cares deeply for her friends.

Chapter 10- The end

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It ended well, for Mr. Goldenhoof. He got away with the crime and didn't face any jailtime or fines.


Mr. Goldenhoof hung his PhD on the wall, he said, "That stupid mare destroyed my priceless PhD. I worked hard to get this.. and it cost so much to get this.."

He had a proud look on his face, he was happy to have defeated Rainbow Dash. His torso was wrapped in white, thick bandages, he attend rehab and is all better. He then walked to the couch and said, "I am going to watch something.. I am bored.."


He then grabbed the small black remote and pressed the red button, the screen on the TV turned into a funny cartoon. He laughed, knowing he got away with two murders and how intelligent he is. Mr. Goldenhoof sipped on his drink and burped.


Then, Twilight, Apple Jack, Fluttershy, Rarity got the news of the death of Rainbow Dash and Pinkie, a hoard of tears race down their eyes. Rarity was taking it the hardest, she lies in a fetal position and a puddle of tears were forming under her.

Apple Jack then said while crying and in a sad tone, "Ya.. ya.. lost... ma' marefriend.. Rainbow Dash.. she.. was.. the best... marefriend.. ever.. And Pinkie.. was the best relative ev.. ever!"

Twilight said, "RD and Pin- Pinkie.... were a gr... gr-.. great friends!"

Fluttershy was on the ground, laying on her belly, her thin yellow hooves were covering her eyes. Tears race down her eyes, Angel had a sad look on his face, he was petting Fluttershy's head with his paws in a way to comfort her. She then muttered while still crying, "RD.. R-.. rai... Rainbow Dash.. was.. m- my... b- b... best frien-d and.. she.. defend.. me against.. bullies... Pinkie was such a good.. frie- friend. she always makes us.. laugh.."

Twilight then said in a sad tone and still crying, "I am going to miss... them!"

The other mares nodded their head in agreement. They are sad they will never see Pinkie or Rainbow Dash again. They wish they were there to say goodbye.. they have thoughts of finding the pony responsible for this with the intention avenging Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash. You never know. Fluttershy continued to cry on the ground, the puddle of tears under her is getting larger and larger. Rarity also was crying up a storm, a hoard of tears raced down her face.


Sorry this chapter was short.