Oh, an unexpected sequel continuation. It will be necessary to read

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Not a sequel, it's just another chapter. Are you talking about Rodeo Rumble? It's not the same universe.

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No, it's just an auto-translator error.

Yanderejack

Amusingly, the thing to turn me off from your story wasn't any of the usual complaints. No, it's the alicorns and their provisional immortality. Celestia and Luna had it.. because? And they lost it now that they retired? How does that even work? Story might be great, but addressing alicorns and immortality like a job perk is too bizarre for me.

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Hey, take it up with Lauren Faust or Hasbro. I put it in there because as a way to have Twilight Sparkle be the leader. Since G5 came out, the Princesses HAD to have died at some point. It was a judgment call of background lore. I didn't think it be that big of a deal, besides, the alicorns are not the focus of the story. We don't really know why Celestia lived for 1000 years, but we do know Twilight Sparkle grew into a Celestia like body, so it can be assumed being a major leader gives you extended life. We saw that in the show.

Personally, SOME explanation to them being over 1000 years old would have been nice. I personally like Twilight Sparkle being normal pony size, but that's just me. Please don't give up on the story because of one minor background detail to this specific story.

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Exactly! That's the point of this story!

Been a while bruh, glad your back

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I've been around for quite awhile. I started writing back in 2022. Real life made me take a 5 year hiatus. Stick around, my stories will be udpated.

He'll see the light, and he's gonna love it.

the main thing is that he does not see the light at the end of the tunnel.

Pinkie knows what’s up.

Applejack, why didn’t you just come right out and say it? You saw those thirsty thots. There’s a timer on this thing, and it’s ticking.

Maybe she needs to get some ‘human advice’ from Twilight or whoever’s in charge of his integration? Starlight?

Does he have any responsibilities?

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Well....he'll see something alright.

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I was going to write in a spot about Applejack asking her and Pinkie Pie goes with a deadpanned expression, "Applejack, you're with a guy on free sample day. You're looking for a coltfriend. No mare shows up here unless they're looking for a date or hoping to score with a stallion. Mr. and Mrs. Cake do this on purpose for a reason. It just works and that human stallion has no clue what you're on about. You need to seal that deal. By the way, he's being swarmed right now."

But I cut it out. I'm not sure if I should have left that in there. Pinkie Pie isn't a fool but she's not gonna know what will happen soon enough.

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I forgot to answer your other questions. Well, Applejack isn't thinking right, she'd worried about getting a hubby and having babies (Yes this will be addressed later on but tldr, magic)

Also, Michael has basically been left to his own devices and has a mini-welfare check. He's basically new and trying to find his place. So no, he doesn't have any responsibilities. And for the record, no Starlight Glimmer will appear. She's out of town at the moment.

Mike's got a point. Unless they mess around with some poison joke and have Zecora provide a potion to temper it's randomness into a set of genitals for Michael, no colts for ol' AJ.

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Cross breeding potions my friend. It's something I made up in many of my stories. It's wonderful the magical world of magic and story made up bullshit can do.

Why? Because for the entertainment, of course!

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LOL, like they say "It's magic. I ain't gotta explain shit!"

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Oh hell no, it's just getting started. Glad to see others know about the wall. It's a big problem and it's not just the US but the entire west as well. In the US alone, half of the women will be single by 2040.

And yes, most women only go for the top 10 percent of men and spend their youth having fun, then expect a guy will be waiting for them around 30 to 35. All the "good guys" they ignored for the bad boys is what they want and expect.....now, when they need a decent guy to stick around.

But they don't actually WANT the good guy, no, they just want what he can do for them. And if they get tired and get what they want or if him, BAM! Divorce rape and move into the man of their dreams.... which they somehow think they deserve or will get a high value man. But they'll get a simp. Sadly, they exist.......

And no, the story isn't abandoned.

Hang in there AJ, we're all rooting for ya!

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Hang in there, the next chapter will be out soon.

Press F

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It's not dead, I have another chapter in the works. I got about 1500 words written.