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Will the Equestria Girls characters also be anthro?

Can't wait for the next chapter, I've followed the Lackadaisy comic for years, and love the pilot

I Can't wait for the next chapter

Heh, Callie would definitely their 'political' connection wise

All heavy hitters
Loved where Calli laid MadKat out cold

Good on the 1917 and 16

"I know but they're cheap and already have a local gunsmith to change the Pieper Revolving Carbine to handle .50 rounds," Callie said.

"And the armor?" Sunset ask.

"Much better than what the outlaw Ned Kelly and his gang of Australia made, the armor will be covering the arms and legs. Still heavy but we can handle it. Of course they do have to be fitted for us to wear," Callie said.

"That just leaves the troops," Sunset said.

"The ceramic factory is already up and running. The statues of young women are attracting lots of attention," Callie said.

"As long as they're ready," Sunset said.

"What are we going to be doing in the meantime?" Callie asked.

"Keep low, rest up, get everything ready for the big event," Sunset said.

"And the speakeasy?" Callie ask.

"Use them as the middle men for the illegal shipments and keep them supply with liquor," Sunset said.

I understand the guns. But the armor and the troops? Why do they even need a army!? WW2 won't happened until over a decade later. What are you planning Sunset?

"We could use a king for this pride," Callie said.

"As if you know any king who could handle all of us, I can handle all of you at once. Any would be king who thinks he can handle this pride, will be eaten alive," Sunset said as she and Callie left the others to sleep.

A bit sexist to say that. You could have just as easily upgraded the body, stamina, and "tool" of your most trusted male. ( Just like you did to the girls here. )

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Sunset is planning on taking over Equestria like always.

And for the male the problem is I can’t think of anyone I like to be the king

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Oh, she is still in her "villain" phrase. Then again, she is a "better candidate" to rule than Celestia ever was. ( Considering your other stories I read. )

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Going by cannon of the series Celestia just let's things happen and have others take care of her problems.

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Too bad for Celestia. That's not how on being a good ruler.

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Of course the reason why is that if she was a good ruler, there wouldn’t be a series in the first place.

Is Sunset an Anthro pony here or did she become an Anthro cat?

I ended up asking a co-worker one time (just for something to do while working) what super power he'd want. He said Immortality.
I asked which kind. He had no idea of what I was talking about. He decided immortality wasn't worth it when I brought up all the different kinds that are in stories and and movies.

My favorite is when people start talking Noah's Ark. ONE of the first written down if not the first version is in the Epic of Gilgamesh. The Ark in the Epic is a "cube within a cube". Modern translation of that would be "POCKET DIMENSION".

Anyway, I still think they will eventually find a "worthy" King in their Pride. And like I said, they can easily increase his stamina, body, and his sex tool with magic or something.

"She is also the head of a pride of lovely ladies," Blacksad said. "I wonder how many are interested in being king of that pride."

"Hummf," Feral grunted. "Being the king of that pride is all but impossible. Going by the old laws the would be king will have to either get all the females of a pride to either submit or fall for him."

Unless the "King" is a kind-hearted individual that the females really like? And he isn't a chicken to getting his hands dirty, basically he will be a good and loyal enforcer for Sunset.

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Well if you can think of a someone I might have him become king. The rule is he needs to be a cat or cat themed

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Kovu from the second Lion King is the only one I can think of that, wait Wily Kit (that is the brother isn't it) might work. Those two are the only ones that are worth something besides rugs.

I can just see THAT conversation!!!
So, cats sitting at their instruments suddenly trade places from back stage to ON stage while you were watching the show?
Let me guess, Soylent Green is also made from people right?
Take a few days, this case and not finding anything is beginning to get to you

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Yeah well it’s like proving magic is real in real life. Like in Uncle from another world where the main character can still use his powers from the other world but people watching the videos just think it’s special effects.

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:rainbowlaugh: I know and that makes for good stories:pinkiecrazy:

You didn't put in the ( 3 ) notes;

Then there are the oldest members of the pride. Thanks to a magic spell that stores the memories of a person in a gemstone and a golem spell. Their pride members who choose to, can live on as copies. Their bodies can be shaped and molded to how they like but they aren’t the original but just a copy, stored in a glass gem. The spell and bodies also break down after some years have pass and the ritual has to be done again. They been doing the ritual for centuries and there are many others who the sirens have done the ritual on. Which is why there are so many females in the region.

Shaharl former priestess of the old Roman gods with her daughter, the oldest of the pride member. She has a body made to be like that of a succubus with wings on her back that allows her to fly. Which she is the one behind the legends. Her body is very busty with I cups size breasts and a large jiggly butt, which the other members of the pride like her followed suit in designing their new bodies. (3)

Shamsiel a whimsical and mischievous woman and daughter of Shamsiel. She also has the body model after her mother. Has G cups.

Roxanne De Desir a noblewoman who lost everything during the fall of Rome. Has take the simple role of a maid and mostly found in the kitchen. Has K cups.

Luceria von Diamante was a queen till her kingdom was invaded and conquered. Now a devoted follower of the Dazzlings, she seeks to please her queens. She takes the role of steward when the Dazzlings leave on their journey, which she shares with others. Has M cups.

Gladys Von Wackenheim a powerful warrior, the daughter of a famous commander of ancient times. The best sword master of the pride, unmatched military strategist and a brilliant chess player.

Isis Petrovna Elenskaya a powerful warrior in her own right. Has J cups.

Emeralia was a priestess in the past and now the distant and stoic minister. Has H cups.

Nellis a priestess who learned to use magic and became the court magician. Has H cups.

Aphrodia a former queen of a fallen kingdom. She also acts as a steward when the Dazzlings are gone. Has L cups.

Rosalyn another princess of a lost kingdom and current body is a merwoman. Has I cups.

Estoria another princess of a lost kingdom. She also acts as a steward for the region when it’s her turn. Has K cups.

Serebria the head priestess of Iluminados. She has been following her goddesses for centuries and still heads the faith which still has followers. Has N cups.

Zebia an assassin who uses her graceful and busty body to lure in targets. Has perfected the art of stealth. Has G cups.

Elysia an archer who has trained her skill with the bow to being an art form. Is able to move fast and silently in the forest. Has F cups.

Nadine a former queen of a long dead kingdom. Also acts as the steward for the region. Now works in the world of business. Has L cups.

Lorelia former priestess of a dead faith. Her current body is a merwoman, being able to breathe underwater. Has H cups

Irina Julizarenko a former nun who learned the truth of the Dazzlings and abandon her old faith. Has K cups.

Paia a former slave who given to the Dazzlings as an offering. Has I cups.

Zoe a former oracle who joined the pride after learning real magic. Has J cups.

Constantia a former slave also been given to the Dazzlings as an offering. Has K cups.

Destra a former slave given as an offering to the Dazzlings as an offering. Has I cups.

Escelda a former slave given as an offering to the Dazzlings as an offering. Has I cups.

Then there are the goddesses who are the surviving test subjects for the ritual to copy and make a golem body for the pride members. They use to pretend to be goddesses in the past as part of the Iluminados faith. They do use more normal looking bodies time to time but they are currently using their goddess bodies who are all stand over 7 feet tall at the shortest.

Ajura a former female gladiator who in the ancient past pretended to be a demonic goddess of war. Stands over 8 feet and built like a brick house. Has I cups.

Venus a former slave who has taken the name and appearance of the Roman goddess of love and beauty. Has L cups.

Athena a former slave who has taken the name and appearance of the Roman goddess of wisdom. Has M cups.

Farnelia a former slave who has taken the name and appearance of the demonic goddess of ice. She has large bird wings on her back and the source for the reason why angles are now look like cats with wings, instead of how they really are described in the Bible. Has M cups.

You lucky SOB!!!!!!!!


You are the literal first FIMfiction author that I come across.

To put in Kyonyuu Fantasy Series into here!!!!!!!?????


P.S. Although, you forgot to add the bust size for Gladys; I-Cup. But minor mistake.

Also, Shamsiel technically gets upgraded to K-Cup in the later KF Gaiden sequels.

Then there is the lone king of the pride, the only male who won the right to being the king of the pride. Even if he’s clearly not in charge of the pride. Izak who was a young man living in his abandon village by himself for years far in the north where the Dazzlings found him.

FINALLY!!!!!! :pinkiehappy: :moustache:

And you actually used this character from your other story ( To Your Eternity crossover ). Instead of the four main male protagonists from KF?

P.S. You know there is a fourth KF game, right?

And I already know the names of the new ladies, and their sizes.

Celestia - M cup ( I'm not joking. She has the same name? Would be very awkward for Sunset. )

Gunevia - K cup

Ishtovia - I cup

Liesel - H cup

Veronica - J cup

The clay bodies of their pride feel real as they all can still feel with their clay bodies. They don’t need to eat and don’t need to sleep either but can sleep when they want to, but they can’t have children and if their bodies are damaged or a limb is cut off, the limb turns back to clay. And have to change their bodies and create a new memory copy to keep on living. Some couldn’t handle it and choose to just die for good or kept sealed away in a memory glass gem till they can have better bodies. With the news of a way to return to Equestria they now have a way to give them flesh and blood bodies again. Even making them dragons so that they like the Dazzlings can live for centuries.

Yeah, they will eventually get way better bodies, like the dragons.

I wonder who were the ones that sadly wants to stay dead, or chose to still live but be kept in those glass gems?

“And we can wake up all the others,” Sonata said as they done the memory spell lots of times over the centuries.

“But can we really just go and take over?” Turmoil ask.

“The guards are a joke from what Sunset told us and the ponies are cowards,” Aira said.

“The only ones we need to worry about are the ones who are brave, but once they’re taken care of, the ponies will fall in line,” Sonata said.

“Don’t worry once they see the weapons of this world, they will fall and with Sunset she can take the throne from Celestia. And we can rule over the scared and cowardly ponies,” Adagio said.

I hate to admit it, but the Dazzlings made very good points.

Celestia herself really made a double-edged sword situation with her peaceful region over a thousand years. Basically, her military sucks ass because of that same peace.

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I added it and it is also titled Funbag Fantasy. And the main male leads in the games, I just don’t like as they’re a blank slate with no real personalities but those of the players.

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I kinda like the Japanese naming a little better.

And you didn't like four main male leads?

I literally watch the game "playthroughs" themselves, the male characters do have some quirks and "personality". They don't seem entirely "blank slates", in my eyes at least.


It's possibly because the male characters are just set to be "self-inserts" in the H-Games. Instead of a anime/manga that has characters with "way more personality".


P.S. when do you think Sunset and her large "allies/followers/pride" finally invaded Equestria?

Does she even have to wait for World War Two, or even up to Cold War Era to happen to get better weapons or something?


Because personally; Wild Western, WW1 Era, and the Prohibition/Great Depression Eras of the 1920's/early to mid 1930's seemed to have a decent chance to successfully beat the Equestrians.

Considering on how the Equestria can beat something like Gatling Guns, Tanks, metal warships, or even biplanes?


But Sunset will get a bigger chance of success if she waited out for better weapons from WW2 or even Cold War Era like better guns, tanks, warships/submarines, and even planes/jets. Heck, maybe one atomic bomb/nuke.

Don't know how the heck she even get one or why she need it?

The Abrahamic Religions has NEVER been moralistic but they've been getting worse ever since the Roman Empire collapsed
The first supporters of prohibition were the karens and snowflakes of their time. It tells you EVERYTHING you need to know about them

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Hard to say it has the moral high ground when for years and I do mean years that the whole priests having sex with their young charges has been going on for a very long time. And I do mean longer than what made the news.

More Kyonyuu Fantasy goodness.

And we can obviously see that Sunset is making her Mini Empire and Military to go against Pony Celestia, Mane Six, and Equestia eventually.

11725116 Oh, I'm NOT limiting my comment to catholicism, I'm talking all the way back to the time when YHWH got Abraham to leave YHWH's brother, Ba'al's HIGH Priest Position.

Ishtovia is able to use healing magic, which she healed any wounds that the cult members have and any sickness. She explained that she use to be a woman of faith, till she saw how corrupt the faith she was apart of was and left it. She now able to use healing magic that her old faith would have called witchcraft and the work of the devil, when she's able to do is exactly the same power the person of their faith is built around could do in their stories. Who if he did come back would be seen as a devil by the very faith that is built around him, especially if he was reborn as a woman or any other race that isn't what they want him to be. (2)

I do agree that's just f**king stupid and hypocritical out of them. :facehoof:

“I need you to empower this compass so that no matter what, it will lead me to where, I want to go,” Sunset said holding out an old compass.

Like Captain Jack Sparrow's Compass?

P.S. Who is Maitre Carrefour?


P.S.S. When does Sunset think it's the right time to go back to Equestria and take down Celestia?

Because despite having a mini militia/military for herself.

She will get way better weaponry and technology when World War II happens, or during the Cold War.

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The portal needs to open and her pride members aren’t all with her yet.

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And how long will that be?

Remember what I said about WW2/Cold War-Era Weaponry.

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The setting takes place a couple of years before the Great Depression hits and the stock markets crash

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Yeah, the late 1920's.

Fun fact: one of my games; Guns, Gore and Cannoli 1 and 2 both set in 1928/1929 to 1944 respectfully.

One;

With them knowing who he is now, Blacksad has been keeping himself out of sight of the pride members of Shimmer. Currently he’s spying on the former museum turned home, making notes and taking photos of the people coming and going from the building. He’s been noting down the members of the pride, which the number has been increasing.

In the room of the building close to the museum that he’s been using to spy on Shimmer and her pride, he has photos and names of the members. They don’t use house staff and all take turns doing housework around the museum but they do have gardeners to take care of the yard work. He made notes on what role the pride members do around the manor and anything else he spots them doing.

Cleo

Calico "Callie" Briggs, acts a the secretary for Shimmer and always carry’s a ledger with her.

Tigress, does a lot of driving around the city. Going to the different businesses that Shimmer owns.

Catra, has heterochromia, one blue and one yellow eye.

Kitty Katswell

Katty Katswell, the only way to tell her apart from her sister is that Katty has a white streak on her hair.

Blackfire

Starfire

Cheshire

Kitty

Blair

Felicia Hardy

Tigra

Selina Kyle

Cheetah

Katt, the chauffeur to Shimmer.

Felicia

Blake Belladonna

Cheethara

Pumyra

Wilykit

Merle

Naria

Eriya

Celestia, has a very close relationship with Shimmer. Possibly related to her. Seems to treat her like her daughter or niece. Asked around and the women who are or were in prides say that it’s normal for a pride to have been around for a long time with the former queen handing over the crown to a younger queen. It’s possible that Celestia is the former queen of the pride that Shimmer has taken over.

Gunevia

Veronica

Ishtovia

Liesel

Blacksad looks at the photos of the pride members who finally showed up from Europe.

Samantha "Sam" Simpson (Totally Spies)

Clover Ewing (Totally Spies)

Alexandra Vasquez (Totally Spies)

Britney Akiwara (Totally Spies)

Rally Vincent (Gunsmith Cats)

Minnie May Hopkins (Gunsmith Cats)

Becky Farrah (Gunsmith Cats)

Rivet (Clank and Ratchet)

Mei (Beyond Good and Evil)

Lin (Breath of Fire)

Rushuna Tendo (Grenadier)

Karulau (Utawarerumono)

The Vance sisters, Claudette, Leina, and Elina (Queen’s Blade)

Nefertina (Mummies Alive)

Sawyer (Cats Don’t Dance)

Duchess Adelaide Bonfamille and her daughter Marie (The Aristocats)

Mewsette (Gay Purr-ee)

Bringing the total number of pride members to 50 in Shimmer’s pride. There are larger prides but those have a king or kings or are more like a large family group. Shimmer’s pride are all sexually active with each other and all are clearly in love with Shimmer. He has seen them making out with each other enough to see that’s the case.

Blacksad looks behind him as Dominic "Dom" Drago a Treasury agent enters the room.

“Anything new?” Dominic ask.

“Nope nothing, all I have seen from the front is the pride members leaving to handle the businesses they own and bringing back boxes of the scale models that Shimmer is into,” Blacksad said.

Dominic walks over to the map of the layout of the manor, both outside and inside. They had mapped out the place thanks to interviewing the architect and the workers who worked on the manor. The manor has a very large basement that use to be the storage for the museum, much of the old rooms have been changed but the clock tower is still working but the bell have been removed as the pride didn’t want to have the loud ringing.

“The windows on the bottom all have iron bars, the outdoor staircase to the second floor is fenced off. The staircase in the back has been replaced with one that can be raised up, preventing anyone from getting on the roof by the old courtyard in the back. The dock in the back has been fenced off, which all the walled off, with the gates all being solid to prevent anyone from getting a look at what’s happen on the grounds,” Dominic said.

“Well seeing how many of the pride members have very voluptuous bodies and are all beauties. It’s not that surprising that they don’t want to have peeping Toms,” Blacksad said.

“They are very open with their affection with each other,” Dominic said.

“That’s putting it mildly,” Blacksad said.

“It’s normal enough for prides that are all females to be sexual active with each other and even after a king joins,” Dominic said. (1)

“True but how are all of them are all beauties like that? I have been to many red light districts and never seen so many women built like that,” Blacksad said.

“Yes, I have picked up on that lead of the families of two of the pride members that could be found, Calico "Callie" Briggs and Felicia Hardy. Ms Hardy’s parents are surprised at how much their daughter has grown since she left home. And Ms Briggs were surprised how young she looks now and how she has grown. The agents compared photos that their families have of what they look before and the change is very noticeable. Hardy is still young but for Briggs, her parents say she looks like she’s in her 20’s again and they wonder how she gotten such a figure in such a short time. The agent also talked with her old friends and coworkers and they were surprised as well of how much she has changed,” Dominic said.

“Whatever they’re doing to make themselves look like that would be worth a lot if it also works on men,” Blacksad said.

“Any signs of them?” Dominic ask.

“No, it looks like they’re staying inside today. The only one that went out was Kitty Katswell and she already return,” Blacksad said.

"Learn anything?" Dominic ask.

"Just that the pride member Celestia has a very close relationship with Shimmer," Blacksad said pointing to the photo of said pride member.

The photo was taken at another high class party that the mayor held for fund raising for his next election. She's a fully matured woman who still turns eyes like Shimmer does. She was wearing a green silk blouse and a skirt of blue silk, along with sheer stockings and ankle strap stiletto shoes. All that luxurious silk made her body seem to shimmer and glisten, and is an impressive body. Huge breasts that are bigger than her head and hips wider then her shoulders, with a large butt where those old dresses that made women's butts look big, she wouldn't need at all.

"From what I learn of how prides work, she might have been the old queen before Shimmer took over. She also might be related to her," Blacksad said.

"Old queens do often threat the younger members of prides as their daughters if they're alone," Dominic said.

"Shimmer's past is unknown, guess work and rumors are all we have to go on," Blacksad said.

"At least we know that all of the pride members are here now," Dominic said.

"Yes and they been enjoying each others company," Blacksad said having caught enough of the actions taking place inside to know what's happening inside.

Blacksad is in way over his head.

( And there is some slight mistake. I only seen the Kyonyuu Fantasy 4 Girls. I thought you also added the first, second and third game setting girls as well? )


And why is it when I read Blacksad and Dominic constantly talking about Sunset's Pride sex life?

That they come off and be might be accused as perverts if they were caught, despite that they're really not?


And Two; You do realize that this "Celestia" is Kyonyuu Fantasy, not the Pony Celestia that we all know?

Is it because that Sunset actually wanting a "replacement" of a mother-figure, just because another woman from another world has ironically and coincidentally has the same name of her former mother?

This sounds like a cruel and poetic f**k you against Pony Celestia!?


And Three;

“Got some good news, the order of statues and the equipment are going to be completed by this week,” Katswell said.

“And just have 3 weeks to go before the time is right,” Sunset said grinning at the thought of the years of planning finally paying off, and that Kitty is still eating her out.

"I can hardly wait, after so many years its all going to be completed," Katswell said as she kneels down over Sunset's head presenting her dripping cunt to her queen.

"Yes it will, now get over here," Sunset said causing Katswell to sit on her face with her tasty cunt on her mouth.

Why do I have a bad feeling that Murphy will FINALLY screw with a verison of Sunset's plans? For Once!!??

Considering that 1929 is the same year that the Great Depression begins.

How the hell will you deal with that!!??

You can't just predict the future and expect something like that happening!?

And Four;

"If you want our gangs to make a mess of the businesses that dame owns, you're going to have to make a much better deal than that," Mac said.

"She did open that soap kitchen, a flophouse, and open an Egg Barrel here. We hit her like you want, we're going to need something to make it worth it," Molly said.

"She open businesses here and you two haven't tried to squeezed her for some protection?" Sweet ask.

"We did, and now all the gangs are getting free food. It's just mainly eggs and turnips but, hey it's free food. Which is why we need something bigger than what you're offering. If Shimmer finds out we're the ones behind the attacks, we can kiss the free food goodbye and there are plenty of people around here including our gang members who depend on the free food she's handing out. So as, I said we need something bigger and you offering up that swill you call beer isn't going to cut it," Molly said.

"Very well, I can arrange some shipments of catnip in the next shipment," Sweet said knowing that both of them are very into the catnip trade.

"Now you're talking," Mac said.

"Get the stuff first and then we can send some cats to wreck up the stuff for you," Molly said.

"It will take some time for the shipment to get to the city. I'll contact you when its here," Sweet said taking his leave.

He was lucky with the farmers not being linked to him, with all of them disappearing afterwards, dead most likely. Nico and Serafine did tell him that their bodies were used in a ritual for their voodoo cult they lead and that Shimmer is the one who preformed it and summon their god. Nonsense seeing how she's a stage performer and all, she must had trick them somehow. After all magic isn't real.

Sweet is digging his grave because of this.

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The girls from the first 3 games are apart of the Dazzlings pride. And the Celesita in the human world is just named that because of that’s her name in the English translation of the game.

The year setting for the Lackadaisy comic is 1927 so there is time before the crash.

The one of the warehouses of the factory is on fire, causing alarm and a crowd to form around the factory. The crowd are watching in horror as the pieces of Warren T. Cat, the ringleader of the Mott Street Maulers is toss into the air as he and what’s left of his gang were surrounded and torn to pieces. The other members of the gang are torn to pieces and littered the warehouses. (4)

The Mott Street Maulers were sent to wreck the statues by the Manges after the deal with Sweet went through. There are 5 warehouses on the site all full of the statues of women that seem to just gathering dust. Which is why Warren called in 28 members of the gang to do the smashing, a quick smash job after the factory closed down for the night and leave before anyone knew what’s happening.

Expect that members of the Shimmer pride were there in the first warehouse setting up for a load of statues to be shipped out. The ones who were in the warehouse with the statues and the 2 trucks were Veronica, Sawyer, Rushuna Tendo and Rally Vincent. They had brought all the golems to life testing that all of them worked and had them load themselves inside the truck till it was full. They drove back to the manor but did left Minnie May Hopkins and Becky Farrah to deal with the paperwork and the night watchman in the main office.

Warren T. Cat had his men go to the other warehouses and start smashing the statues while he and 4 of the gang stayed with him to keep watch. He was under orders not to be seen and would only get paid when the job is completed. He figured that smashing most of the statues would work and he would still get paid. That’s when the scream began.

The golems were all activated and when the gang members started to smash them, they went on defense mode. One of the gang members seeing the statues coming to life panic and set the warehouse on fire. Which caused the golems to straight out kill him and the others. The blaze and the screams got the attention of the neighborhood that factory is built on, giving the crowd show as living statues of women are killing members of the Mott Street Maulers, the the blazing fire of one of the warehouses lighting up the night.

I was hoping that not a single golem women statue was destroyed before they're awakened.

Otherwise, there will be a little hell to pay by Sunset. :pinkiecrazy:

The whole thing is strange as the Dazzlings also brought with them 26 goddess statues that are apart of that Iluminados faith. Being gifts to Shimmer, and were treated a priceless works of art with the custom agents having to be careful as they were watched as they look over the statues. (Which unknown to Blacksad are the older members of the pride who have golem bodies and could go to sleep and become statues whenever they want. Which allowed them to be stored in the storage apartment of the airship.

Shaharl

Shamsiel

Roxanne De Desir

Luceria von Diamante

Gladys Von Wackenheim

Isis Petrovna Elenskaya

Emeralia

Nellis

Aphrodia

Rosalyn

Estoria

Serebria

Zebia

Elysia

Nadine

Lorelia

Irina Julizarenko

Paia

Zoe

Constantia

Destra

Escelda

Ajura

Venus

Athena

Farnelia

YAY! Their they are! :ajsmug:

The city of St. Louis has seen many things over the years but the arrival of the noblewomen of the house of Dazzlings in a rigged airship still took people by surprise. The Hindenburg disaster still fresh on people’s minds, which cause the decline of airship travel. The airship is the refitted Zeppelin LZ 80 (L-35) was a R-class Great War zeppelin. Was decommissioned in September 1918 and was given to the Dazzlings as part of the war reparations. Without the great weight of the military weapons and the room that it freed up, the normal crew limit of 17 to 19 has been greatly expanded, allowing the Dazzlings and their pride, plus crew to all fit in the airship.

And there's a surprise that they're using a Zeppelin? Despite being a very obsolete in wartime. I still love the gigantic hot air balloon ship, just as long as it wasn't fueled by that infamous hydrogen. ( Ex: Hindenburg )

Blacksad looks at the photos of the Dazzlings pride, which the 3 heads of the house share. As unlike the Shimmer pride they do have a king. A young pale furred man name Izak who according to news clippings came from an abandoned village in Russia where he was found as he was trying to make it south, where one of the Dazzlings found him. He managed to somehow make all 3 Dazzlings to fall for him and they made him their king. While he is the king of the pride, it’s clear that the 3 queens are in charge.

Then there are the crew of the zeppelin some of who are apart of the pride.

Turmoil, a harshly beautiful noblewoman who is the commander of the air force.

Amelia, the captain of an old sailing ship, Legacy. A merchant vessel that has been serving under the Dazzlings house for generations. Her crew are also apart of the pride, Panthera, Eris, Kuune, Melwin, Chaika, and Durel.

They and the other crew members who are all females operate the zeppelin 41 crew members in all.

Asagi and her sister Sakura Igawa (Taimanin)

Shiranui Mizuki and her daughter Yukikaze (Taimanin)

Rinko Akiyama (Taimanin)

Murasaki Yatsu (Taimanin)

Su Jinglei (Taimanin)

Emily Simmons (Taimanin)

Kurenai Shinganji (Taimanin)

Asuka Koukawa (Taimanin)

Kirara Onisaki (Taimanin)

Noah Brown (Taimanin)

Tokiko Fuuma (Taimanin)

Shizuru Kousaka (Taimanin)

Maika Kamimura (Taimanin)

Rin Uehara (Taimanin)

Sora Kannazuki (Taimanin)

Nagi Momochi (Taimanin)

Saika Fuuma (Taimanin)

Shisui Amamiya (Taimanin)

Hebiko Aishu (Taimanin)

Mai Nanase (Taimanin)

Homura Sanada (Taimanin)

Rinka Shido (Taimanin)

Momoko Maezono (Taimanin)

Kaworu Tekkain (Taimanin)

Shizuka Mori (Taimanin)

Uraru Mekamura (Taimanin)

Amane Fuuma (Taimanin)

Natsume Amadare (Taimanin)

Ayame Makishima (Taimanin)

Annerose Vajra (Taimanin)

Aina Winchester (Taimanin)

For the passengers the limit is 24 counting the Dazzlings and the lone king.

Farah and her two daughters Opala and Osira. (Legend of Queen Opala)

Yoruichi

Haineko

Polly Esther

Francine

Dee Dee

Cleopatra and her sister Arsinoe (Metal Slug Attack)

Hemet (Metal Slug Attack)

Hathol (Metal Slug Attack)

Sharifa (Metal Slug Attack)

Ramal (Metal Slug Attack)

Alma (Metal Slug Attack)

Jess Hannah (Nintendo Wars)

Sonja Asuka (Nintendo Wars)

Sasha Ewan (Nintendo Wars)

Nell and her sister Rachel Catherine (Nintendo Wars)

You must love Queen Opala and Taimanin as well?

It is nice that they actually have a King by the likes of Izak. Like to see some very good straight sex from them eventually. Just like how the Kyonyuu Fantasy Protagonists like Lute/Ryuuto ( KF 1, Gaiden 1 and 2, Gaiden 2 After -Osutashia no Yabou. ), Ruin ( KF 2, If. ), Julinas ( KF 3, If. ), Astor ( KF 4 ), Hende Tomoru ( Kyonyuu Majo ), etc..


P.S. I know that the Dazzlings basically have diplomatic immunity. But why is Blacksad still investigating them anyways? Despite the warning from his higher-ups?

He’s a private investigator and is only hired by the police force

The internet would be THE worst thing for religion but people only look up what supports the religion that they are told from the pulpit. The Abrahamic God, before Abraham showed up was just another Zues stand-in.

Welp, Pony Celestia's reputation is forever destroyed.

I highly doubt the likes of her sister/Luna, Cadence, Shining, and especially Twilight and her friends will ever "rescue" or forgive Celestia for a long ass time.

Especially if Twilight's own parents and the other's own family members want to intervene eventually to forced their daughters/granddaughter/sister; the Mane Six to not do anything really stupid against Sunset.


P.S. I know that you're doing the "Twilight is blindly loyal" cliche once again. But maybe finally learning the truth about Celestia will finally break through her "devotion" and actually make her own choices for once.

P.S.S. And please, for the Love of God. DON'T make that over cliche example of "cleaning the sewers with your tongue" in this story for Twilight's blind devotion/loyalty. :facehoof:

You already overused it in The Boys storyline, you don't have to do it again in this one.


Besides, I already GIVE you MANY different, and rather brutal and life-threatening examples on how far Twilight might be willing to go, but in the end she will never do it because of her moral views. Use those suggestions instead, finally use them for once please.

These specific comments I made that are ironically from The Boys storyline;

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P.S.S.S. It does suck that you didn't waited to have Sunset get way "better" technology and weapons from future era's like World War II and the Cold War/Vietnam War.

But considering that despite having rather old World War I's/Late 1920's tech., weapons, and vehicles. Sunset STILL took over Equestria by storm anyways!? Thought this would be a rather "fair fight" unlike the other stories, but guess not.


I mean wow, I know that the guards suck, but damn!


So, despite rushing this to take over Equestria already. What is Sunset going to do now? Is she going to reveal her true royal and "alien/extraterrestrial" nature to the rest of the cat world?

How would Sunset fare against future conflicts like World War II and the Cold War/Vietnam War anyways???

But please don't make her just automatically to easily win those brutal conflicts just like with Equestria. Cat's aren't gonna be like total pussies like the ponies!!!!! ( Find it ironic and poetic from saying that? )

Because, you're just going to turn her into a dang Mary Sue by this point.

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The setting is in the days of gangsters, and speakeasies like in the comics, which I like. You should read it. I started right after seeing the pilot cartoon

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And working on the aftermath idea board of what to write next.

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Okay, but that still doesn't answer how Sunset will handle future conflicts like those in the cat world? And hopefully don't make her easily win them like a Mary Sue.


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Did you read my first comment of the day? Because you didn't link it like my second one?

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Which specifically?

I do talk a lot in these comments, so I don't really know which you're referring of "that's been done"?

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The twilight thing.

I’m still working on the aftermath and how Sunset rules over her new kingdom and how Earth reacts to magic and that gods can be summon and how the faiths power base falls apart now that anyone with the right know how hare able to summon their god and talk with them not blindly following the words of any holy man.

Was that really necessary with the "Yahweh" bit. :ajbemused: 😑 😒

Why keep dragging something personally complicated like religion into your fics?

P.S. Don't want to sound personal or "accusing" ya, but reading this "anti-religion" bashing sounds like you're a atheist?

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