A Gleaming New Role To Play.

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #1 · Mar 11th, 2023 · 2 · 2 ·

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what a twist indeed! i admit, while enjoying the story, I kinda had a bad feeling from the start and description.

Also, I noticed at the start, you switched number of Zakia#S crotch, that mistake, or did I get something wrong?

Synful

Synful #2 · Mar 11th, 2023 · · 2 ·

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Yep! I suspect that twist will go unknown by a lot that assume based on the description, but I'm hoping some pick up on the word play with the title. Also thank you for taking the time to read it instead of downvoting it just off the description alone.

I did? I shouldn't have, should have two of them. Can you show me where you found the errors so I can correct them?

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #3 · Mar 11th, 2023 · 1 · 2 ·

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ah, pardon i seem to have misread something here

Zakia groaned, his hips bucking a bit as Gleaming her slow but dedicated movements across his sheath, his equine cocks slowly emerging from his sheath, each was daunting on their own but combined... it would destroy most mares for the rest of their lives.

“Oh yes... oh yes... mmmmm... mmm... mmmmm...” Gleaming moaned, her hands rubbing along his thighs, his legs shaking slightly as she kept up her ministrations, taking one of his long dicks in her mouth and bobbing her head up and down on the flaccid member as best as she could, feeling that heavy and meaty girth resting in her mouth as she sucked and swirled her tongue around it, tasting her lords powerful tool.

“That’s a good girl... that’s a good pony... suck them... taste them. See what you’ve been missing all these years and what you’ll be getting a lot more often from this day forward.” Zakia said as Gleaming moaned in response, her head bobbing faster as she got lost in the sensations coursing through her body, her hands stroking and groping the massive dick that were in her mouth while grinding her boobs around the other, as it snugly slipped between them. Leaving neither of her master’s impressive tools unattended as she serviced him. She knew many tricks to please him, some that Cadance used on her before all this... where is she, anyway?

A low hum of magic caught Zakia by surprise as the flare of magic came to life, the seal ring on her horn crumbling to dust. It was both frightening and arousing at such an act. Though the magic that formed seemed to coat her lips, sitting on them like lipstick. Her lips met his flesh, first once across his cock head, another on the side and another and another. A flurry of kisses laced with magic brought the Zebra Lord a unique type of pleasure he had never experienced before.

I did not see the double meaning and got a bit confused when only one was addressed later on.

the bad feeling let me up it this way. If you got an OC gifted with that exact background as in your story

Synful

Synful #4 · Mar 11th, 2023 · · 2 ·

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No worries.

Zakia is kinda my default for Zebra stories.

I hope you can enjoy future stories I do as well

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #5 · Mar 11th, 2023 · 1 · 2 ·

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i am sure i will.

and actually, double cocks is something I find intersting

Synful

Synful #6 · Mar 11th, 2023 · · 2 ·

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Yeah, It's a something I do as well. Allows you to do things with a character you normally would need others force and makes it a fun draw point for both readers and characters involved.

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #7 · Mar 11th, 2023 · 1 · 2 ·

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mhm, to me, makes DP (double penetration) easier

Earth Writer

Earth Writer #8 · Mar 11th, 2023 · 3 · ·

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Oh, loving consensual Zebradom, *plus* rule 63? Not enough of this stuff for sure.

Honestly, while I appreciate that you wanted to keep the illusion going there, I'm not sure it does you many favors. Would have passed this by if I hadn't decided to check the comments.

X 865

X 865 #9 · Mar 11th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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Great job! Will the hot springs sequel ever come out?

Synful

Synful #10 · Mar 11th, 2023 · · ·

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Yeah, It was fun.

It doesn't do me any favors, I knew it would get instantly hated on some but that's fine. I wrote it for myself and shared it here so others might enjoy it. I mean look at my comments down below that are kind and civil but has downvotes. People tend to dislike Zebradom by default. oh well. lol.

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