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THATS UNAUTHORIZED. *shades*

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Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle go for a picnic in the Whitetail Woods.

A short story for a mini contest whose rules were "1 sentence of dialogue, 500-1000 words" I'm kind of sad that this site doesn't let us publish stories with 500 words, but I understand.


title: Nighttime Meal (in Latin)

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 18 )

Yes, the first two words are Latin.

Twinkie? Instaupvote.

Twinkie Pie ship! Instant like! I will check this out. It shouldn't take me long.

1383419>>1383399

Thank you both! This means a lot to me, and I appreciate it!

Nice. I do like this. It reminds me of one of my friends...

1384335 not sure how to respond to that? Thank you for reading, and commenting too!

1385585 Thank you! Also, thanks for watching me :twilightsmile:

1384449 Sorry. I'm just a hopeless lovesick.

This deserves one of my highest and punniest words: Awwwwd'awwrable!

Also, This short and sweet little fic gets a happy Pinkie, a 'stache and a kissy Dash!

:pinkiehappy::moustache::rainbowkiss:

Yes. this pleases me.

1378323
You're right; not OCD, CDO. All the letters are in alphabetical order like they should be. :pinkiecrazy:
However, this sentence makes no sense to me:

She's learned a few tricks over the endless nights of adventuring through countless books as she lives in a library.

Wouldn't it be:

She'd learned a few tricks over the endless nights of adventuring through countless books, as she lives in a library.

Very nice. I like it. FAV FOR YOU!

1396645 Your right! Thanks for pointing out the grammatical mistake, and thanks for fav'ing. :3

1397055
Of course. A story as great as this deserves it.
And remember, if ever you need a story edited, PM me.
-hands business card-

1399288 Hey! I was on a word limit. I couldn't make any progression as to why they were in love :c. Thanks for enjoying it though!

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