In this alternate version of MLP a majority of magic had been drained resulting in the collapse of pony society and ponies forming herds to survive out in the lands outside the now collapsed Canterlot and Ponyville. Among these herds is one made of Twilight Sparkle, CMCs, Rainbow Dash, Applejack and Fluttershy others being added later on.
Finding 3 dragon eggs in the wild the herd see this as an opportunity to possibly raise an new generation of friendly dragons. Unfortunately for them a species called the seaponies/hippogriffs want them which results in battle between them.
Based on Angry Birds Classic
Chapters (3)
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I'm trying to think of an original chapter involving mainly Pinkie And Skystar and of course it'll be another one Seapony plan to steal the dragons eggs but with Pinkie as the main character and the rest of the herd playing a smaller role
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Guess you'll have to make your owns.
Pinkie can inflate herself because she just can. Mixed with a sparkle explosive ability for extra
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The great eggscape
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I accidentally deleted chapter 1. the original off duty. Still working on poached eggs and the New Home part in Hocus Pocus and what do you mean by broke fimfiction
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•It says Off Duty was added yesterday but I dont remember at all it being added yesterday
• Comments were still 26 till later they drop to 6
• Story just disappears from the main page
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I accidentally deleted chapter 1, the original off duty and i forgot that it also deletes the comments and Poached Eggs replaced the original Hocus Pocus and Hocus Pocus is a new chapter all together
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I did what you said i reworked the story
what
I thought of her ability as a super strengh sockwave explosion.
She uses her super strengh and slams her hooves on the ground to create a shockwave explosion.
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Episodes I'll Never Do (Most of them won't work, Some i just don't personally like they're boring and uncreative
Where's My Crown
Not Without My Helmet
Pig Possessed
Battling Butlers
Night Of The Living Pork
Sweets Of Doom
The Butler Did It
Sneezy Does It (Debating)
Porcula (Debating)
Pig Talent
Boulder Bro
Pig Wig
Operation Opera
Jingle Yells (Debating)
Chuck Mania
Party Ahoy
Slappy Go Lucky
(Probably Others I'm Forgetting)
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Well what do you think of the other's abilities Twilight's Battle Cry, Rainbow's supersonic flight etc
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I was gonna go with changelings but then i realized that their shape shifting ability will make stealing the dragon eggs way to easy. And plus seaponies are the only other creatures besides changelings to have a King Or Queen
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I'm trying my best unlike spongebob episodes (MLP Edition that inspired me to write this) which are 10 minutes angry birds toons episodes are only 2 minutes 45 seconds. Without all the filler text the chapters would only be 500 words or even less. There's only so much you can do with a web series.
The cover needs to be more interesting
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Done best one I could find that doesn't show the Angry Birds characters ponyified or the MLP characters birdified
oh my gosh this is amazing gimme more, i loveeed angry birds
Hey there. I have to admit that, while I can understand why you didn't go with the Changelings for the Pigs (though they COULD play the pigs over in the analogue to the "Stella series" if you decide to do that), it seems unfair to stick the Hippogriffs with the Adaptational Villainy stick. Still, I'm not one to let little things stop me from enjoying a good story and I can respect that you are doing the best you can with what you have. Also, good stuff on the universe backstory as well as the action.
And I could see Maud making an excellent Terrance. She DOES have the strength, stoicism and occasional Off-Screen Teleportation for the role for if and when you get to the episodes that NEED a Terrance analogue.
But that's for later, after all. On to the next chapter.
Again, this was a pretty good chapter with great work on the (alternate) characterizations, action, humor, general wrap-up and future chapter set-up. Plus, a good reason for using the hippogriffs
And, in the outside chance you DO decide to tackle the Stella series, some possible casting:
Gold Island: Crystal Island.
Stella: (Pegasus) Cadance (with Shining Armor as an extra)
Gale: Trixie
Gold Island Pigs: Changelings.
Handsome Pig: Thorax
Poppy: Vinyl
Willow: Octavia
Dahlia: Sunburst (with Starlight Glimmer as an extra)
Lucca: Flurry Heart (aged up to the Crusaders' age AND as an Earth Pony)
Golden Egg: Alicorn Amulet.
Of course, I CAN respect if you DON'T like the idea and will profusely apologize for wasting your time.
Anyway, on to the next chapter.
Another well done chapter with some great alternate characterizations, humor and general wrap-up (including to the nod about the number of times the Pig City got destroyed).
If you decide to do something based on "the Miracle of Life"
Twilight: You have GOT to be kidding me! First of all, ponies are NOT egg-laying animals. That's for assorted birds, insects, reptiles and marsupials. Second, reproduction requires male AND female - it doesn't work with the SAME gender.
Skystar: Oh, well. Even if we got it wrong, it still serves our purposes by getting two of those eggs' protectors out of the way.
Twilight: That - makes a lot more sense, actually.
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Rainbow: How do we get out of here, Twi?
Twilight: Good question, Rainbow. This cage saps JUST enough of my magic to keep me from teleporting us out of here. And the bars are made out a metal too strong for me to bend with my telekinesis. Wait a minute. That stone kind of resembles an egg. If you can swing us close enough, I might be able to catch it and we can use it to trick the guards into helping us escape.
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But, again, I can kind of understand if you don't like the idea.
On to the next chapter.
Again, the exchanges, characterizations, action, humor and general wrap-up were all well done. Certainly appreciated the flashback to this universe's version of Twilight and Rainbow's first meeting as well as the use of a couple of the Changelings (including the mention of history concerning them). An OC Chaos Lord was also a good touch that made sense.
On to the next chapter.
Another well done spin on this chapter with extra information providing better detail of the situation. Again, the exchanges, (alternate) characterizations, action and general wrap-up are pretty well done.
And, on to the next chapter once again.
Again, the exchanges, (alternate) characterizations, action, extra information and general wrap-up are rather well done. While, like in the actual episode, I can appreciate the cleverness going into making all those fake eggs, I kind of feel bad for Rainbow running herself ragged because she wasn't in the know until it was too late.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
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I've actually considered The Miracle of Life a few times
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Also only basic magic exists in this universe you were right about the telekinesis but not about the teleportation there's is no teleportation spell in this universe
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I doubt i'll do angry birds stella since it only has 26 episodes and i also feel like the show takes itself too seriously sometimes unlike Angry Birds toons which is more comedic and less lore based
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All right. That's fair.
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Thanks for the correction. But I thought Twilight DID teleport toward the end of "Off-Duty" (though, admittedly, the only other way she could have gotten back to the rest of the Herd in time would be if she were comic book super-speedster level fast, so I suppose that was unavoidable.
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When i first wrote off duty this story didn't have any lore but once i added the basic magic only rule i changed it to her just running back at a speed not even Rainbow Dash could beat
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Gotcha.
And, here's a little something for a VERY slight AU similar to this one, but with some minor, but significant differences.
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Twilight (after Novo comes to her about the info of a mutual enemy they will have to work together against): We're going to have to put a team together. First up, well, she likes to keep things simple, but she is smart enough in practical areas AND has firepower to spare (flashbacks to Applejack accidentally blowing a few things up).
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(after getting Applejack on the team)
Twilight: Next up - well, it is said that time flies. Well, this gal is so fast that time has NOTHING on her. (rings the bell to Rainbow Dash's house. Rainbow is seen grabbing a quick breakfast, milking a cow for a glass of milk, getting in some exercise, slipping into her Wonderbolts uniform and zipping down to meet Twilight, Applejack and Novo in a matter of seconds).
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Twilight: This gal, well, she is a bit on the goofy side, but she IS the only Alicorn that we know.
Celestia: Of course I'll do my best to help, Twilight. What's the mission?
Twilight: We're putting a team together for a dangerous mission to a place called -
Celestia (gasping): Alicorn Island?!
Twilight: You know of the place?
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(after the full team is assembled)
Celestia: Look, this is a mistake. None of you should be here. This mess is MY fault. I'm the only one who deserves to suffer if this goes wrong.
Twilight: What are you talking about?
Celestia: The leader of the enemy Alicorns - Nightmare Moon - her first name is actually Luna - and she's my little sister. I need to face her alone.
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(as it is probably pretty easy to guess, these dialogues are based on the movies [specifically the second one). Celestia is essentially in the role of Mighty Eagle, but a bit less cowardly than the movie version.
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Of course, this is strictly for fun and I will completely respect your right to not like the ideas.
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Actually i'm working on a sequel (Already have a few sequels this is just one of them) the episodes are based on Angry Birds Reloaded The herd and the hippogriffs are gonna team up against a third island after a few episodes (Different creatures) It'll still have aspects from the AB2 movie mainly the Harvey disguise but take away some like Red leaving the group. But also have classic aspects like how before and they get to the island they have to take down structures (Had to find a way for the structure smashing to fit with the main plot)
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Actually Seaquestria and later Mount Aris being destroyed and rebuilt in a different way will be a running gag in the classic episodes (The second part of the gag is based on the fact that in Toons Pig City changed from this military camp looking place to a more civilized village)
Hey there. Once again, you did a really good job on the exchanges, (alternate) characterizations, additional information, humor and general episode wrap-up in all the right places. Terramar just learned the hard way to not underestimate the Crusaders.
If you decide to do something based on El Porkador, you could cast either Iron Will or Garble as basically somebody who is "hired muscle" for the Hippogriffs (even though one is a Minotaur and the other is a Dragon) and DOES prove to be too tough for Twilight, Applejack, Rainbow, Fluttershy and the Crusaders only to be ultimately defeated by the Herd's newest and strongest member - Maud.
But, I will profusely apologize for wasting your time if you don't like the idea.
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Ookie-dookie. Thanks very much for the heads-up on that.
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Just for a heads up I’ve already planned ahead a long time ago. As of right now I’m up to Episode 8 Bad Birdies and I’ve already thought of who to replace Terence and El Porkador
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I was just wondering are you copy and pasting the same response over and over again if you aren’t please try to change it on the next chapter
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Well, to be honest, I'm not intentionally cutting and paste. I just get in a habit of phrasing things in certain ways and that habit is hard to break. Though I will try.
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Do you think you can do one of those for Madame Applejack of Mount Aris (Applejack's opponent is Sky Beak if you know who he is, Any part of battle except the ending), Stalker (Either the guard inspection or dinner scene or both, btw the meal is Seaweed Dumplings),
Sleep Like a Griff (Either the lullaby or sleeping gas attempt or both) , Girffula (When Pinkie Pie meets Griffula/Skystar and when she tries to attack Pinkie as a bat) and Flowing Ambition (Basically bearded ambition except with a flowing mane either the ship scene or midnight snack or both)
These are just a few episodes i'm very excited to write in the future and i would love to see your own take on them
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Two of those I haven't seen yet and the rest I've only seen once each. Still, I'll go over those episodes again and try to come up with some ideas.
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Which ones haven’t you seen yet?
I think the reason why you haven’t seen two of them is because only season 3 episode 1 is one the official playlist even though there’s a whole season 3
One More Detail: Novo’s stalker owns a taco stand more specifically a chicken and fish one. It a reference to how in the actual episode the pigs are eating hot dogs which are made of pork
Well, the two I haven't seen are "Sir Bomb" and "Sleep Like a Hog".
As for Griffula, well, Pinkie could be dressed up like Nightmare Moon (since that's a Halloween/Nightmare Night episode [plus, it's Pinkie; she IS going to be random rather often]).
Plus, I have been able to think of a couple of things:
Either
1. Pinkie comments "As much as I hate wasting good cupcakes, this IS an emergency." as she starts pelting Skystar with the aforementioned cupcakes.
2. Pinkie breaks out her party cannon.
or 3. Pinkie rigs up a giant pinata that looks like an inflated version of her, blindfolds Skystar, spins her around and waits for Skystar to hit the pinata, which is rigged up with industrial strength sneezing power AND itching powder.
For "Stalker", Novo's stalker could be Sonata Dusk (a Siren from the Equestria Girls end of things and one flashback scene in late-Season 7 [she DEFINITELY loves her tacos AND Sirens and Seaponies are fairly similar at least outwardly in Equestria]) for the Guard Inspection scene, Sonata could use her Siren Song to get the guards fighting amongst themselves before Novo spots her. For the dinner, Sonata can be eating the Seaweed Dumplings herself commenting "The chefs didn't do a bad job, not as good as my foldies, but still decent. Certainly too good to waste on a greedy meanie like you."
For "Flowing Ambition", Novo's VERY brightly glowing Mane (courtesy of a special tonic) could be a bit TOO bright in the ship scene and the accident can be caused by too many Hippogriffs being blinded. As for the "midnight snack", it could be a combination of the mane flowing out of control AND being so bright that it keeps everybody else in the palace awake.
And I'll try to come up with some other stuff.