Manehattan is one of Equestria’s wealthiest cities, containing lots of valuable even more than Canterlot and Las Peagsus. But with large amounts of goods comes a large amounts of crime, luckily the city has something that they’re lucky is one their side. A Superhero who goes under the name Underdrake, a dragon with wings, supersonic flight, super strength and heat wave vision.
Before anyone comments no I am NOT trying to plagiarize Dragon Of Steel Underdog might be a parody of Superman but Underdog has it's own villains, format etc
Chapters (3)
Underdog: Spike
Sweet Polly Purebred: Rarity
Simon Bar Sinister: Twilight Sparkle
Cad Lackey: Shining Armor
Hey there. REALLY good job on the dialogue, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked the work on the origin story for Spike/Underdrake and Twilight. And Shining falling under his sister's mind control is definitely a good reason for him to be in the role of an underling. Spike discovering his powers and finding the costume was another great scene, as was the first battle with Twilight.
On to the next chapter.
The work going into Spike's civilian disguise was downright excellent. As was the use of a magic hat being substituted for the phone booth (which makes sense given that phone booths are a lot rarer in the 2020s than in the 1960s). Those bits of more simple heroics (helping Rarity with her cat and stopping that robbery from those wingless dragons [the latter of which is also good foreshadowing for the one in the Riff Raff role]) before the big adventure were rather enjoyable. And, yeah, the Page Turner threat was pretty well handled as well.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
Who will be Overcat?
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. REALLY loved the work going into this adventure. Underdrake's first encounter with Garble (with the latter trying to rob Muffins and finding out about the former being fireproof and bulletproof. The stuff with Garble's gang's failed attempts at robbery and smuggling before the attempts to steal the phoenix eggs with guerrilla war tactics (particularly the sabotage stuff) were pretty well done.
Definitely looking forward to more adventures.